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Savage Grace.
« on: September 22, 2022, 07:46:40 AM »
This is an idea that has come to light. I might consider it for a story contest entry so any feedback critical or otherwise will be welcome.

All characters sexually involved are over 18, there is underage characters but as story props and do not see or take part in any sexual activity.

This will be told in the first person but I’m going to look for feedback at adding more perspectives or not. Bear in mind I only write from a female perspective.

Enjoy xx
 


Its the evening time and Danny is looking  tired. I suppose he must be, he didn’t get much sleep last night. Not after the night we had. I’m still tingling now thinking about it.
Kira and Carl are back from school and “Bags  thrown in the hallway! They know that drives me mad.
“Well there will be no ice cream tonight, push me further and they’ll be no phone time either. I don’t think children should have them anyway.

I’ve made them all hotpot, lamb hotpot!, My Grannie’s recipe. She shared it with me before she passed away several years ago. A true lady was my grandmother, she taught me to be proper, to specialize my smile and use my charm to get my way but not in the cheap and sleazy way.

That’s how I was landed with Danny, probably the most wonderful man I’ve ever met. He’s just so enthralling, handsome, deep, sensitive and kind. He also knows how to make a girl scream between the sheets!

Yes, I’m happy with Danny and since I’ve known him that day when he turned up at my workplace and gave me that smile! That smile was reciprocated and he regularly came to my workplace for prolonged chats, then coffee after work, until that time he made love to me in the back of his Mercedes at that nice park, that became our spot.
Since then he’s always delivered the goods, given me a lovely home, a beautiful family, and told me many times.

. “Grace I adore you, I really really adore you and I don’t want to be with anyone else”. In fact he tells me that every night since we’ve first lived together. It’s so special, and I think he really means it.
As for the children, they can be a bit of a handful, there is Kira, she’s 12 now and getting to that stage that all girls get to. Too cool for anyone and knows everything about everything. I’m trying my best with her and one day she’ll be a lady like me. I know it.

Carl makes me laugh, he’s so like his dad, all the best bits, has the same smile. One day he’ll be a handsome young man too and do his dad proud. He won’t be like my waster of a father that our mother left, both my brother and I to, when she didn’t want to love us anymore……but that’s a story for another time.

Then there is Baby Lilly, she’s a dote, of all the babies I’ve looked after she’s just the best! She’s so cute, and I truly love her. More than her own mother does. After all they sent her to me to look after while they pursued their careers. A man’s place to provide for his family I get, but their mother?. Oh yes, her!

So dear reader I suppose you don’t quite understand what I’m talking about yet? Let me tell you. This wasn’t my family, it was hers! That bitch who came into the crèche I worked at, and told me how to take care of her Lilly, and got so jealous when Lilly smiled at me. If it wasn’t for the cheap and cheerful  rates at our place, she’d be gone. She would have  of course,  cheap out on her own kids! Though,  I’d never have met Danny. He began to bring Lilly to me and picked her up when their working hours changed. She’s a big shot solicitor, a career woman. My mother was a career woman too. However her meetings and tricks of the trade were best kept behind closed doors.

Diana Blackmore is out of the way and poor Danny knows it too, I show her to him sometimes when I need to remind him what will happen if he should try and break what we have now. She’s all bound up and begging my slow witted brother Charlie to stop as she is held captive at our old house of horrors that I hate. So it all depends on Danny and his behavior . I have him now and Diana  is held captive behind her gag that was once her underwear. Sometimes  my brother lets her see me take her husband’s hard cock in my mouth while she takes one in hers  and begs for it to stop as I beg for more!

So as I light the candles,  spray Diana’s perfume on and admire myself in that long flowing peach dress that Danny bought me yesterday. I’ll remind you, this isn’t a just family meal this is a home invasion, they just don’t know it yet. Or rather just Danny knows and has told them I’m a cousin who’s fallen on hard times and  I’m staying while Mum takes that extra long work trip. They are used to her being away it seems and I’ve already won the hearts of the children. After dinner I’ll help with homework and read them a bed time story. The way it should be.

I’m wearing some nice black lingerie that I found in Diana’s  forbidden drawer. I’m sure Danny will appreciate it. Well if he doesn’t then Diana will surely suffer. My brother has never had a good temper and he gets bored easily.

So it’s time for a family dinner. Bon appetite!,  and I’ll tell you all about how we got here and how we go further.
Kisses

To Be Continued.

« Last Edit: February 03, 2024, 02:14:19 PM by JustJess_33 »

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Re: Savage Grace.
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2022, 05:01:41 PM »
A few paragraphs in and I was infatuated by Grace, then by the end of the first part I'm a bit scared of Grace. Talk about a Hyde from Mrs. Jekyll! Can't wait to read where you are planning to take this story. I have a fear that Danny will experience Grace in ways he never imagined! merit to be awarded from me when the site allows me to give one!
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Re: Savage Grace.
« Reply #2 on: September 28, 2022, 03:08:33 PM »
Gosh Jess. It started so peacefully and the twist is very dark and twisted. Brilliant idea that is so well executed. I'm fascinated to see where you take the story and us, most likely down an intriguing and depraved alley from your imagination.
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Re: Savage Grace.
« Reply #3 on: September 30, 2022, 05:03:37 AM »
Thank you both so much for reading.
A bit different and if some find it disturbing I am sorry.

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« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2022, 05:04:06 AM »

Danny just looked at me with tired eyes.
“It’s hotpot your favorite, old family recipe. Surely Diana made it for you before?” The kids made a face but didn’t protest as i served it up.
“We eat all this, and tomorrow we can get pizza” That reassured them and urged them to eat my hotpot.
I put  Lilly into her chair and spoon fed her a mashed up plate. She always eats well for me.
“We haven’t heard from Mum today” Kira said as she picked at her plate. “I did text her early on but she hasn’t replied”
Danny was about to talk.
“I expect she’ll text tonight, she’s working quite hard isn’t she Danny” I said as Danny looked down at his food.
I had Diana’s phone, I texted them every night, and once so far I brought the phone for her to talk to them making sure if she said one word that was out of place or sounded suspicious. My brother was to disfigure her face with his Stanley knife that he wasn’t really allowed to have.
She done a good job at acting but towards the end when she told her darlings that she loved them she got watery eyed and I cut her off before the inevitable anguish.
“Who doesn’t need a good cry now and again? However there is a time and place!”
I saw how she treated her lovely children for a long time, she is crying for herself and not them. Crying because she has to lay down bound and gagged while my brother has her again, and again only stopping because his own body can’t go on anymore without sleep.
That’s why she is crying, she misses her old life, of fine dining her boring superficial friends, who aren’t her even friends. Her “Kept Up With the Jones” neighbors, who are my neighbors now. Her job that took most of her time away, though she enjoyed the attention of being a the “empowered career woman” . No wonder why Danny’s eyes strayed away. He saw my beauty, mr urge to help others, my love to his dear Lilly, and my knowledge of life.
Not to mention my body that was his as soon as he first tried to kiss me.
Now I’m part of his life, and it’s forever I know it is.

“After I check in with Diana I must…….meet with Bill. ( A work colleague, a thin slimy loser, divorced single and dangerous, not the sort of man you’d want around your husband in pubs late at night). He said we are going for a pint, it is Thursday” Danny looked back down and though he had to hide his fear of eating what I’d made. (I’d never poison him!) he did so with careful bites.
“Well I was going to make a cheeseboard later, and I got a nice bottle of wine and we’d catch up about old times” Posing as his cousin wasn’t as hard as it seemed. The children didn’t seem to care or notice. I carried on helping Lilly feed herself.

“Did you……” Danny couldn’t hide his disdain.
“I did, we must still catch up, and besides I’m sure Bill can manage on his own, he looks a man who enjoys his own company”

“I’m going for a pint with Bill, the game is on and I must…….clear my head” Danny put his knife and fork down.
“Well I’m here if you reconsider, taking care of your family, taking care of her…….” I meant only one person, who wasn’t present.  Danny knew what I meant.

The children finished up and I managed to get them to talk about school, their friends and teachers. Danny just sat with his head in his hands. Defeated and I brought him a paracetamol to ease “his headache”.

“You are working too hard Danny! This is your family, you have a bad migraine I think, so I really think a quiet night in will be better than drinking with Bill” I took his arm and walked him to the armchair and turned on the tv. “Now you relax, and I’ll make the tea. Kira, Carl I want to see books out and homework started after I change Lilly” I was in control. I loved this, being here and my maternal destiny had come alive. By the time of their mother ever did rescued or released. They will have forgotten about her, they’ll look to me. Grace the Governess! I like the sound of that.

I done the deeds. I helped Carl with his maths, I answered Kira’s questions about history. I read little Lilly her cot side book and let her sleep in my arms before I tucked her in.
“You’ve a proper mummy now Lilly” I whispered to her she she slept with the teddy I used to give her when I worked at the crèche.
“Sweet dreams little angel” I kissed her forehead and put the nightlight on.

I called into Carl who was playing his PlayStation. “10 more minutes it’s school tomorrow” I smiled. “Do you want some hot chocolate?” I knew he loved that.
“Oh yes please” He smiled.
I smiled back. “Marshmallows?” I knew what the answer would be.
“Yeah……wow Grace thanks, you’re just the best!” He beamed.
“I heard from Mum she was too busy to talk much, only a couple of texts!” His fade dropped. I sent them to him from her phone as I settled Lilly.
“She’s just busy Carl, she’s doing her best. That’s what she gets paid for!”
“She never had time for us” Carl looked down.
I sat down with him and held him close.
“Hey…don’t say that, I’m sure she’s a great mother when she’s around, don’t be sad”
Carl made a face. “She’s just never around  Grace” He then went back to his game and I felt sorry for the boy. He’ll have such a better life now I’m here I thought, they all will.

I saw Kira as she was in her room on her phone. She was sending a Tiktok  to someone. “Does Diana allow you to be on that?” I never did like the app. She hushed me.
“Yeah she does but don’t tell Dad he’s kind of old fashioned about it says it’s full of creeps.
“And he’s absolutely right, you really shouldn’t be Kira, I can’t believe Diana allows you” She put the phone away then.

“Hey, it’s fine, it’s just my friend Millie we are doing this dance routine and……..”
“Then do it when you are with her and not across the internet, the internet is a scary place, you just never know who can see that and really? Is Millie 12 too? And she dresses like that???” The girl that was on the screen was wearing little more than swimwear.
“Oh Grace don’t be that way!” She said with teenage sneer.
“Well I’m not your mother but I think I know what I’m talking about” I said with my own sneer but it was well hidden.
I bid her a goodnight, I didn’t want to get into an argument, she was always going to be the hardest challenge, but being a nearly a teenager she was oblivious to what was going on around her self centered bubble. I had sent her a text from    “Her mother” but it was barely acknowledged.

I came down to Danny who just sat with wide eyes of fear at the television.
I fetched the bottle of wine I bought earlier and the cheeseboard I had prepared in the day.

“Red wine, French……” I poured some into the two expensive feeling glasses, the type that seemed like a wedding present.
“Just stop……just stop this let me see Diana……Just let my wife go……” Danny pleaded. It was hard to see a man I loved so much in such anguish, but we needed to make the best of this situation.
I patted his arm and handing him a glass.
“It’s not going to be easy Danny, but the best things are never easy are they, she’s ok. Do you really want to see her again? After last time?” I smirked though I did feel bad for him.
Danny shuddered and with narrowed eyes stared at me with hatred.

The last time I shown him his wife, was the second night I was here, Danny wouldn’t perform on me, and begged to see his wife, so I let him see her. For an hour, on my phone, as my brother fulfilled his masculinity. It was rather uncomfortable seeing my brother doing anything sexual so I looked away but Danny had to watch. He had to watch her being taken hard and unforgiving, hearing her cry out each time my brother relentlessly satisfied himself on her naked bruised body.

“You don’t want to see your wife again” I said as I sat on the arm of the chair. “Take my word for it, she’s alive and my brother has even got a take away tonight so I’m sure they are ok, I’m more concerned about us” I put my hand on his knee and ran a finger up his leg.
“You are sick, you and your brother are both sick!” He raised his voice to unacceptable levels.
“Be quiet!” I scolded him in my irate tone.
“You’ll wake the children, and if they get any way effected in all this, it’s your fault!”I found his crotch and then gripped it gently, just enough to feel what was beneath.

“And believe me Danny, what I can do with my hands right now is nothing compared to what will happen to your precious Diana. The children don’t get effected and stay out of this, unharmed, and that’s been our arrangement since I moved in”
I enjoyed speaking with such control. I learned that from my father, through his drunken self loathing ramblings he taught me how to evoke terror when you needed to.

“Come on Danny, I’ve made an effort” I whispered in his ear as my hand relaxed  against his crotch feeling his parts through the fabric.
“Cheese board, wine, us…….! It’s what you’ve always wanted isn’t it” I kissed his neck and slowly undid the fly of his pants.

“Plus I found something nice to wear under this dress, must be your wife’s, still has the tags on it, but a better woman is wearing it now” . I had found a red and black lacy two  piece basque set with suspenders. I didn’t bother with stockings tonight. Diana was of similar size to me perhaps a bit taller but I think it looked well on me.

She must have bought it as a treat for him. However he was just too busy……with me…..in the back of his Mercedes, hotel rooms and against a tree in a large wooded area outside town.

Now he has me at home, his home, THEIR home, and though I’m facing reluctance on his part, that won’t go unpunished, I’m unwrapping my prize tonight as it slowly hardens against his will in my hand. He has all night to unwrap his present, and he will, HER life depends on it.

To be Continued.

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Re: Savage Grace.
« Reply #5 on: September 30, 2022, 05:30:54 PM »
The more I read of Grace the more disgusted I get and strangely aroused at the same time! How mentally deranged  is Grace to think that they will all come around and love her like she was their actual mother! God In this case I would love to read her background to learn what turned her to be this way! Merit to be awarded when allowed!
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« Reply #6 on: November 12, 2022, 09:52:52 PM »
My god, Jess. I absolutely love this story. May be one of your bests, but then they are all good.

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« Reply #7 on: December 11, 2022, 04:35:05 PM »
... I absolutely love this story...

me too :emot_thedrool.gif:
'Gone with the wind' like many others, is a fucking good story.
Unfortunatly, like many others, it lacks the fucking...

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« Reply #8 on: March 17, 2023, 06:41:35 PM »
On a different level altogether! Please come back someday and finish this
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« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2023, 10:26:14 AM »
Ask and you shall receive. Really pleased to return with this story and hope it tickles some fancies xxx

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« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2023, 10:26:41 AM »
His stubborn reluctance was not working with me.
“Do I need to show you what your precious wife is going through again?Come on we both know you don’t want that”
I really didn’t want to watch my deranged brother giving his wife Diana another night of horror but I would if it would get Danny interested in at least “pretending” he was into me. He really know how to make a girl feel unwanted. I’ll make him pay for it. I texted my brother and asked him to upload a video when he could. God knows how far he’d gone tonight and that was a detail I didn’t care for. I didn’t  care about Diana! She asked for this.

My phone vibrated and sure enough my brother sent a thumbs up emoji, followed by a wicked smile emoji.
“Want to change your mind?” I whispered  Danny into his ear and placed his hand on my knee.
“He withdrew it. You are sick, you are going to pay for it……, I’ll make you pay for this” He whispered with a shudder.
That was it I wasn’t playing games anymore. Either he wanted me or not, and I’d made it clear what happens when he didn’t.
“Well you can figure it out how to make me pay then,but  just remember you are the one who’s helpless here, I’m in your house, in your family’s life, I’ve the keys to your car, and as for your wife……, well I’ve always hated the term “damaged goods”.
It’s misogynistic nonsense,but in HER case I’ll make an exception” I said quite firmly waiting for a response.
I had so far taken care of her work calls and texts by simply “ arranging” a short career break and even passing on two cases to her colleagues. They just lapped it up, like a cat at a bowl of cream.
Diana had “retreated” from life to those on the outside. Only three people knew of the horror show she was now in. Four if Diana herself was included.

Danny just looked away and I could see through the silent anguish he was plotting a scheme to end this. The police were an option I suppose and I had thought of it, but as soon as my brother hears a siren or anything suspicious. Diana was dead, and I made sure Danny knew that. If it went really badly, I’d say my brother forced me to carry out these act and nothing would happen to me , but the good old English sob story. My father had a criminal record of violence over the years and of course that would have done it’s damage on my brother and I, according to the media at least and this Is England. Any such deeds can be made excusable to just mentioning “bad upbringing and no mother figure present in the house. While my thoughts became scatty in my head. My hands that ran from subconscious instructions had unleashed his erection of reluctance and slowly rubbed to reluctance twitching in his somber silence.
“That’s it, you know your male urges override any moral compass you have” I smugly sneered at him. His arousal was under my control and I decided when this was done.
“Fuck you” He growled at me. I laughed at him.
“If you wouldn’t mind….” I mocked him. His hardness twitched involuntarily in my hand. “At least a part of you is enjoying this” I jeered and spat on my hand to rub the saliva around his member.
I was beginning to not feel in the mood for it myself. It was better when he wanted me behind his wife’s back, but me being me I just wanted more than his cock inside me, I wanted her life, and went for it using the most brutal ruthless way possible. It was too late to turn back now.
I rubbed his pulsating erection faster and faster, his hand pressed on mine in an attempt to stop me. “Don’t be stupid” I whispered into his ear as he lost his breath. Then stretching my leg over his lap hiking up the dress and pulling the lacy fabric of my borrowed underwear to one side. I allowed my body to take his hot pre-cum oozing manhood inside me. I wasn’t that turned on and it hurt, for a moment as I clinched his back with my hands.
“Easy does it……” I gasped as I felt him fill me. Then I grabbed his mouth with my male smelling hand. “Lose it Danny and there’s no telling what she goes through tonight, I won’t protect her anymore and my brother will be truly unleashed” Danny looked away as I began to move up and down on his length and girth feeling it taking over my senses. Right in the best angle. If I relaxed, I may even climax, but that wasn’t the goal.
Danny panted under restraint, but his body had departed his mind. I kissed his neck and placed his hands on my rear that was encased by his wife’s lingerie.
He was going to remove them but my firmly pressing hands told him in ways words could not that he dare not.

I was very hot and wet, and my clit was being tickled to a throbbing frenzy by his raped Rod, I set the pace to how I wanted it and it was good. I tried to kiss his stubble surrounded lips and ended up just biting one as he groaned and his hands clutched my backside. Then I felt him come deep inside me. It almost set me off the edge as i bit into his lip drawing blood.
“I moved once more up and down his spent stem, easily with my juices and his, sending me to an orgasm of my own. I shuddered on top of him as his exerted breath let out snorts of disgrace and forced enjoyment.
I lunged forward and remained spread eagled across his lap. His manhood softened and withdrew with a sticky substance that I felt exit me with organ.

“That was great Danny, that was great….” I panted. Then I slowly got him and left him cursing me with hatred as he sat on the armchair covered with the essences of sex. I felt his semen and my wetness cling to his wife’s underwear. Then I went on my phone and checked messages . First it was a photograph . It was Diana and she sat in a dark dirty bedroom, looking pale and scared. She was in a white Disney Frozen t shirt and pink boy shorts  that seemed new.


“The lazy bedroom look, do you approve?” Charlie texted.
“It’s cute, I got what I wanted tonight” I texted back my brother. “Did she get the take away.
Not yet, but she’ll have it soon!” He sent with a wicked devil horn emoji.
Then I got a video. Even I found it quite revolting. It was a Chinese curry still in its silver take away foil platter. Diana looked horrified as the camera glinted on her.
“A night off love, and a take away!” My breathless brother said with a sardonic tone.
Then he positioned the camera down to his hardness and then the jets of his seed all over the food. Then he places the soiled Chinese next to her .
You’d better eat, I paid good money for that. Eat or else…..” Then the video cut out.
Just one last text. “She ate it, she was starving…..”
Through my disgust I smiled and looked over at Danny who sat silently with hatred.
“Good work tonight Danny, Diana has been spared somewhat. Then I got a glass of the wine and sipped it and put on the tv, while munching on the cheese and crackers.

I was loving my life.
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« Reply #11 on: March 20, 2023, 07:50:33 PM »
Oh that was just so wrong, Why did Danny have to ruin a good take out like that! God at least make it one that his cum would enhance the sause not get lost in it!  And what is she going to do if Danny begins to feel the stress about what is happening to Diana and that translates to him not being able to get it up!
 
Past that niggling thoughts I love the way she is manipulating Danny into being with her! Merit awarded from me to encourage you to write more, you naughty little vixen!
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« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2023, 05:13:48 PM »
It’s so twisted girl! That Grace is a complete nutty wan and her brother sounds worse and curry is my favorite thing from the Chinese, so nice one,  for making me think of that now haha.
Very good and just so messed up. Love it! There’s a merit in the curry too!  >:D

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« Reply #13 on: May 12, 2023, 08:46:24 AM »
Thank you both, I’ll get back to this soon. But your support is well appreciated xx

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« Reply #14 on: November 09, 2023, 12:04:02 PM »
I've been thoroughly enjoying the reading of this story, Jess! Grace is indeed one of your most twisted, deluded, and insidious characters. And you've had some good ones in past stories. To read about her doting on Lilly with all of her maternal tendencies and then the psychotic, evil games she's playing with Danny and Diana, it's a real rollercoaster of a story! Please continue!
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