Author Topic: Detention {Gang}  (Read 22334 times)

Offline Corvid
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Re: Detention
« Reply #60 on: November 10, 2020, 12:23:23 PM »
An interesting conclusion. I hadn't suspected that what she was undergoing was a further part of her training. And that her stepfather is being made a part of her breakdown is a clever addition.

It's been enjoyable watching another author play within what I had created, Beater. I'm glad you took up the task.

Offline Beater

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Re: Detention
« Reply #61 on: November 11, 2020, 07:26:35 AM »
Thank you Corvid. I figured the cabal would want to put their slaves through a trial run first just to judge their performance. No longer innocent came up with the idea of involving her stepfather.

Thanks again for giving me permission to write this, I had a lot of fun playing with the world you made.

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Re: Detention
« Reply #62 on: January 23, 2025, 11:55:40 AM »
I really like it. Thanks!

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Excellent and well written
« Reply #63 on: February 02, 2025, 10:50:38 PM »
As a newcomer to this forum, I'm just now finishing this excellent story, Beater. Thank you for writing this...years ago!