Author Topic: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare  (Read 33205 times)

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #105 on: July 19, 2019, 09:42:29 AM »
this is the first story of yours i read and it's still an awesome and great story. great work here!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #106 on: July 19, 2019, 05:23:17 PM »
I loved it that despite all the brutal abuse she still came and she accepted it.
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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #107 on: August 10, 2019, 12:05:35 AM »
I've reread this multiple times,  this story is perfect in every way

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #108 on: May 08, 2024, 01:39:08 AM »
Hooray for no Hollywood ending !!!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #109 on: May 09, 2024, 01:29:05 PM »
Thank you for reloading this masterpiece.  I can't remember seeing it before.  Great characterisation, very good to read.

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #110 on: May 09, 2024, 08:58:22 PM »
This story must continue with the further adventures of the gang, and the lovely girls at the new bar. And more flashbacks of previous victims.

Who else thinks so? Perhaps we can convince vile8r ??!!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #111 on: May 10, 2024, 10:07:19 AM »
Thank you all for digging this out of the archives! It flatters me that a story that is like 12-13 years old still gets such attention.
A sequel with Chester and his boys?   Well, I'll give it some thought.
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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #112 on: May 15, 2024, 04:12:11 PM »
This story is so good, it's ungodly!
It isn't the 'Prowling Kid' at all, it's his little sister!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #113 on: May 16, 2024, 08:48:08 PM »
Please continue the story with Chester and the boys. Please continue any of your stories, all of your stories are amazing!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #114 on: May 18, 2024, 12:07:38 PM »
Some questions for everyone asking for a sequel:  Would you want it to be a story that happens soon after the events of the first story? Or would you like it to be more current, taking place now in 2024, with Chester, Lyle and Norm all being 12 or 13 years older?

And would you want Chester to still have Norm and Lyle as his sidekicks, or maybe some new ones?
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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #115 on: May 18, 2024, 03:50:48 PM »
I'd suggest, as you don't (as far as I remember) specify a date or time period in the original, I'd just stick with whatever possibility excites you more as a writer.

For me it's always chasing / maintaining the inspiration that is the key to enjoying and finishing a story.
It isn't the 'Prowling Kid' at all, it's his little sister!

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #116 on: May 18, 2024, 08:26:16 PM »
Some questions for everyone asking for a sequel:  Would you want it to be a story that happens soon after the events of the first story? Or would you like it to be more current, taking place now in 2024, with Chester, Lyle and Norm all being 12 or 13 years older?

And would you want Chester to still have Norm and Lyle as his sidekicks, or maybe some new ones?

I'd prefer keeping the same gang. Also it's be nice to have a story set in the past with one of the previous victims, maybe told in a detailed flashback, while they continue with a new girl. And as a change, how about an Asian girl? They are small and tight, and I'm sure they can make her scream.

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #117 on: May 19, 2024, 09:09:32 PM »
All options are good, but it depends if you're going to make it a single story orr let it lead to future and past events that carry on for awhile, but whatever you choose I'm sure it will be great. Thank you for posting great stories for us.

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Re: Sports Bar Waitress' Nightmare
« Reply #118 on: Yesterday at 02:36:13 PM »
Ho I am really excited for a new story with this gang I hope we could read some parts soon! A prequel or a story set in 2024 are fine for sure it's your choice. But it's always great when the victim is around 18, and even better a virgin one, just saying my opinion here. And Obiwan as a nice point about a small Asian girl it could be different, but again it's your choice and they are always great!