I enjoyed the story, RapeU, loved the woman getting away and the man trapped. :) You may be right about needed some punch to it or something. I can't honestly say I know what would improve the work. It one of things were you just need to read and read until the light bulb blinds you.
I had a longer outline to the story i wrote. But the outline would take me down a road I couldn't go because of the restriction of the single room function. I outlined, and started, a different story which I may complete at some point.
I'm just happy you guys, and especially army of one, is keeping the contest going.
Editing my post, sorry RapeU, I did enjoy your story, but I was thinking of Escape Room by EnabranTain when I made the comment. I'll have a read through again on yours. Forgive my stupidity, please, RapeU.