Incredible! As I was reading the early part of this, I was thinking to myself "This reminds me an awful lot of a story that I read on ASSTR a long time ago" only to come to realize that it is in fact, the same one. "Lisa's Chronicles Book 1", yes?
Checking the date of my copy, it was saved in 2003, so quite a long while indeed.
While I had always secretly hoped that it would be Kaley whose life would be taken by Lisa, the fact that the tale ended with the snuffing of her understudy was still very much welcomed and appreciated by me! <3
In my short time on ravishu, as a lifelong lover of evil women in erotic fiction, I've enjoyed virtually everything that I've read which has been written by you, amandablonde, but seeing a blast from the past finally return with its conclusion was an extra nice treat!