Nothing wrong with where you left off, just creates a sense of more to come (Pardon the pun!) Love the choice of music for bring the part to life! Easily a merit earner from me!
Very hot ride indeed and you can certainly write consensual as well as forced. Great idea to add the song too by the wonderful Doris Day. Really brings us to the scene and gosh! How id love to be there Merit for this and many more xx
Well. I am very seldom on the consensual pages, but will alter that from today on. My o my, what an erotic writing! Merit from me, and for goodness sake, man, carry on, PLEASE!!