Author Topic: Blaze  (Read 372 times)

Offline Damp Kitten

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Blaze
« on: October 11, 2024, 05:18:33 PM »

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BLAZE


My lover’s gaze is blazing sun

as down abandoned beach I run

in search of shade,

of shrouded sky –

I shan’t escape his searing eye.

 

Alas, the faster that I try

to flee the warmth of his embrace

the further still I’m lost until

my heart surrenders to the chase.

 

My lips surrender to the taste

of sweet submission’s knotted twine

around my wrists and ankles laced

across his bed – then from behind

 

I feel his strength, his solemn hand;

the thundered crash of reprimand

against my cheek, across my sex.

And as he swings, my muscles flex

 

a tightly dimpled glowing ass

that flinches with his every pass.

His fiery fingers singe my mound

and melt my cotton candied down

 

till dripping syrup soaks the sheets.

Resistance fails; restraint retreats.

His tongue against my throbbing pearl

has lashed my gash

has dipped and swirled.

 

While pink ambrosia fills the air,

my essence gushes everywhere!

Then standing tall, this gallant steed

impales my well of aching need.

 

Relentless Thrusts – Euphoric Pain

My core is pouring out his name!

Drained and sated, love’s lament

hath soothed the fire of discontent.

 

I weep where weeping’s wants are learned

and bask in everlasting burn…
« Last Edit: October 28, 2024, 10:50:42 PM by Damp Kitten »
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Re: Blaze
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2024, 05:42:38 PM »
damn... pun intended, you're on fire with this content

Are you posting an archive of your works or have you been posting/creating as you go?
It's a mesmerizing imagery of words, love it!

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Re: Blaze
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2024, 06:45:28 PM »
More proof that you young lady are a true wordsmith compared to the rest of us here. Such imagery conjures by your words excites the reader to wonder is this a poem or a retelling of a real life event!

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When I get around to it, I'll write

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Re: Blaze
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2024, 10:25:39 PM »
damn... pun intended, you're on fire with this content

Are you posting an archive of your works or have you been posting/creating as you go?
It's a mesmerizing imagery of words, love it!

So, poetry is kind of my thing, PR3 - if you read my post in the new member introductions.  I just don't post much of it here since very few read it.  Still, I'm super thrilled you like it and are following me!  That makes me happy!  Thank you!   What sorts of poems do you like?
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Re: Blaze
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2024, 11:01:02 PM »
More proof that you young lady are a true wordsmith compared to the rest of us here. Such imagery conjures by your words excites the reader to wonder is this a poem or a retelling of a real life event!

Merit to be awarded when allowed

Awe!  You are so sweet.  I'm so glad you like this.  I've had two lovers who were seriously into bdsm, so you could say I've had experience.  I'm a submissive at heart, but I occasionally turn the tables.  I once seduced a med tech that was working at my clinic - a small blonde girl who looked adolescent - I'd like to think she was that young and malleable.  I followed her home after incidentally meeting up at the grocery.  She lived alone in an apartment, having just broken up with her boyfriend.  We had late afternoon drinks in her kitchen, and I knew she was bi curious.  I turned her on with a story about getting raped by another woman. 

She later admitted rather hesitantly that I had previously pissed her off when I flirted with her man the day we first met.  By then, we both had a buzz.  I told her I should have fucked the guy just to see how she'd react.  It sort of made her mad.  I could see it in her face.  I went on to fake an admission we had actually had an affair behind her back.  "He said I was a much better fuck than you, Shelby," I told her.  That was it.  She lunged at me.

I'm not a blackbelt or anything, but my dom at the clinic is a cage fighter in her off time, an expert at mixed martial arts.  She has taught me some things, and I was more than a match for little Shelby.  I nearly choked her completely out, dragged her to the bedroom, stripped her and tied her crossways on the bed.  I looked through her closet and pulled out the heaviest belt she had, then whipped her white ass till it was blistered.  Yeah, I sort of lost control.

Amazingly, we became very good friends with benefits for a while.  I also clarified that I was jerking her chain about her boyfriend.  We never met up or had an affair.  Shelby loved it when I was rough with her.  She wanted me to tie her up.  Then, my steady 'dom' from the office found out.  Her name is Ashley - and she was NOT amused.  It did not go well... but that's a story for another time.
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Re: Blaze
« Reply #5 on: October 18, 2024, 08:11:18 AM »
damn... pun intended, you're on fire with this content

Are you posting an archive of your works or have you been posting/creating as you go?
It's a mesmerizing imagery of words, love it!

So, poetry is kind of my thing, PR3 - if you read my post in the new member introductions.  I just don't post much of it here since very few read it.  Still, I'm super thrilled you like it and are following me!  That makes me happy!  Thank you!   What sorts of poems do you like?

Yes, your poetry made me go back and read your intro for some context.

As far as poems go, I like the surprise.  I love how you take something seemingly random and innocent, like a carnival, and expound upon a scorching hot concept around it.

I have to admit, being intrigued by the notion of someone 'exploited' into reading erotic content out loud in public.  So the notion of reading erotic poetry to a judgemental audience...  There's all sorts of ideas that tickle my brain these days, like perhaps an investigative reporter forced to detail her degradation by her perverted captors, and forced to tell/video it is one story idea I've wanted to try.

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Re: Blaze
« Reply #6 on: October 27, 2024, 03:27:06 PM »
damn... pun intended, you're on fire with this content

Are you posting an archive of your works or have you been posting/creating as you go?
It's a mesmerizing imagery of words, love it!

So, poetry is kind of my thing, PR3 - if you read my post in the new member introductions.  I just don't post much of it here since very few read it.  Still, I'm super thrilled you like it and are following me!  That makes me happy!  Thank you!   What sorts of poems do you like?

Yes, your poetry made me go back and read your intro for some context.

As far as poems go, I like the surprise.  I love how you take something seemingly random and innocent, like a carnival, and expound upon a scorching hot concept around it.

I have to admit, being intrigued by the notion of someone 'exploited' into reading erotic content out loud in public.  So the notion of reading erotic poetry to a judgemental audience...  There's all sorts of ideas that tickle my brain these days, like perhaps an investigative reporter forced to detail her degradation by her perverted captors, and forced to tell/video it is one story idea I've wanted to try.

That's a pretty cool idea.  Thanks for checking my poems.  They don't get a lot of burn around here.  I'm so glad you like them!

xoxo
Meg