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Offline EnabranTain

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Presented
« on: June 24, 2021, 10:05:56 PM »
Chains tinkle like windchimes as they stretch up to a ceiling unseen in the dark
from arms held high above flowing crimson locks

A spotlight coldly draws focus
on the straining nymph
Cool air calls forth goosebumps on tan tender flesh
while the soft sound of water drips echo on concrete

Blue eyes dart with hope
to pierce the black
They give up their tears
in lazy trails, smearing dark shadow down freckled cheeks
then onto pert breasts trembling
with balance precariously held
as legs spread wide with shackles bound
cannot hold her weight much longer

please and
why me she
she queries the void
this special nymph most ripe
Her soft petals quiver, a flower most precious
flourished by her stance
From behind a hand reaches
fingers press firm
her vulnerable center stretched beyond comfort

Because you are perfect
answers the void
No one bad is ever truly bad, and no one good is ever truly good.
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carhamgrater
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Re: Presented
« Reply #1 on: June 25, 2021, 09:14:46 AM »
Your words make me feel that I am the predator about to molest the chain beauty. Once more a poem that just screams to me to be written out into a full story! Merit awarded from me!

Offline EnabranTain

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Re: Presented
« Reply #2 on: June 25, 2021, 11:58:27 AM »
Your words make me feel that I am the predator about to molest the chain beauty. Once more a poem that just screams to me to be written out into a full story! Merit awarded from me!

Thank you again, you’re too kind.
I may do as you suggest, but if you feel so inclined, please feel free to use any of these yourself as well!
No one bad is ever truly bad, and no one good is ever truly good.
-Loki

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Re: Presented
« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2021, 04:28:13 AM »
Wonderful words, delicious detail, I love the ending...
"Knowing your own darkness is the best method for dealing with the darkness of other people." Karl Jung.
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Offline EnabranTain

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Re: Presented
« Reply #4 on: August 09, 2021, 10:46:54 PM »
Wonderful words, delicious detail, I love the ending...

Thank you. That means a lot coming from someone whose work I admire!
No one bad is ever truly bad, and no one good is ever truly good.
-Loki

More of my stories can be found at
AO3KB, or RU