Hello to all!

I am The Wild Card.

For context, I am in my mid-20s and Male.

I have been reading Extreme and Gangrape stories on RavishU for a while now, and I have finally decided to join the community as of yesterday. As an introduction into the type of gore porn erotica that I am into, I have written a story over the past few days and I have posted it here as of 15 minutes ago, as well as on DolcettGirls Forum as of yesterday! I am excited to hear feedback! Criticisms are welcome.

This story is over 50 pages on Word, and over 19 000 words long! I have put many hours of effort into it, and would appreciate anything you can tell me, from congratulatory remarks to improvements on my writing style!

Sincerely,

-The Wild Card


P.S. THIS IS JUST FANTASY, AND DOES NOT DEPICT MY PERSONAL THOUGHTS ON WOMEN. WOMEN ARE AMONG THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT CREATURES TO GRAZE THE SURFACE OF THIS PLANET. NOT A SINGLE ONE OF US WOULD BE HERE WITHOUT WOMEN TODAY. EQUALITY BETWEEN MEN AND WOMEN IS PARAMOUNT IN MY LIFE, AS WELL AS IN THE COMMENTS OF THIS THREAD. THIS STORY IS HIGHLY DEGRADING, SO PLEASE BE CAREFUL. ALSO, I DO NOT INCITE, NOR DO I CONDONE VIOLENCE AGAINST ANYONE. PLEASE BE ABLE TO DRAW THE LINE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY. OTHERWISE, THIS STORY IS NOT FOR YOU!

P.P.S. FOR THOSE WHO'D LIKE TO SKIP TO THE ACTION, START ON CHAPTER 3. AND FOR THOSE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR THE BEGINNING OF THE SLAVE'S TORTUROUS JOURNEY, BEGIN ON CHAPTER 4. I AM MAINLY LOOKING FOR READER ENGAGEMENT! IF YOU'D LIKE ME TO DELETE THE CHAPTERS AND POST CHAPTER BY CHAPTER, SAY EVERY 6-7 HOURS, I WILL HAPPILY DO SO! CRITICISM IS WELCOME AND ENCOURAGED!

[The Claire]

Hey,

I am sorry that you got neither here nor for your story in the extreme subforum a reply so far. I usually try to give more detailled feedback to writers here, but these extreme stories just aren't for me. :/ But I can imagine the frustration you must feel having written such a long story and getting no feedback at all.

If you're willing to give this forum another chance and maybe at some point want to write a less extreme gang rape story, I'd be happy to take a look! :) Anyway, just wanted to let you know that I feel your pain.

[Brek]

I too am not really the target audience, but if I get some free time I'll try to give some feedback.