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Offline To-Get-Her

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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #15 on: February 08, 2023, 06:10:10 PM »
Absolutely love the interlude! As if making it an infomercial for new products was genius. The continuation of Vanessa's story line was logically handled and proved that your inclusion on the update "Must Read Author" List was the correct thing to do! Merit awarded from me!
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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2023, 10:27:31 AM »
I'm loving this story, graheg!

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I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2023, 03:42:28 AM »
review excerpt by our client, "Mr Daniels"

dear Girldfriend farm. thank you so much for amanda. I enjoyed lying down on her spreadeagled body and eating syrup out of her ass.

the caning sessions also turned me on alot and as promised , i did not break any of her skin.

and such amazing skin she has! smooth and fresh.

and of course, the best time last night was good old doggie all night long. i used three of the five flavoured gels i bought from you. my top picks are vanilla, coffee cream and creame brulee. very tasty and very slippery when mixed with water. all i have to do is  spit on parts I’ve lathered and  I’m easily sliding in and out of her holes.


here are some photos from the earlier part of my 4 hours with her, when i was just getting her naked.









« Last Edit: February 10, 2023, 08:27:49 AM by graheg »

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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2023, 10:52:59 AM »
what a joy to find this one on my bed.

bound and gagged in the very same dress you see.



she's been brutally hogtied by elder brother, the beast. his technique is standard.

heavy duty black zip ties. pulling her arms behind her back, secured at the wrists, elbows and upper arms. Her legs, at the ankles, knees. She was lying on her side facing away from the door. Her legs have been pulled back and secured to her wrist with more zip ties.

I understand that our matron did the gagging.

Poor little weeping Kae. Just turned 18.

Black wrap tape gagged tight.  Ugly brown sweat thickened bra stuffed in her mouth. I must watch the gagging video. It’s already up for pay per view.

She found not see me as I opened the door. But she could hear me.

“sweeeeetie pieeeee” I cooed.

She started crying noisily into her gag.

I think she didn’t dare turn to see. It’s ok. I’ll just sit on the bed from behind her. Heighten her distress.

She wept louder when she felt the bed sink behind her. I leaned forward to look at her face.

Eyes screwed shut, tears streaming.

I put my hand on her waist. Felt the soft material of her pink sundress. Leaned in to smell her hair.

Fruity and light

She panicked and struggled and started to trash.

A hogtie is an effective thing.

“Where you wanna go?” I disturbed her.

“You wanna go home?”

She started nodding naively, frantically.

I mimicked a sad voice. “ but I want to peel off your panties with my mouth. I can’t let you go home…”

She let out a dismal sound.

I rolled my body over her body without warning, scooped my left arm under her chest and pulled her close. Her eyes shot open to see my unshaven, mangled face. She screamed. My right hand grabbed her ankles and pulled her body to mine.

like a male dog pissing, I raised my thick right leg and went over her hips to bolster her. I clamped her body to me, right arm closing the tight hug. 

I buried my face in her small neck, pushed my groin into her dress and whispered.

“I’m wearing a red lacy thong….”

I kissed her ears.

“what colour panties are you wearing?”

she was half choking-crying, eyes again shut. Body trembling.

I rocked her like a baby.

“I’m going to take my time with you.” I kissed her forehead

She cried in my arms.

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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #19 on: February 10, 2023, 01:44:58 PM »
Loving the customer review, very original. Now you have me wondering if you get anti-farm postings or bad complaints?

Like how he gently inserted himself into Kae's existence, as if he was trying to make her want to be with him after the abuse at the hands and cock of the beast!

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Re: the girlfriend farm
« Reply #20 on: February 22, 2023, 10:40:03 AM »
Really like this story, the setup and slow building, the interludes. Please write more  :D