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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #30 on: January 28, 2023, 12:48:23 AM »
INCREADIBLY FANTASTIC FANTASY
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If she can‘t breathe, she can‘t scream !

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #31 on: January 28, 2023, 09:54:20 AM »
Fantastic artwork and story-telling.  I look forward to more!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #32 on: January 28, 2023, 12:11:11 PM »
Minutes seemed like forever for Candice, until suddenly the entire length retracted from her mouth.  She could only focus on catching her sweet breaths of clear airway, unable to put up a fight.  Cottonmouth roughly grasped her body, repositioning in a way that confused her.

"w-what do you... *pant*"

She was eventually inverted, head on the floor with her back propped up against the wall.  Her long lean legs dangled precariously as Cottonmouth leaned in.  His hot breath was uncomfortably intimate as Candice braced herself.

*GASP*



"Oh.. my god... oh oh..."

Candice felt the hot wet tip part her delicate bright pink labia, then the entirety sank into her depths.  This was nothing like the brutal stabbing penetration from the twins earlier.  Cottonmouth's saliva made for a nice lubricant, as the raspy tastebuds slid across her folds. 

Her ragged breaths stuttered in response to his oral ministrations.  The muscled girth was very thick, firmly pushing all around her walls.   It easily filled the entire distance of her cavity, with much to spare.  It kept pushing, probing deeper, cramming as much slimy wet volume as he could.

*GASP* "uhh...ohhhh..."

The way it's length undulated, sent undeniable pleasurable sensation throughout all her overworked nerve endings.

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #33 on: January 29, 2023, 11:41:45 AM »
OH WOW! So hot! YellowKnight has a whole menagerie of twisted, depraved mutants to entertain us!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #34 on: January 29, 2023, 03:02:27 PM »
Cottonmouth moaned, enjoying her squirming from a utterly thorough eating out of her pussy.  The warmth of her velvety diminutive pink sleeve enveloped his voracious tonguing.  She was gushing profusely now, where his mouth happily slurped up her divine sweet nectar.  His eyes stared at the perfectly smooth contours of her ass, with it's unblemished skin stretched from the counterbalance of her long legs.  It was a sight to behold!

His cock seemingly had a mind of it's own too.  It whipped about in frenzy, ingloriously smacking across her face and tits.  Reaching from behind, his free hands held her face and his cock, managing to punch the tip past her lips.  Sliding the palm back, he proceeded to feed his length, slow inch by inch.

*cough* *gahkk*



The long ungodly length travelled down her throat, just as the tongue did to her earlier.  This was much thicker however, delivering more strain and hurt.  The pressure was exerted by his weight, as his pelvis rocked downward to deliver a punishing impalement.

Candice couldn't anything at all, not with this horrid submissive sexual position at the mercy of the mother of all 69s.  Despite the choking stuffing down her mouth, the thorough lapping from his mouth was acutely overriding all her senses.  She felt all kinds of smoldering heat emanating between her legs.  It was undeniable how this feathery sensation of butterflies in her stomach was beginning to make her tremble.  She could feel her toes involuntarily curl in her shoes, her straining thighs were shaking out of control.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #35 on: January 29, 2023, 04:55:51 PM »
The air was brimming with the sounds of train tracks, slurps, plunges, and feminine moans. 

Candice's skin glowed with a fine sheen as her body erotically writhed under Cottonmouth's attention.  Her head was brutally pinned, as two feet of cock slithered down her gullet.  It wiggled and twisted around, enjoying the taut confines wrapping around it's shaft.

Despite it all, her focus centered on the agitation happening between her legs.  By all accounts, this should be a horrid ordeal, with a nightmarish freak ravishing her insides.  Instead, she was so aroused, her lower body was bucking with spasms now.  The wriggling shank was so wet and firm, licking into every last square inch of her overstimulated tunnel.  Even the tip mashed up against her cervix was giving her the feels.

"How could this be?," Candice wondered.  She could only imagine the sight from afar, bent over and defiled beyond all reality.  And here she was, here and now, edging closer to climax.  But then Cottonmouth began to shake, and Candice immediately had the presence of mind to think of the beaker.  She needed that sperm sample, and it would do no good buried deep down her esophagus.

"MMmmmmpph"

She mustered all of her remaining strength, pushing at the slight frame of his body.  His emaciated pelvis lifted off, disengaging the entirety of his cock out her maw.  With the sweet lengthy retreat, the milking action of her mouth and tongue over shaft and glans, spurred the last sensation he needed.

His entire cock felt like one gigantic cramp, drawing out everything from his balls.  Candice squealed as spurt after spurt of hot jizz threw out like jabs.  What happened next shocked her to the core.  Having his manly cum coating her face felt so incredibly submissive, and it pushed her over the edge.

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..."

As Cottonmouth stumbled backwards, Candice arched her back.  She's had orgasms before in her inexperienced sex life, from light masturbation to heavy petting from inept boyfriends.  But whatever this was, rocked her world like nothing else.  It felt like a giant series of fireworks blew her brains out.  Her body continued to spasm with one sexy aftershock after another.



After a lengthy recovery period, both bodies were sprawled on the floor, laboring to breathe back to normal.

"h-help us...," he croaked.

"w-what??  how... what can I do?," she managed to breathily mutter back.

"the plugs..."

"what do you mean?"

"the plugs... the plugs...," he replied even softer.

"I-I don't understand."

Candice got up, wondering about this seemingly new clue.  Grabbing a beaker from the machine, her nose scrunched at the notion of collecting Cottonmouth's semen.  After depositing a copious mouthful of seed, she used her fingers to scrape off the lines of pearly cum off her face into the jar.  Of course, it was all so demeaning to smear his stuff, but it was all about escaping at this point.

She replayed his clue over and over in her head, trying to make sense of it.  As the door swooshed open, Cottonmouth lifted his head one last time.

"Thanksssssssssssssss..."

Candice gave him one hell of a glare and exited into the night air to the next boxcar.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #36 on: January 30, 2023, 04:55:44 PM »
OK, that is one hell of an interesting tongue  :D

Minutes seemed like forever for Candice, until suddenly the entire length retracted from her mouth.  She could only focus on catching her sweet breaths of clear airway, unable to put up a fight.  Cottonmouth roughly grasped her body, repositioning in a way that confused her.

"w-what do you... *pant*"

She was eventually inverted, head on the floor with her back propped up against the wall.  Her long lean legs dangled precariously as Cottonmouth leaned in.  His hot breath was uncomfortably intimate as Candice braced herself.

*GASP*



"Oh.. my god... oh oh..."

Candice felt the hot wet tip part her delicate bright pink labia, then the entirety sank into her depths.  This was nothing like the brutal stabbing penetration from the twins earlier.  Cottonmouth's saliva made for a nice lubricant, as the raspy tastebuds slid across her folds. 

Her ragged breaths stuttered in response to his oral ministrations.  The muscled girth was very thick, firmly pushing all around her walls.   It easily filled the entire distance of her cavity, with much to spare.  It kept pushing, probing deeper, cramming as much slimy wet volume as he could.

*GASP* "uhh...ohhhh..."

The way it's length undulated, sent undeniable pleasurable sensation throughout all her overworked nerve endings.

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #37 on: January 31, 2023, 12:25:51 AM »


"I am happy to report that the latest samples are promising..."

"we've heard this before..."
"the last specimen did not complete her trials, what makes you believe this time will be different?"
"no bullshit this time, what are the values?"

"I assure you, this is the one..."

"you are no longer in position to make assurances..."
"assurances did not deliver results last time..."
"this had better work, YOU are running out of time!"

"I AM confident the next series of collections will yield positive..."

"your confidence has no significance to results..."
"yes, we are no longer in R&D, we need conclusive evidence!"
"we WILL be boarding on the next stop..."

"no, that won't be necessary, you will get..."

"this has been decided by the council"
"aye."
"prepare thee well, or else..."

*END TRANSMISSION*
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #38 on: January 31, 2023, 12:35:27 AM »
I am going to pause this at Part I as a Jan 2023 story submission.

Part 2 artwork is already in progress, and the basic plot has been laid out.
I'm very excited to post Candice's next misadventures and have some *ahem* interesting animations incoming.

I want to thank mikewozere, dawnamber, vile8r, AngieUK, andypandy, gaggedkitty23, mintjulie, spunkjunk, hola, rainbow, and mudplugger for the comments that keep my creativity flowing.  Thank you so much!
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #39 on: January 31, 2023, 01:54:43 AM »
I was absent all month and just discovered this neo masterpiece. This is simply incredible and I am overwhelmed by how much I enjoyed it. Utterly amazing and beyond HOT AF!!!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I intend on meriting every single post.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #40 on: January 31, 2023, 07:33:17 AM »

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I intend on meriting every single post.

Thanks for the comment Rexmundi!

No need to merit every. single. post :)
Did more posts to spread out the pages, these animations are a few megabytes big, so just trying to lessen the download when one views.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #41 on: January 31, 2023, 12:41:59 PM »
I don't know where this story is heading, but these "evil clown people" have me intrigued. Wherever YellowKnight takes us, we know it will be an entertaining and exciting journey.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #42 on: February 03, 2023, 03:34:10 PM »
Great work, TheYellowKnight    :emot_thedrool.gif:
Eager to see more.
Thank you for sharing
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #43 on: February 23, 2023, 01:02:26 PM »
Omg.   I love this story.   I have long had the fantasy of being raped in a halloween/ carnival fun house.   My screams masked by the screams of the facility.   Love the story and love the animations.   Look forward to continuing to read. 

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #44 on: March 09, 2023, 10:58:50 PM »
This is splendid erotic horror