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Men at War {Gang}
« on: October 30, 2024, 03:14:27 PM »
Links to the individual chapters of Men at War:

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I felt like writing something so absurd that it is borderline comical. The result is the introduction to "Men at War", a somewhat misleading title as I have to admit... Let me know what you think about the setting.

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The following is a work fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of rape in the real world.
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Introduction



   “Jimmy, live stream starts in… 3,… 2,… 1,… “

A quick nod to the cameraman, then he began.

   “Welcome everybody to our stream. And boy, do we have a treat for you today! But first, let me introduce our group for our new viewers.”

Jimmy was naked except for a Jordan Peterson mask similar in style to the Guy Fawkes mask that has become synonymous with the hacktivist collective Anonymous. Only his eyes weren’t covered by the mask. He stood in a woman’s bedroom. The bed was covered by a transparent veil, hiding and not hiding at the same time the body of a woman on the bed.

   “We are the men’s rights activist group known as Men at War. We fight for the reestablishment of the natural order between the sexes in an attempt to stop and reverse the moral decay of modern society brought forth by feminism.”

Jimmy presented his organization’s mission statement with the enthusiasm of a sports commentator.

   “Besides our direct forms of political protest – you might remember last month’s public masturbation protest where we got a 1000 men to cum all over Judith Butlers feminist propaganda pamphlet Gender Trouble before returning the book to the library – besides those protests, we also offer the service of exorcism to our supporters. Such an exorcism is what you will witness here today.”

Men at War has recently garnered media attention by conducting radical forms of public protest, like the mass burning of feminist literature or men ejaculating on feminist memorials.

   “We believe that there is no amount of feminist indoctrination that can’t be fucked out of a woman. If you know a woman who has been infected by the woke mind virus and you want to save her, you can hire us. For prices varying from only 1,499$ for the basic program to our premium deluxe package for 24,999$, you can exorcise the feminism out of a girlfriend walking down a dark path, a sister who has lost her way or a boss who is just a pain in the ass.”

Holding the microphone with one hand, Jimmy pointed to another man still standing out of frame with the other.

   “This is Jerome, one of our professional exorcists.”

Another naked man wearing nothing but a Peterson mask stepped into the frame.

   “Jerome, it’s good to see you. How are you doing?”

Jimmy held the microphone closer to Jerome’s face.

   “I’m glad to be here, Jimmy. But I’m not gonna lie, I’m still a bit camera shy…”

While Jimmy and Jerome shared a few moments of friendly banter, more and more messages started to pop up in chat as the number of live viewers exceeded a 1000.

   ‘Wait, is this real?”
   ‘Now there’s two naked dudes. What is going on?’
   ‘Does exorcism mean what I think it does?’
   ‘I’ve seen them stream before. Their exorcisms are poggers!’
   ‘Jerome’s cock is huge!’


Jimmy started to question Jerome.

   “But enough about your performance anxiety. Can you explain what the basic package will get our viewers?”

Jerome proceeded to explain Men at War’s exorcism service.

   “For the basic package, we snatch a feminist right from the street and show her a good time then and there. Imagine the classic encounter in a lonely park at night or a dark alley on her way home. As proof, you get a set of pictures showing the aftermath: Her naked body with a nice cumshot on her stomach, tits or face. Actually, doing these kinds of jobs for our clients was how my career at Men at War started, and ever since… I…”

Jerome’s voice broke as he was overcome by emotion. Jimmy was professional enough to pick up his slag.

   “Well, contrary to what many believe, we from Men at War don’t want men to be emotionless robots. So Jerome, I know how far you’ve come since you joined us. Being here is a special moment for you. Let it all out. The world needs to know how good men like you are hurting and how working for our cause provides them with meaning. Martin, can you show the picture set of Tiffany’s exorcism on stream to illustrate for our viewers what kind of pictures they can expect?”

Jimmy patted Jerome on the back who was slowly recovering from his emotional outburst. Meanwhile, three pictures of a naked woman crying and lying on grass with absent eyes were shown on stream. The first was taken from a distance, showing her entire body. The second one zoomed in between her spread legs, showing her pussy as a gaping hole and her cunt lips swollen from a thorough fucking. The third picture zoomed in on her plump breasts covered in cum.

The number of viewers had only been increasing and the shocking images provoked further comments.

   ‘Come on guys, this is clearly AI!’
   ‘If this is real, this is fucked up…’
   ‘This is fucked up, but also kinda hot…’
   ‘Guys, I think I know her!’


Without addressing the comments Jimmy continued.

   “As Jerome takes a moment to recover, let me tell you what you get as you decide to spend a little more money. You can get video recording of the encounter, multiple camera angles, internal cumshots, multiple exorcists working together, close up shots of cum oozing from her holes, spanking…”

Jimmy kept listing the multitude of ways that their clients could customize the experience if they were willing to pay the associated fees.

   “… and finally all of this can take place in a home invasion setting to make the experience especially memorable for the feminist of your choice. As a rule of thumb, the more effort and risk your wishes require and the higher the production costs, the more you’ll have to pay. If you buy the complete premium package for 19,999$, then we’ll promise you that we’ll make her read a message of your choice renouncing her woke ideology. If we can’t get her to renounce her views, you get your money back!”

Jerome found his composure again.

   “I’m sorry for leaving you alone with the show, Jimmy. But listening to your great explanation of what we have to offer, I couldn’t help but notice. You said that the price goes up to 24,999$ but the complete premium package costs only 19,999$. Now I’m no math wizard, but even I can see that there’s 5k missing. What is that all about?”

Jimmy was silently nodding along as Jerome asked him about the price.

   “As observant as ever, Jerome! For another 5k you can upgrade from the premium package to the premium deluxe package! The premium deluxe package allows you to participate yourself as one of the exorcists. You will get first stab at your chosen feminist’s cunt… or whatever hole you might fancy the most. All other benefits of the premium package are of course included as well. With the premium deluxe package, we promise both you and your chosen feminist a night you will never forget!”

Jimmy winked at the camera while Jerome and the rest of the production crew clapped.

   “With all of that being said, let’s welcome the kind sponsor of today’s stream. The man who bought the premium deluxe package and allowed us to stream this all, including his own participation. Let’s give it away for Jacob!”

Another round of applause filled the room.
« Last Edit: February 04, 2025, 06:32:18 AM by The Claire »

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Re: Men at War
« Reply #1 on: October 30, 2024, 04:07:11 PM »
Well doesn't this have many nasty way to make a story about. Reminds me of one I wrote called "The Job Shadow"
Can't wait until we find out what our captured feminist has done to our exorcist to deserve being fucked back to a so called "reality"

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Re: Men at War
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2024, 12:04:45 AM »
 Why, what a nice and promising start of hopefully much more to come ….   >:D
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« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2024, 03:04:35 AM »
I hope you are going to continue with this story , it's one of the best stories I've read so far .
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« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2024, 09:11:06 AM »
I didn't expect such an eager response. ;) I like the idea of using the Jimmy character to reduce the amount of classic descriptions of what's going on and give it more of a sports commentary vibe. In my opinion, it works surprisingly well. I got to admit, this entire setting makes me laugh while writing it. :D Have fun with chapter 1, Brotherhood!

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Chapter 1 - Brotherhood



A slightly overweight man of average height in his mid forties entered the bedroom. He as well was naked and wearing a mask to hide his identity.

   “Jacob, we’re so glad you’re joining us. Before we reveal the woman you’ve picked for today, do you want to tell us and our audience a bit about her?”

Jimmy offered Jacob to take the microphone. Jacob was clearly nervous and not used to speaking in front of a camera.

   “Uhm, yeah, hi everyone… So, I’m Jacob and the woman I’ve picked… that’s Elizabeth. Elizabeth is the head of the HR department in our firm. She gets on everyone’s nerves, she likes to promote and hire less qualified women over more qualified men and she encourages the other women to treat every bit of harmless flirtation as sexual harassment. By now, no man even dares to enter an elevator with a woman already in it.”

Jimmy and Jerome were giving Jacob sympathetic looks as he gained more and more confidence while speaking.

   “I really liked working for this firm. Even now, I’d say that I like my job. And I thought, before I give up and quit my job…”

Jacob hesitated a moment before he continued.

   “Maybe if she just felt some cock up her cunt, that could humble her and return things to normal.”

Jerome clapped while Jimmy took back the microphone.

   “Well said, my friend. Well, let’s see what we’ve got for today. It is time for Elizabeth’s big reveal!”

Jimmy lifted the veil. The camera moved past him and focused on the naked body of the gagged, blindfolded and unconscious woman.

   “Here we have Elizabeth. At 28 years she has still a few good years ahead of her. The curves on that body are truly to die for and those boobs are probably even too big for these giant shovels that Jerome calls his hands. Truly a prime example of a woman at peak fertility. And these are child bearing hips no doubt. She is just wasted on the labor market with such qualities. But guys, don’t be fooled by the blond hair, she is a natural redhead.”

While he said that last sentence, the camera zoomed in on her crotch, highlighting the red landing strip above her otherwise clean shaven pussy. Jimmy stood next to the bed presenting Elizabeth to the viewers. He started to slowly knead her tits with his free hand careful not to wake her up in the process. He then urged Jacob to come closer.

   “As our guest of honor, would you do us and her the favor of fucking her awake? A few good thrusts should do the job.”

Jacob crawled in between Elizabeth’s legs and started to stroke his cock. But he couldn’t get his dick hard enough for penetration. The chat didn’t take it well.

   ‘What? The old man can’t get it up anymore?’
   ‘I didn’t want to see this fatty fuck her anyway.’
   ‘What a loser. I’m hard just looking at that fine piece of ass.’
   ‘Can’t they let that Jerome guy fuck her? He’s huge…’


Jimmy could read all these comments on a big screen on the wall behind the cameraman.

   “Martin, I’ve seen some nasty comments in chat. Please ban those people.”

The flood of comments making fun of Jacob’s problem started to disappear.

   “This is a prime example of what’s wrong with today’s society. Instead of supporting one of their own in times of need, men are turning on each other so easily. Jacob is just a normal guy, but he decided to literally put his money where his mouth is and do something about what’s wrong with this world. That makes him already a million times braver than these keyboard warriors that wrote those hurtful comments. And now he’s here, not a porn star, not a professional exorcist, but still ready to fuck live on camera. I am not ashamed to admit that the first time I had to fuck in front of a camera, I was having trouble too, and it wasn’t even a live recording! So can we get some Fs in the chat for a struggling brother?”

Many in the chat apologized for how they treated Jacob, then a flood of Fs filled the chat window. The number of viewers had reached 5000 by now and the people complaining how sick this spectacle was got drowned out by the excited masses.

   “Don’t worry, Jacob. This is the perfect opportunity to show the world that not only men support our cause. Can I get a huge round of applause for Lydia?”

Under the applause of the entire production crew, a nude woman in her early twenties walked towards Jacob. She was a stunning brunette with small boobs, wearing her hair in a ponytail. Her delicate frame and girlish charme immediately awoke the protector in every man laying his eyes upon her. She wore a simple black mask hiding only the upper half of her face, mostly her eyes and nose, because she was in need of her mouth. Without hesitation, she knelt between Jacob's legs who was now sitting on the edge of the bed. She gave him an encouraging smile and then she started to suck him off.

   “Lydia, I know it’s rude to talk with your mouth full. But many viewers might be wondering why you’re doing this. Can you tell us why you’re helping Jacob in his moment of need?”

The camera filmed Lydia from behind, clearly showing how wet she was. Drops of liquid dripped out of her pussy and ran down her thighs. Then the video feed cut to her face. Her passionate sucking created alluring slurping sounds that aroused many of the viewers. She stopped sucking for a moment to answer Jimmy’s question but kept jerking Jacob off with her hands.

   “Not too long ago, I was on the path to becoming a hardcore feminist myself. Back then, I couldn’t figure out why I felt so miserable all the time. It was only during a one night stand with a man who truly dominated me in bed that I felt truly filled… I mean fulfilled for the first time in my life.”

A single tear ran down her face as she kept stroking Jacob’s growing cock. The room was quiet as all the people present listened intently to her sad tale. Jimmy offered a few words of consolation.

   “I am so sorry, Lydia, that you had to wait this long to experience what real sex with a man is supposed to be. We as men have failed you. I can’t even blame you for that lesbian phase you had back then after hearing your tale.”

Lydia wiped away the single tear with her free hand. Then she continued to tell her story.

   “In the past, every time I had sex with a man, they asked me what I wanted and whether I liked it. It was almost too late for me, when I finally realized that I just wanted to be given what I needed without being asked first. I can’t speak for you guys, but in my opinion that is the role of a real man in our society: Provide women with what they need, not with what they claim they want, without waiting for them to ask for it.”

As if a great truth had been revealed to them, the men in the room answered Lydia’s words of wisdom with contemplative nodding.

   “The bottom line is, Jimmy, I don’t want my future children to be infected with the same dangerous ideas that sucked the joy out of my life in the past. So should women be raped just for the fun of it? No, of course not. But as a punishment to correct this thinking that causes so much harm... why not? I mean, what is the alternative? The death penalty? Prison for life?”

Lydia returned to sucking Jacob’s dick. He was now fully erect, but Lydia kept blowing him a while longer because she enjoyed it. Jimmy let her do her work. He then stared back into the camera, directly addressing the audience.

   “Thank you, Lydia, for this heartfelt account of your own journey. Her last comments give me the perfect opportunity to address concerns some of you might have. Can’t our exorcism service be abused? Let’s say you just dislike your neighbor and to get back at her you hire us. Well, it doesn’t work like this. We research each woman you suggest for an exorcism. So if you propose to exorcise a loving housewife, loyal and subservient to her husband, mother of 4 children, you can be damn sure that we won’t accept the job.”

Jimmy spoke these words with conviction and the audience behind their screens could sense that.

   “I won’t deny that we derive great pleasure from our work. But we are ultimately serving a greater purpose here. Lydia accepted her role willingly and provides us with her help and her holes. In turn, we provide her with what she needs and protect her from the dangers of this world. This is what a healthy give and take between men and women looks like.”

Jacob was clearly ready now. Lydia got back on her feet and climbed onto his lap, pressing her wet cunt against his shaft in the process. She whispered some last words of encouragement into his ears, winked at him once and then left the stage waving at the camera with a smile on her face. The last thing the viewers saw of her was her suggestively licking her lips that she had wrapped around Jacob’s cock until only moments ago.

   “Damn girl,... I wish I knew what she just told Jacob as much as you do chat. But whatever it was, I agree with her that our boy is ready. Jacob?”

Jimmy gave Jacob an encouraging nod. He crawled back between Elizabeth’s legs, grabbed her hips, pulled her towards him and aligned his cock with the entrance to her cunt. With one violent thrust, the exorcism had finally begun.
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« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2024, 12:43:46 PM »
Well this may just be my opinion but I feel a certain writer may have just presented the reason she becomes attacked by other females here.
A perfectly presented view of how male/female relations could be like! Really liked how you they team had a like minded female help Jacob to prepare for his first time on air. Now would that be considered a "Fluffer?"

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« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2024, 04:30:53 PM »
(...) Really liked how you they team had a like minded female help Jacob to prepare for his first time on air. Now would that be considered a "Fluffer?"

So I don't know what a "Fluffer" is... and I'm a little scared to google it because I'm not sure that I want to know.  :o Is this one of those cases where you google something and you immediately regret the search because of the pictures google shows you?  :confused:

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« Reply #7 on: October 31, 2024, 04:40:57 PM »
quote author=the_claire link=topic=53194.msg577048#msg577048 date=1730410253]
(...) Really liked how you they team had a like minded female help Jacob to prepare for his first time on air. Now would that be considered a "Fluffer?"

So I don't know what a "Fluffer" is... and I'm a little scared to google it because I'm not sure that I want to know.  :o Is this one of those cases where you google something and you immediately regret the search because of the pictures google shows you?  :confused:
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A Fluffer is a female used on a porn set to get the male actor hard to start filming quicker!
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« Reply #8 on: November 01, 2024, 01:36:33 AM »
quote author=the_claire link=topic=53194.msg577048#msg577048 date=1730410253]
(...) Really liked how you they team had a like minded female help Jacob to prepare for his first time on air. Now would that be considered a "Fluffer?"

So I don't know what a "Fluffer" is... and I'm a  >:D :sign_a+: scared to google it because I'm not sure that I want to know.  :o Is this one of those cases where you google something and you immediately regret the search because of the pictures google shows you?  :confused:

A Fluffer is a female used on a porn set to get the male actor hard to start filming quicker!
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Exactly. Couldn’t have said it better.

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« Reply #9 on: November 01, 2024, 10:15:13 AM »
Well, who would have guessed that, I'm learning something. ;) I'm glad a fluffer wasn't some super gross thing. I never thought about it before, but it makes sense that something like that would exist. Filming porn must be hard... (no pun intended).

But let's move on to the next chapter. For this chapter, I developed a rudimentary philosophy that guides our merry band of surprisingly vulnerable activists in their actions. Am I the only one who could actually see some people believing in something like that?  ::)

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Chapter 2 – Three Hole Philosophy





Jacob’s cock had no trouble penetrating the unconscious Elizabeth now that he was fully erect and lubricated with Lydia’s saliva. He took only a brief moment to appreciate the feeling of her cunt wrapping around his cock before he started thrusting with a steady rhythm. It didn’t take long for Elizabeth to wake from her drug induced sleep.

   “Ah, there we have it. A woman waking up from the feeling of an eager cock filling one of her precious holes. What a delight!”

Jimmy crouched next to the bed with the microphone in hand. He removed Elizabeth’s gag but not her blindfold while two other men pinned her arms to the bed. The camera zoomed in on her terrified face and Jimmy put the microphone close to her lips.

   “Where am I? What is this? It hurts! Please help me!”

She was frantically shaking her head trying to make sense of the situation. Jimmy started to explain her current predicament to her.

   “You, my dear, are in your bedroom and you’re currently being punished for being an ungrateful cunt.”

That remark only added to Elizabeth’s confusion.

   “Please, there is something, someone… between my legs and it hurts… Make it stop.”

Jimmy immediately slapped her across her face.

   “You are in no position to give me any commands, woman! But I guess it’s time to let your eyes partake in this spectacle.”

Jimmy removed the blindfold from her face. It took her eyes a moment to adjust to the bright light in the room. She was indeed able to confirm that she was on her bed in her bedroom. But everything else made no sense to her at all. There was a man she didn’t recognize between her legs ferociously fucking her. Around her stood at least half a dozen man, all of them naked except for the weird masks they wore. The face on the masks reminded her of some lunatic anti feminist psychologist who had died a few years ago because of health issues arising from his all meat diet. And then there were several cameras filming her from different angles and the apparent leader of the group shoving a microphone into her face.

   “I… don’t understand… You can’t do this! Stop this, now!”

She continued to scream, becoming unhinged from the pain and the shock, desperately struggling against the stronger arms holding her in place. Jimmy knew how to handle this. He made eye contact with Jerome and nodded towards Elizabeth. That was all it took for Jerome to understand his next assignment. Jimmy got back on his feet and spoke directly into the camera once more.

   “As you can see, dear viewers, Elizabeth is currently not very cooperative. But this is the perfect opportunity for me to present to you our very own three hole philosophy which is essential for every complete exorcism procedure.”

While Jimmy was talking, Jerome climbed onto the bed and knelt above Elizabeth’s head. This gave her a splendid view of his dick while he stroked himself to full length directly in front of her face.

   “We believe the three hole philosophy to be consistent with the ideas in the writings of our great prophet Jordan Peterson. In our teachings, each of a woman’s three holes serves a distinct purpose that she should be reminded of during an exorcism. Let’s start with the obvious, her cunt.”

Jimmy stepped close to Jacob who was grunting and moaning in pleasure by now. The stream showed a close up shot of his cock stretching her cunt. Every time he plunged into her, his thrusts produced a nice wet sound betraying her arousal. The chat did of course notice.

   ‘I shouldn’t watch this… but I can’t stop.’
   ‘Shit, the bitch likes this!’
   ‘Yeah baby, get all creamy for Jacob.’
   ‘Ok, Jacob got more stamina than I thought!’


Jimmy started with the explanation of their philosophy.

   “What is the fundamental purpose of any female? To give birth to children and then raise them. Thus, her cunt’s purpose is to be filled with cum. Therefore, we believe that any fucking of her cunt should end with a good old fashioned creampie. Most feminists deny this simple biological fact. To remind them of their cunt’s true purpose we abide by the following rule: You start fucking her cunt, you cum in her cunt. No switching of holes or premature pulling out allowed! Remind her body of the biological imperative that her feminist teachings made her forget. That covers her cunt, or her breeding hole. Jacob, you think you can manage a nice creampie for the lady?”

Elizabeth could be heard screaming a terrified “No!” in the background. Jacob didn’t expect to be talked to. He had been fucking her with ever increasing intensity, but now some of his insecurities returned.

   “I mean, yeah, sure… if that is ok…?”

Jimmy slowly shook his head.

   “Jacob, Jacob, Jacob… forget what you’ve been taught all these years. You’re the one who decides when and where you cum, not her. And I know what a man looks like who is about to bust a nut in wet cunt that is begging for it. So go for it! But you might not be comfortable with me looking, so let me move on to the second hole while you do your thing.”

As Jimmy moved the microphone back to Elizabeth’s face, it picked up the sound of her cursing and screaming and her pained moans much stronger than before.

   “Elizabeth, our dear Jacob is about to come inside of you. Many men find it quite stimulating if a woman begs them to come inside of them during sex. Would you be so kind to ask Jacob for his seed?”

Elizabeth knew that there was no way out of this for her. But she couldn’t bring herself to debase herself like this.

   “Fuck you, you sick bastard!”

She spat on Jimmy’s face as she insulted him. Jimmy nonchalantly wiped her saliva of his mask and then talked to the audience again.

   “There you have it, a deluded feminist being defiant because of such a simple request. To deal with such behavior, we like to use her second hole, her mouth. Jerome, I see that you’re ready.”

Jerome nodded in response. His giant cock had been hovering over Elizabeth’s face for a while. Now he forced himself into her mouth, muffling her shrill screams and defiant insults in the process. Seeing Jerome use his fat cock to shut her up sent Jacob finally over the edge. He buried himself deep into her snatch and filled her with a load bigger than anything he had produced in years. Jimmy nodded approvingly.

   “Well done, Jacob! And what a nice assist, Jerome! As you can see, dear viewers, pushing Jerome’s massive dick down her throat immediately shut up even this particularly foul mouthed feminist. I don’t know what her screaming sounded like to you, but I definitely prefer this quiet gagging and gurgling we can hear now. Because of this particular side effect, that is rendering a woman unable to speak, we suggest to fill her mouth with cock primarily for disciplinary purposes during an exorcism. There is no better way to teach a defiant woman her place than to shut her up by shoving a cock down her throat.”

Jimmy let the microphone record some of the aforementioned gagging and gurgling for the audience. Meanwhile, Jacob tried to get in a few more thrusts into Elizabeth’s cum filled cunt before he would get soft again.

   “Other than with her cunt, we have no clear guidelines regarding where to cum after fucking her face. You want her to swallow your seed? Be my guest! But note that a nice cumshot on her face or tits has its own appeal. But for now, I guess we’re all happy if Jerome keeps her mouth occupied for just a little longer. This concludes our approach on how to handle a feminist’s mouth, or her disciplinary hole, during an exorcism. Let’s see what Jacob gave us to work with.”

Jimmy put a hand on Jacob’s shoulder after he had finally pulled out of Elizabeth’s battered pussy. He used his free hand to spread her lips wide open. It didn’t take long for the camera to catch a close up shot of Jacob’s cum leaking out of her used hole.

   “Wow, we should make you a regular in our exorcisms! Well done! Did you save some for the occasion or where did all of that cum come from?”

Jimmy praised Jacob, who in his state of post nut clarity seemed to be somewhere else.

   “Uhm, I, no, I don’t think so… But, I guess, I just really needed that.”

Jimmy patted him on the shoulder.

   “Been there, my friend, been there. How about you take a rest? You look like you could use it. And for the next part, I could use the help of another brother in arms. Where is Makoto?”

A slightly smaller man took the stage now. Jimmy and Makoto exchanged a heartfelt greeting.

   “Well, Makoto, I’m pretty sure that we’re dealing with an anal virgin here and those are your specialty. Would you do us the honor of fucking her tight little asshole while I explain the purpose of her final hole to our audience?”

Makoto, a man whose parents came from Japan, positioned himself between Elizabeth’s legs. But instead of immediately plunging his dick into her ass, he briefly fingered her cunt and then used Jacob’s cum as a lube for her ass. At the same time, he answered Jimmy’s question without being distracted by the delicious display of the naked woman in front of him.

   “Of course, Jimmy, it’s my pleasure. If I’m being honest, getting to break in these virgin asses is the main reason why I’m doing this job. You’re paying me much more than you have to, you know?”

Jimmy couldn’t help but laugh at Makoto’s joke. The number of viewers was now close to 10,000 and they had a lot to say.

   ‘Makoto, what a gigachad!’
   ‘Eww! I could never touch another man’s juice like that…’
   ‘Damn, they do not let that girl rest, do they?’
   ‘God, I wish that was my cum dripping out of her…’
   ‘Hey, if you’re still looking for people, I’d do it for free!’


Makoto had no problem at all getting hard. The size of his dick paled in comparison to Jerome’s, but that was true for most men. A smaller dick had its advantages when opening a woman’s back door for the first time. While Jerome was still stuffing Elizabeth’s face with his monster cock, Makoto didn’t take long to snuggle his dick into her virgin ass. Despite being aroused himself by now, Jimmy kept up the role of the diligent commentator with an unheard of degree of professionalism.

   “And that makes hole number three! From the intense moaning escaping from her dick filled mouth, I guess it is fair to conclude that she was indeed an anal virgin up to this point. To think that she got to the ripe age of 28 without ever offering her ass to a man. What a waste…”

The live feed showed Makoto deliberately slow sliding in and out of her freshly plucked ass. The pressure that his cock put on her vagina from below, squeezed some more of Jacob’s cum out of her. Jimmy demonstrably shook his head while lamenting Elizabeth’s earlier life’s decision to keep her asshole for herself.

   “Before we address the philosophy behind the proper usage of a woman’s ass, let me point out one more thing. We at Men at War are often accused of being against diversity and inclusivity. This couldn’t be further from the truth! Whether you’re black, asian, white or latino. Whether you’re young or old, whether your cock is big or small, whether you’re a woman or a man. There is a place for you here! All we ask for is a strong commitment to the fight against feminism. That is all it takes to be part of our family! But let’s get to the good part now.”

Jerome was slowly but surely getting closer to his first orgasm. Makoto noticed this and increased his own pace in kind. Jimmy kept explaining.

   “At this point, you might wonder what the purpose of fucking a woman’s ass is during an exorcism. When her cunt is for breeding and her mouth for discipline, then what is her ass for? Simple: It’s for pleasure. Your pleasure. A good woman will not only bear your child and willingly accept a deserved punishment down her throat, no, she will also offer you her ass to satisfy your needs. After all, it is in her nature to care for you. Some part of Elizabeth right now is beginning to understand that Makoto is only fucking her for his pleasure. Consequently, we dub her asshole her pleasure hole. And make no mistake, teaching her that during an exorcism is just as important as teaching her about her breeding hole and her disciplinary hole.”

Makoto and Jerome were now both getting close to their orgasms. Being professionals, they had coordinated the timing of their impending orgasms via the exchange of a few looks alone. Then they came, flooding her throat and her ass with hot cum at the same time.

   “Look at these two go! What a beautiful simultaneous finish! But don’t worry chat, the show is far from over!”
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« Reply #10 on: November 01, 2024, 02:34:49 PM »
Not only people but certain writers here on sit has a set of three letters they use when writing a story- AMP, PAM or MAP When describing what is being done to the female. Loving how she still has verbal resistance to fall upon as she getting taken against her will! Really hoping the she has to pass a test of a triple penetration before she can be considered Exorcised!

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« Reply #11 on: November 02, 2024, 02:14:50 AM »
Great story, thank you very much. I really like the guys being so nice too each other while doing these nasty things to her.

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« Reply #12 on: November 02, 2024, 06:00:02 AM »
Ok, it's time for the final chapter. I'd like to shout out two people who inspired me to write this story. The first one is spunkjunk who wrote an offhand comment in my Record Chaser thread in the One on One section. That comment planted the idea of a live stream scenario in my head. And the second one is To-Get-Her. He was not only very welcoming to a newbie like me, I also read one of his older stories. And I found it so funny in the way it was escalating to ever greater heights of absurdity, that I wondered whether I could try my hand at Rape Comedy instead of Rape Fantasy as well. The result of these two sources of inspiration is... this.

So this is the final chapter and it has it all: Sex (duh), surprising tonal shifts, the end of Jacob's character arc and... healthy male vulnerability?  :confused:

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Chapter 3 – Catharsis




Elizabeth’s coughing filled the room after Jerome and Makoto had withdrawn from her body. She was breathing heavily and was glad to get a moment of rest. Jimmy crouched next to her again, hoping for a more cooperative interview this time.

   “Well, you’ve just been fucked properly for the first time in your life. Has the experience in any way changed your perspective on how you treat male colleagues at work?”

Still coughing slightly, Elizabeth seemed more confused than anything.

   “What are you talking about…?”

Jimmy spotted a glob of Jerome’s cum on her chin. He scooped it up with his index finger and then smeared it onto the tip of her cute nose.

   “You look beautiful with cum on your face, you know that? But to answer your question: I’m of course talking about your preferential treatment of women at work and how you frame simple compliments as harassment. Working under you is a living hell for men. Everyone is afraid to speak their mind openly, always afraid of getting canceled by the feminist inquisition.”

It was hard for her to wrap her head around the fact that all of this might be happening to her because someone at work might not like her. She considered herself to be open for suggestions any time and by anyone.

   “I was only trying to create a work environment where everybody feels safe, not just men! I swear!”

Jimmy shook his head.

   “All this talk about safe spaces, but you’re unable to see how your toxic ideas of so called ‘equality’ leave no safe space for men in this society!”

He suddenly sounded serious, like a deep seated anger rose to the surface and overwrote the jovial facade. Elizabeth thought that she could argue with this, she could address these thoughts, these feelings! She didn’t want to exclude men. If she could make him see that, maybe that was the way to make all of this stop.

   “That is not true! I never saw men as my enemies, I always wanted to… Ungh!!””

Jimmy had gotten back to his feet and shoved his own cock into her mouth. She still didn’t accept the truth and he had watched enough of the other guys manhandling her to be more than hard enough himself. However, he knew how to pace himself. He was fucking her face slowly such that the thrusting of his hips didn’t interfere with his ability to comment on the scene.

   “Some of you, my dear viewers, are surely disappointed right now. You expected her to be a new woman after everything I’ve told you about our methods. Yet, she still refuses to accept basic reality.”

The chat was full admiration for Jimmy by this point.

   ‘Wow, just hearing him talk, you’d never know that he is fucking her mouth right now!’
   ‘Damn, I wish had his self control.’
   ‘He’s not the tallest or strongest dude there, but he’s the one in charge and he knows it!’
   ‘What a chad, he’s such an alpha! Or a sigma…?’


Jimmy payed the wall of compliments no heed.

   “But I’d like to point out the change in her attitude! At first, there was frantic screaming and insults. Now, she listened, we had an actual conversation. That is progress! Listen, we’re not trying to sell you a miracle solution here. Like with most medicine, you can’t expect a single treatment to cure an underlying condition that has been left to fester for years!”

Jimmy gestured to two guys from his team to come closer while Jerome and Makoto were recovering.

   “Now, we’ll move on to the next stage where we’ll be educating her on breeding, discipline and pleasure at the same time. While Jerome and Makoto enjoy a well deserved rest, I’d like to employ the talents of Ikram and Denzel. Denzel is on pleasure duty and Ikram handles breeding for now.”

Two men, one black and one Indian, appeared on screen. Denzel gave the camera just a short nod whereas Ikram greeted the audience with heartfelt waving. The two guys who had immobilized Elizabeth up to this point now carefully lifted her body into the air without interrupting Jimmy’s continued assault on her mouth. Denzel slipped underneath her and then felt her body lowered onto his. Ikram had the muscular physique of a trained athlete and provided some eye candy for the surprisingly large but mostly quiet female audience as he took position between Elizabeth’s legs.

   “For the next two hours or so, there will always be someone on breeding duty. You heard her vehemently protest the idea of a man coming inside her earlier. Continued fillings of her cunt with our cum and the subsequent sensation of it dripping out of her will make her remember and accept her body’s true purpose. I am sure that many of you are familiar with the concept of exposure therapy and therefore see the merit in the approach.”

Ikram and Denzel penetrated her pussy and ass as Jimmy prepared the audience for what they were about to witness. Denzel was so overwhelmed by the feeling of his cock entering her ass, that he interrupted Jimmy for a moment.

   “Damn, Makoto! I’m sliding into this bitch’s ass like it’s the well used cunt of a seasoned prostitute! How do you do it, man?”

The camera showed Makoto sitting on a nearby chair with his legs spread. Another young woman on cleaning duty was licking his soft dick like a lollipop. He used a towel to wipe the sweat from his face and took a sip of water from a bottle when he heard Denzel’s comment. He just smirked in response. His face said it all: ‘It’s just what I do!’ And the Makoto fanboys in the chat went crazy.

Although they interrupted him, Jimmy couldn’t help but smile when he saw the boys having such a good time. The camera focused back on his face.

   “So, while one guy will be on breeding duty, another will be responsible for disciplinary action. Exposing Elizabeth’s body to the feeling of cocks filling her cunt with cum is an effective measure by itself, but it is further enhanced when a second cock takes away her ability to protest. It teaches her that denying the inevitable is futile which makes accepting the truth easier. Oh, and filling her ass while we’re at it, that’s just for fun.”

Elizabeth could hear it all. Jimmy’s commentary, the jokes, the clapping of the crew, some women giggling in the distance, the wet sounds that her body produced when their cocks thrusted into her cum filled orifices. All of it was surreal. The feeling of pain that had occupied her mind so much in the beginning never fully went away. But it started to feel more and more like a chronic condition she was about to accept as part of her life and less like an acute problem she needed to address. At first, the wetness between her legs that her body produced had been a source of shame for her. Now, she welcomed the relief it brought her. She lost track of time as her mind entered a dazed state.

Maybe her brain was deprived of oxygen because of the dick in her mouth making it difficult to breathe. Whatever the reason was, she became a detached observer of herself. These men knew what they were doing, she thought. They didn’t just wildly thrust into her, each of them at their own rhythm. No, their thrusting was coordinated, trained, a well oiled machine, a seasoned orchestra led by this man Jimmy, a masterful conductor. She could feel them thrusting and withdrawing, stretching her bowels, parting the walls of her vagina, sliding over her tongue. A long symphony building to an inevitable crescendo. At exactly the same time, she felt all three of their cocks swell and come to a rest deep inside of her.

The taste of Jimmy’s cum filled her mouth before she was able to swallow his seed. In her delirious state, she could have sworn that her pussy was able to taste Ikram’s cum as well as he filled her with his warmth. She imagined Denzel’s cum mingling with what Makoto had left inside of her, creating one big gooey mess in her bowels in the process. And then her body submitted. Unable to resist to add a few notes of her own to the music, she came. She didn’t scream like an overacting porn star nor did her body spasm wildly. Nobody in the chat noticed. But her cunt contracted violently around Ikram’s cock, claiming each drop of his seed as her own. A haze of numbing pleasure washed over her body, helping her to... endure.

A slightly out of breath Jimmy addressed the audience.

   “I know that Ikram and Denzel make it look easy. But trust me, it is not easy to get three men to come at exactly the same time when they are fucking a woman together. Now we will keep repeating this process until Elizabeth learns her lesson with both her body and mind. Rinse and repeat, don’t give her body a chance to remember what it feels like not to be filled with dicks. To keep this up, you need of course at least 6 men to account for the recovery time between orgasms. And if you’re working with a crew of 6, you should aim for having each member take charge of each of her holes at least once. Luckily, we got more than enough men with us today.”

Jimmy, Denzel and Ikram withdrew from Elizabeth’s holes at the same time, perfectly coordinated just as they had fucked her. The two men holding her lifted her up again. Denzel switched position with Jerome in record time. Within seconds, Elizabeth rested on Jerome’s body ready to be penetrated by his cock. The entire process was reminiscent of a pit stop during a Formula One race: a quick stop, a short lift of the car, tires changed within seconds and back on the road they went. Meanwhile, Jimmy and Ikram passed the baton to Makoto and one of the men who had been holding down Elizabeth so far. They handled the change of players with such efficiency that it was a marvel to behold. It took them less than 15 seconds to substitute one set of cocks with the next, giving Elizabeth barely a moment to breath.

Just as Jimmy had announced, over the course of the next two hours, they didn’t give Elizabeth any rest. He kept playing the entertainer and moderator, rarely participating himself and happy to let the other guys shine. When he feared that the show was about to get repetitive, he had two of the four girls on set join in on the fun having them play with Elizabeth’s tits while giving the camera a good view of their naked asses. He encouraged the chat to guess how much cum they had dumped into Elizabeth by now. When he announced that they were about to start the last round, he set a timer for the last group of guys consisting of Jerome on breeding duty, Makoto at the disciplinary hole and Ikram being responsible for the pleasure hole. Just a fun little challenge to see whether the guys would be able to blow their fourth load for the day simultaneously within 5 minutes. Of course, the chat was betting on whether they could do it or who might screw it up.

   ‘I’m part of the Makoto gang to the end, don’t fail me now, man!’
   ‘One last round everyone. LET’S!! FUCKING!! GOOOO!!!!!!’
   ‘Am I the only one who wants to lick her cunt now…?”
   ‘So, based on the average amount of sperm a man ejaculates, I estimate that…’
   ‘I’m not sure, guys, whether Ikram has one more load in him.’


For Elizabeth, the announcement that it would soon be over barely registered. She had retreated to some place deep in her mind and stopped paying attention to the sounds in the room. Any need to pin her body to the bed with force had disappeard long ago. The taste of cum, the clapping of her cheeks and her own heartbeat had become constants in her life that overshadowed all other sensations. At this point, a world that didn’t involve cocks and cum filling her holes had become unimaginable to her.

Jimmy was confident that the guys would be able to come before the deadline. He just wanted to give the viewers some extra excitement. He could only imagine how many dudes watching the stream had come by now, wishing that they could one day in a better world participate themselves. Then the guys came just 30 seconds before the deadline. Ikram was off by about two seconds, but it didn’t matter anymore. They had done well. There was no need to be a perfectionist now. The chat cheered them on as their grunts of pleasure filled Elizabeth’s bedroom one last time.

   “And that’s… time! Well done guys, and with a half a minute to spare! Alright, time to pull out your cocks. I want to have another chat with the lady. And take positions for the finale, I think it’s time.”

The men withdrew from her battered holes. Her pussy and ass had turned into gaping holes. Two seemingly never ending rivers of cum were forming a puddle on the bed sheet between her legs. The cum in her mouth, she had mostly swallowed. She was coughing now that she could breathe normally again. Jimmy gave her time to calm down, kneeling besides her with the microphone in hand. The 8 men of Jimmy’s crew who over the course of the last 3 hours had gang raped her repeatedly under his leadership took formation next to the bed, 4 on the left side and 4 on the ride. They started to slowly masturbate, some of them got a helping hand from the 4 girls accompanying their group. Jimmy started to talk to Elizabeth.

   “Elizabeth, are you with us?”

She was clearly somewhat foggy, but she answered.

   “Yeah… I’m here…”

Jimmy nodded.

   “Good, do you remember Jacob?”

Jacob reentered the room. He wasn’t seen on stream since he had first fucked Elizabeth. He crawled back between her legs, just like he had done a few hours ago. This time, he didn’t need any help to get hard. Elizabeth saw him and vaguely remembered that he was the first guy to rape her back when she woke up. She nodded.

   “He will fuck your pussy one more time now. You don’t mind, do you?”

Jimmy softly whispered the words into her ear. Elizabeth felt Jacob enter her, but she barely reacted. She answered Jimmy’s question with a simple:

   “Uh huh…”

Jimmy kept talking to her, gently caressing her hair while doing so. Him caressing her hair, that felt kind of nice, she thought.

   “Jacob asked us whether you’d be so kind to read a message he has prepared for you. Would you be a dear and do him this small favor? Martin, please show the message on screen.”

She could see Jacob pounding her. She looked over his shoulder, ignored his moaning and looked at the screen behind him. She began to read as she was told.

   “I am… deeply sorry for… how I’ve treated Jacob… and his colleagues. I understand now… that being a cunt towards men… and offering my cunt to men… are not the same thing. I promise… to be better… from now on.”

With the exception of Jacob who kept drilling his dick into her, the whole room clapped. Jimmy continued gently stroking her hair.

   “Well done, Elizabeth. Well done. I knew you weren’t a lost cause.”

Elizabeth stopped looking at the screen and simply nodded in response. Jacob was getting close.

   “Do you remember what I asked you earlier? How you could help Jacob?”

It took Elizabeth a moment. For her, that was so long ago. But she remembered. She looked Jacob in the eye. He seemed so happy, she thought, fucking her. Then she spoke.

   “Jacob, pl… please come… inside me.”

Jacob’s eyes went wide, not expecting to hear these words ever out of her mouth, and he immediately erupted inside of her pussy. She could feel his cock pumping inside of her and Jimmy stroking her hair while talking to her.

   “Good girl, that’s a good girl. Get it all out of him. Good girl…”

Elizabeth closed her eyes. She was so tired. Content with the affirmation that she was a good girl, she dozed off with a faint smile on her lips.

With Elizabeth asleep, Jimmy stood back up, ready to talk to their viewers again. This couldn’t have played out better. But then he saw Jacob. He was still kneeling between her legs, his cock softening inside of her. He was… shaking.

   “Jacob…?”

Jimmy quickly moved towards Jacob, putting a comforting hand on his shoulder. He was desperately trying not to cry but just couldn’t stop himself.

   “It’s ok. We’re here…”

Jerome was the next one to arrive, putting one of his giant hands on Jacob’s balding head, ruffling his remaining hair.

   “Hey buddy…”

Jacob tried to talk.

   “It’s just that… I don’t know… I’ve never…”

Ikram joined them and gave Jacob a quick hug.

   “Take your time, Jacob. Take your time.”

Feeling the support of his new friends, Jacob was finally able to talk.

   “This was the first time that a woman… actually wanted my sperm. For the first time… it was not just an... inevitable… nuisance... at the end of sex... meant to be quickly wiped away.”

Under his mask, he tried to wipe away the tears that wouldn’t stop coming. Then Makoto stepped closer, gave Jacob a friendly slap on his ass, and shared some encouraging words with him.

   “You did well today. I couldn’t have done it better myself!”

All the guys congratulated and consoled him one by one. A scene not unlike that of a soccer player being celebrated by his teammates after scoring an important goal unfolded before Jimmy’s eyes. He and the guys took a few steps back to let the girls hug Jacob with their naked bodies. Jerome, who stood next to Jimmy, wiped away a tear of his own.

   “Man, that part always gets to me, you know?”

Jimmy just nodded in response. He had expected the number of viewers to drop after the end of the gang rape section, but there were still 15427 people watching according to the analytics.

   ‘That was… surprisingly wholesome.’
   ‘I’m a grown man, fuck, why am I crying?!’
   ‘Jacob is ok, isn’t he?’
   ‘I get it, I wish my girlfriend would like my sperm…’


Jimmy gave them all a few more moments, but when Jacob finally calmed down, he clapped his hands together.

   “Come on guys, we still got a baptism ahead of us. Back into position!”

The men hurried back into their earlier positions, four of them on each side of the bed. Jimmy placed himself above Elizabeth’s head and Jacob took a break with the girls who kept comforting him. While stroking his cock, Jimmy addressed the audience once more.

   “All good things must come to an end, chat. I would consider this exorcism a huge success and I’m sure that some of you who had doubts when the stream began are now convinced of our methods. This last step is more ceremonial in nature, but whenever a woman publicly disavows her former feminist views, we like to celebrate this with a baptism of our saved sister. I believe that what you see on stream speaks for itself and requires no further explanation.”

Jimmy made eye contact one by one with the other 8 masturbating men. Then they came all over Elizabeth’s naked body. The two at the top of the bed joined Jimmy and sprayed their cum over Elizabeth’s face, waking her up in the process. The rest of them coated her boobs, stomach and thighs with their seed. Jimmy sighed, then he shouted.

   “Ok girls, it’s cleanup time!”

Three of the four girls swarmed Elizabeth’s cum covered body and started licking her clean. Lydia led the girl squad and was busy cleaning up Elizabeth’s pussy and asshole with her skilled tongue. Jimmy gave her an approving nod and got ready for his closing remarks.

   “So everyone, I hope you enjoyed our presentation of the premium deluxe package. All of that can be yours for the feminist of your choice.”

Elizabeth could be heard moaning in the background as the girls seemed to be able to push the right buttons with their tongues.

   “I know what many of you are thinking. 25K, that’s a lot of money for the average Joe. And I don’t disagree. But the truth is, for a crew this big and considering the risks we take, this barely covers our costs.”

Lydia managed to force another orgasm out of Elizabeth as she licked up the cum flowing out of her abused cunt.

   “That is why we believe that the future of such exorcisms lies in crowdfunding. If you visit our patreon account, you will see that starting this month, we present to you the profiles of 10 feminists that you get to choose from. For only 5 bucks a month, you get the right to vote on who will be the feminist for our next exorcism. And for 20 bucks you… Lydia? Everything ok?”

Lydia had stood up and rushed past Jimmy. But when he called her, she stopped and came to him. While walking in front of the camera, she gave the viewers a beaming smile and waved at them.

   “Hey guys, sorry to interrupt. Hope you enjoyed the show!”

In the background, the other two girls were still busy licking cum from Elizabeth’s face and tits. Lydia stood on her toes and pressed her body tightly against Jimmy’s. She tried to whisper in his ear, hoping the microphone wouldn’t pick up her voice. But the chat could hear every word.

   “Everything is fine, it’s just that, you guys came a lot in her. Half of it is probably from Makoto and his giant loads… Anyway, my tongue is getting tired and I’m getting Susan to help. I’m not cleaning up that asshole alone…”

Feeling her body so close to his, his cock twitched, pushing slightly against her delicate folds. He had a thing for brunettes.

   “Oh? You’re still ready to go?”

Lydia smirked. But Jimmy could only shake his head.

   “Nah, I’m spent. You’re just irresistible. Go get Susan. And I know I’m asking a lot, but once you’re done, can one of you take care of Martin? The guy has managed the stream for hours and he deserves some alone time with one of you girls.”

Lydia nodded despite being tired herself.

   “Bye, guys!”

As she walked away, she let her fingers casually trace the shaft of Jimmy’s cock. Jimmy sighed, then he continued with his crowdfunding announcement.

   “So, as I was saying. For 5 bucks you get to vote. But for 20 you get to suggest feminists that we might add to the list if they meet our criteria. I think that covers all of it for now. That’s it from me for today. I was your host Jimmy representing Men at War. Feel free to enjoy the view a little longer and I hope to see all of you very soon! Hail Peterson!”

As Jimmy made an exit like an actor at the end of a play, the camera lingered for a while longer on Elizabeth’s used and tired body getting licked clean by four young women.

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« Reply #13 on: November 02, 2024, 02:36:04 PM »
Maybe it's just this reader but i would have like to hear Elizabeth curse Jimmy before excusing herself and beg for more cock!

Overall a great story that was told in such a way that we haven't seen before which earns a merit from me when allowed!
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« Reply #14 on: November 03, 2024, 06:24:52 PM »
I just want to get back to some of your comments. To those who commented that they liked the earlier parts of the story, I'd love to hear what you thought of the ending.

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Eagerly waiting for this tongue in cheek story to continue !  >:D

I'm glad that I got that across. I am still very new to writing stories and especially when a story about a serious topic like rape includes some humorous elements, I feel a bit insecure. So reading that this tongue in cheek part of the story resonated with you, was really nice. That made me feel more confident in my own writing. I really appreciate that feedback! What do you think? Did I overdo it with the ending?


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Great story, thank you very much. I really like the guys being so nice too each other while doing these nasty things to her.
I love that you bring that up! The contrast between, on the one side, their horrific acts and their delusional theories and, on the other side, the wholesomeness with which they treat each other made me chuckle so many times while writing this. I know that I turned up the dial on this contrast to 11 when I had them fuck poor Elizabeth into a dissociative state and then all of them supporting Jacob while he overcame his trauma off women not liking his sperm. But I just couldn't help myself at this point. Did I lose you with that at the end or were you with me all the way? No hard feelings if you thought that it was too much!

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Maybe it's just this reader but i would have like to hear Elizabeth curse Jimmy before excusing herself and beg for more cock!

I'd like to hear you elaborate more on this. What exactly do you mean when you say that you'd want her to beg for it? Do you mean that she actually likes it and wants to be fucked more? Or should she beg for it because she's scared and she thinks that is what these men want to hear? My take was, that after being gangraped for three hours, she entered a dissociative state to shield her mind from the ongoing abuse. And in that state, she would have basically said anything, but the Men at War guys misinterpret this as her changing her mind while it actually means nothing. Elizabeth is just a victim of severe torture at this point that would confess to anything to make them stop.