Hello to all!

I am The Wild Card.

For context, I am in my mid-20s and Male.

I have been reading Extreme and Gangrape stories on RavishU for a while now, and I have finally decided to join the community as of yesterday. As an introduction into the type of gore porn erotica that I am into, I have written a story over the past few days and I have posted it here as of 15 minutes ago, as well as on DolcettGirls Forum as of yesterday! I am excited to hear feedback! Criticisms are welcome.

This story is over 50 pages on Word, and over 19 000 words long! I have put many hours of effort into it, and would appreciate anything you can tell me, from congratulatory remarks to improvements on my writing style!


P.S. THIS IS JUST FANTASY, AND DOES NOT DEPICT MY PERSONAL THOUGHTS ON WOMEN. WOMEN ARE AMONG THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT CREATURES TO GRAZE THE SURFACE OF THIS PLANET. NOT A SINGLE ONE OF US WOULD BE HERE WITHOUT WOMEN TODAY. EQUALITY BETWEEN MEN AND WOMEN IS PARAMOUNT IN MY LIFE, AS WELL AS IN THE COMMENTS OF THIS THREAD. THIS STORY IS HIGHLY DEGRADING, SO PLEASE BE CAREFUL. ALSO, I DO NOT INCITE, NOR DO I CONDONE VIOLENCE AGAINST ANYONE. PLEASE BE ABLE TO DRAW THE LINE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY. OTHERWISE, THIS STORY IS NOT FOR YOU!

P.P.S. FOR THOSE WHO'D LIKE TO SKIP TO THE ACTION, START ON CHAPTER 3. AND FOR THOSE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR THE BEGINNING OF THE SLAVE'S TORTUROUS JOURNEY, BEGIN ON CHAPTER 4. I AM MAINLY LOOKING FOR READER ENGAGEMENT! IF YOU'D LIKE ME TO DELETE THE CHAPTERS AND POST CHAPTER BY CHAPTER, SAY EVERY 6-7 HOURS, I WILL HAPPILY DO SO! CRITICISM IS WELCOME AND ENCOURAGED!

Hello to all!

I am The Wild Card.

For context, I am in my mid-20s and Male.

I have been reading Extreme and Gangrape stories on RavishU for a while now, and I have finally decided to join the community as of yesterday. As an introduction into the type of gore porn erotica that I am into, I have written a story over the past few days and I have posted it here as of 15 minutes ago, as well as on DolcettGirls Forum as of yesterday! I am excited to hear feedback! Criticisms are welcome.

This story is over 50 pages on Word, and over 19 000 words long! I have put many hours of effort into it, and would appreciate anything you can tell me, from congratulatory remarks to improvements on my writing style!


P.S. THIS IS JUST FANTASY, AND DOES NOT DEPICT MY PERSONAL THOUGHTS ON WOMEN. WOMEN ARE AMONG THE MOST BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT CREATURES TO GRAZE THE SURFACE OF THIS PLANET. NOT A SINGLE ONE OF US WOULD BE HERE WITHOUT WOMEN TODAY. EQUALITY BETWEEN MEN AND WOMEN IS PARAMOUNT IN MY LIFE, AS WELL AS IN THE COMMENTS OF THIS THREAD. THIS STORY IS HIGHLY DEGRADING, SO PLEASE BE CAREFUL. ALSO, I DO NOT INCITE, NOR DO I CONDONE VIOLENCE AGAINST ANYONE. PLEASE BE ABLE TO DRAW THE LINE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY. OTHERWISE, THIS STORY IS NOT FOR YOU!

P.P.S. FOR THOSE WHO'D LIKE TO SKIP TO THE ACTION, START ON CHAPTER 3. AND FOR THOSE WHO ARE LOOKING FOR THE BEGINNING OF THE SLAVE'S TORTUROUS JOURNEY, BEGIN ON CHAPTER 4. I AM MAINLY LOOKING FOR READER ENGAGEMENT! IF YOU'D LIKE ME TO DELETE THE CHAPTERS AND POST CHAPTER BY CHAPTER, SAY EVERY 6-7 HOURS, I WILL HAPPILY DO SO! CRITICISM IS WELCOME AND ENCOURAGED!