Author Topic: And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}  (Read 959 times)

Offline Swashbuckler

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And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}
« on: October 13, 2015, 12:36:08 PM »
I press the head
Of my cock
Gently against
Her trembling petals
The tip of the dagger
Pressing cold
On her hot skin,
So pale, so afraid
I stare
Into her teary eyes
The silence
Shatters to her scream
The tip of the blade
Digs her skin
Two pounds of pressure
And she begins
To bleed
Her body shakes
As I thrust forward
My cock stabbing
Her defenseless sex
One motion
Two thrusts
One scream
Eyes wide
Terror and pain
I roll my hips
I twist the hilt
She screams out of breath
Her cunt clenches
In pain and fear
I grin
And now I begin…





Inspired by Brokenwing, thank you for the inspiration.





~Swash~
If you are about to enter a conversation that can only end in a sabre stroke or a pistol shot; you should choose your words carefully.  For they may be your last.
~Swash~                                        
Yes I am a pirate,
Three hundred years too late
The cannons dont thunder,
There's nothing to plunder
Im just a forty-something victim of fate
Arriving too late, arriving too late    - - - J. B.





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Offline Brokenwing

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Re: And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2015, 03:08:26 PM »
Wow.  How appropriate for the first poem I have inspired. 

I find it very well written and very hot.  I imagined both penetrations as I read your words. 

I can imagine your muse holding as still as possible eyes locked with yours, fearing the damage of your blade but also forced to fear the consequences of the penetration of your cock as well but more of what it might leave behind. 

Thanks Swash!
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Offline jennifer kilmey

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Re: And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2019, 11:26:57 PM »
Oooh.... wonderfully dark and sexy.
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Offline meemeemomo

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Re: And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2020, 08:25:00 PM »
that was wonderful.  It was sexy, after all that he feels he's just starting at the end.

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Re: And Now I Begin {free verse, rape, knife, blood}
« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2021, 05:41:53 PM »
I like the imagery you create and the simplistic form of this poem. Really good!
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