Love the historical accuracy in you story. Nice to see the photos. adds to the feel of the story without detracting from the words. Nice that no female was spared from the monks. Great use to have the rapists made up to resemble monks for who would suspect them of being sex maniacs! Merit to be awarded when allowed!
Thanks carhamgrater! Glad you enjoyed reading my story. I think images are very useful to set the atmosphere for a historical setting and show the female characters' hair and dress style.
I absolutely love the fashion of women's dress in this time period; having all these bourgeois housewife brutally undressed and gang-raped by the hijackers was a huge, huge turn-on! I loved writing all the rape scenes, but if I had to pick, my personal favorites were Betty and Wan Yan. Wan Yan's rape was a treat I ended up serving for dessert.
This was a contest with a 7,000 word limit and I had to write the entire story as one long chapter, so it proved a great exercise to create a nice round completed story. A word limit is also awesome as a learning tool for a writer who tends to be too wordy in descriptions. I've read some of Roxxon's work, and I feel she's one of the very best in being concise while giving the reader a complete feel of being there and watching all the action unfolding.