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Groping/fondling Scenes
« on: September 19, 2023, 06:16:06 PM »
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How would you guys describe a groping/fondling action on a woman who is partially sedated? I need some help with it.
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Re: Groping/fondling Scenes
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2023, 06:52:47 PM »
Start by giving a visual of what the characters is seeing. Describe how what the character is turned on, even making them slightly nervous that the person may come too at any moment.  Have then reach out trembling at fist then describe how the groping feels to the palm of their hand.

"I couldn't believe that her breast were that round, her bra really concealed a treasure. I was slightly trembling as I reached out, the flesh of my fingertips making  just enough contact with her flesh to send excited signals all over my nerves. As i closed my hand over her breast, I  felt a whole range of sensations that has me wondering if her pussy would make me feel the same feelings.  With my free hand i reached and cup her velvety pussy lips. I never felt anything so soft before and That was why i ran my palm all over her pussy mound!"

Hoping this gives you idea of what to write. I might also suggest writing while fingering/ palming fruit to get the idea of what the felling could be like!
When I get around to it, I'll write

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Re: Groping/fondling Scenes
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2023, 07:09:21 PM »
Start by giving a visual of what the characters is seeing. Describe how what the character is turned on, even making them slightly nervous that the person may come too at any moment.  Have then reach out trembling at fist then describe how the groping feels to the palm of their hand.

"I couldn't believe that her breast were that round, her bra really concealed a treasure. I was slightly trembling as I reached out, the flesh of my fingertips making  just enough contact with her flesh to send excited signals all over my nerves. As i closed my hand over her breast, I  felt a whole range of sensations that has me wondering if her pussy would make me feel the same feelings.  With my free hand i reached and cup her velvety pussy lips. I never felt anything so soft before and That was why i ran my palm all over her pussy mound!"

Hoping this gives you idea of what to write. I might also suggest writing while fingering/ palming fruit to get the idea of what the felling could be like!
Some nice tips there. The scene itself isn't sexual, and the one groping the woman is her husband, doing it as a punishment for disobedience. One thing I have in the story is his free hand travelling all across her body, which really turned me on as I wrote that.
Anyway, thank you for the tips.

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Re: Groping/fondling Scenes
« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2023, 11:35:04 AM »
Well then highlight the menace of the scene!

"I stood above her, my rough right pulling at the soft flesh of her breast, my left hand traversing the flesh from my right hand back to where he breast connected to the flesh of her chest.I could tell by the expression in her eyes that the callused flesh of my palm gave her painful sensation al over her soft breast flesh. I didn't care this is what she deserved for her actions.
Not even her cunt was out of bounds, Using my left hand I ran my palm over her vaginal lips. Getting them between two fingers and yanking them down as if they were the flesh of a turkey under it's lower jaw. Over and over I did that before getting the idea that her inner lip deserved the same treatment."

As opposes to the first post, mind-play the person as an anger person, taking his revenge against the person in ways that would appall you in real life!
When I get around to it, I'll write

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Re: Groping/fondling Scenes
« Reply #4 on: September 22, 2023, 04:43:02 PM »
Well then highlight the menace of the scene!

"I stood above her, my rough right pulling at the soft flesh of her breast, my left hand traversing the flesh from my right hand back to where he breast connected to the flesh of her chest.I could tell by the expression in her eyes that the callused flesh of my palm gave her painful sensation al over her soft breast flesh. I didn't care this is what she deserved for her actions.
Not even her cunt was out of bounds, Using my left hand I ran my palm over her vaginal lips. Getting them between two fingers and yanking them down as if they were the flesh of a turkey under it's lower jaw. Over and over I did that before getting the idea that her inner lip deserved the same treatment."

As opposes to the first post, mind-play the person as an anger person, taking his revenge against the person in ways that would appall you in real life!
This looks awesome, thank you for the tip. I've also put one scene I wrote, check it out here.
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