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Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« on: January 07, 2023, 11:53:54 PM »
Warning!    You must be 18 or over to read these stories of rape and non consensual sex. If you do not like such stories, please turn back. I don't promote rape or non-consensual sex. This is only a story, fiction, if you do not understand the difference between reality and fantasy, read no more. All the characters in this story are or over the age of 18 and human.  Rape is a heinous crime and the penalty is many years in prison. Anyone who commits rape are despised everywhere. But fantasies are all right so long as no one is hurt.

NOTE:
This is an entry for the "What's Old is New" January 2023 Story Writing Contest.
It is a rewrite, redraw, and extension of a work I started here:
http://ravishu.com/forums/index.php?topic=44663.0
The story in it's entirely will be posted in multiple entries throughout January during the rewrite process, enjoy!

Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival
(M+/F, nc, viol)

Final exams were over, and for Candice, graduation couldn't come soon enough.   Keeping her head in schoolbooks, test scores and GPA were her entire world.  She dreamed of doing something experimental related to biology.  So Candice only picked big city colleges in other states.  She was done with small town America, at eighteen years old, she could finally pack up and leave this place for good.

In this forlorn steel mill town, the only event of note was the carnival.  It rolled in mysteriously, seemingly propping up in the blink of an eye.  The ragweed laden railyards were now bustling with activity, lined with booths and trailers as far as the eye could see.



In the humid night air, the neon lights brought fleeting life to the country atmosphere.  Organ music and country songs filled the senses with majestic cacophony. 

Everyone from town was here, including nearly the entirety of her high school.  Candice went with a dozen of her senior class "friends".  Soon, she'd bid them goodbye, not intending to see them ever again.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2023, 03:32:38 AM »
Loving the setup, looking forward to reading more

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2023, 09:32:03 AM »
They were technically adults now.  Feeling that carnival games were beneath them now, they sought more adventure. 

The carnival train caboose had unfamiliar looking visitors entering every few minutes.  Something good must have been brewing...

Darb, the self-appointed leader of the group strode up to the door.  The meathead football jock knocked heartily on the door, resulting in an opened sliding eye panel found on stereotypical speakeasys. 



The eyes looked Darb up and down.

"Fuck you want?  Get lost kid!"

"Hey!  We want to know what's going on in there, we're like adults now, 18...  all of us!"

"I don't give a shit how old you are, this is carny business, move the fuck along."

The panel shut emphatically, leaving the group hanging.

Darb pounded on the door once again, with no response.

"Let's just go, we're wasting our time," Candice remarked and began walking off.

He wanted to punch the door, to show everyone that he was the alpha in command like he fashioned himself out to be.  But Darb felt the better of it and stood down.  That's what impressed him so much about Candice, she was just... different. 

She didn't seem to like aggressive muscular guys or the testosterone infused jock crowd.  She was just all class... so smart, so pure with a heart of gold.  If he wanted to stand a chance with her, he'd have to act differently, like a gentleman he surmised. 

Ever since he laid eyes on her, Darb had an immense crush on her.  He asked Candice out repeatedly, and the subsequent denials just overloaded his raging hormones.

The group weaved their way through the substantial crowd.  Darb followed closely alongside Candice.  When she wasn't looking, he'd ogle her tight body. 



The crazy thing was how she oozed sexuality without even trying.  Everyone knew she didn't put out, making Candice even more of the innocent object of unattainable fantasy.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2023, 10:15:22 AM »
Love the setup :emot_kiss.gif:

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2023, 05:09:23 PM »
OOH! A new classic from TheYellowKnight! Carnal delights at the carnival? Hehe! Candice looks like a girl who is going to become a fun ride!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2023, 11:37:32 AM »
Candice stopped abruptly, startled by the sudden movement of what she thought was a life size prop.

"Come one!  Come all!  Enter the funhouse, the scariest place on earth!"

"Ugghnn... nah uhh... no way," she stammered.



Holy shit clowns were scary, she trembled.  In fact, for Candice, it was downright an absolute phobia just from merely seeing one.  Nothing unnerved her normally calm collected persona.  Nothing.  Except clowns...

Her heart was racing, her skin crawled, clamming with a sheen of perspiration at the sight of the clown's odd mannerisms.  Fingers tingling, her gut nearly wanted to puke from the fear.  The seemingly endless pool of dark eyes drove her back into the comfort of Darb of all people.

Darb sensed an opportunity, puffing his chest out.

"Haha, we should go in and get away from this freak!," he barked.

Actually, it didn't sound like such a bad idea... Anything to get away from this creepy clown and Darb's sudden proximity felt like better options to her at the moment.

"Y-yes, let's go in!, " as Candice, begging her friends with her baby blues.

The funhouse was a large building.  She wondered how they were able to erect such a massive structure for a traveling show.  With a one dollar admission fee, she also wondered how this act could financially sustain itself. 
In his neanderthal brain, he hatched a plan to stay close to Candice.  He could capitalize on his manliness, to safeguard and impress her from the scary stuff inside.  And then she'd capitulate, astonished by his grand display of bravery.  His mind fantasized, aided by the sultry sight of her ass as they entered.



"Come on guys, let's check it all out!"
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #6 on: January 11, 2023, 12:03:35 PM »
Loving the set up, and your images and motion is just awesome.

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #7 on: January 13, 2023, 09:41:21 PM »
The group went in, laughing along the corridors as contrived machinery and props set out to scare them in the dark.  Candice had to admit, this was pretty good, despite the feel of Darb constantly invading her personal space. 

The narrow tunnels soon opened up to an expansive hallway, as a singular light bulb seemed to cascade everywhere.  Reflections seemed to bounce ubiquitously, as they soon realized it was nothing but mirrored walls set in oblique angles.

"Oh, hello!" Candice laughed as she saw her reflection reaching out towards her hand.  There seemed to be hundreds of her and everyone else.  The images of themselves seemed to stretch like an accordion, to infinity.  The mirrored maze was huge, and the curiosity got the best of everyone.  Eventually, everyone in the group was physically separated, as images no longer made navigational sense.



Now it was getting weird.  Were the walls moving?? Candice kept reaching out, touching nothing but glass as she meandered through the labyrinthine passages.  She thought she caught a glimpse of Darb, and walked towards his form, only to see it vanish.

 Eventually, everything got quiet... too quiet, except for the sound of intermittent screams.  As the stillness only served to reveal a singular sound, the sound of sniffing behind her.

Just the sight of it caused the most adverse of reactions, then everything in her world went black from the fear.



"I didn't get to use my taser," It mused, in disappointment.

Ah well, he thought of the various options of Candice's fate, and a slow smile crept across it's face.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2023, 04:53:47 AM »
A slow, expectant smile creeps across my face too!   >:D

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2023, 08:37:59 AM »
I'm loving the clown character! Evil clowns and hot girls! A great combination.
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #10 on: January 15, 2023, 11:53:56 PM »
Fear suddenly gripped her mind, whatever she was in, was narrow, lined with dilapidated corrugated steel.  It was stuffy in here, the air still with eerie quiet.

Until something shuffled from behind...



What?  Was.  That?!?

Candice gasped out loud, paralyzed in disbelief. This thing that emerged before her, could only exist in horror fiction dreamt by the most deviant of minds.

Perhaps it was an act.  Yes, yes, maybe just part of the freak show in the funhouse.

Except... it's nakedness was a dead giveaway that this was no act.
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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #11 on: January 17, 2023, 09:43:33 AM »
OH WOW! What twisted monstrosity has YellowKnight come up with this time?  :emot_weird.gif: I truly love the imagination that goes into these stories! Candice is in a very terrifying situation. Merit from me!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #12 on: January 19, 2023, 10:16:09 PM »



She shrieked at the sight of what appeared to be conjoined twins.

The bigger siamese twin labored to amble closer, bearing the dual weight of bodies on it's own.

The second looked her up and down, in a disturbing approving manner, like predator assessing prey.

Her mind could not put two and two between the scene before her and whatever reality she could reconcile.  Those baby blues now focused squarely at the horrifying scene growing between it's legs.



Her legs suddenly felt like jelly.  It was like staring down a weapon that portended the fate of one's impending doom.  And they were still growing in size and length, drooling, much to her abject panic.

That thing continued to strut towards her.  It's two dangling appendages became less floppy, pointing with far more attention at her direction.  The musk emanating from cock and balls were now in alarming proximity.

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #13 on: January 20, 2023, 08:19:18 AM »
What hellspawn has YellowKnight devised for us? Run, Candice, run! Oh dear, you have no place to run!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: Candice: Destroyed at the Carnival (Jan 2023 Story Contest)
« Reply #14 on: January 20, 2023, 10:15:18 PM »
"W-what do you want," Candice managed to ask, realizing the futility of the question.  Pressing the back of her body against the bars, there was no escape.

Twin one answered by grabbing her arms.  A lifetime burden of carrying his twin had conditioned him with extraordinary strength.  He lifted Candice with ease, leaving her to dangle in a mock crucifixion-like posture.

There was the initial shock of being suspended in midair with such ease.  Now her brain kicked into survival overdrive, as she struggled to break free, only to sap her remaining energy.

"Please!  Don't!  Nooooooo!"

Twin two, as usual, reaped the rewards of his brother's brawn.  With hands free, he could focus on examining their newfound plaything.



Twin two was no slouch in the strength department either.  His wiry arms rippled and bulged, manhandling her clothing.  The split down her neckline easily tore down the seam, as steel-like hands rendered the fabric, like tissue.

Rough fingers instinctively grabbed at her waistline, hooking the top of her sexy jean shorts and thin panties.  Once they skimmed over the snug flare of her hips and ass, the fabric slipped quickly past her tapered thighs.



And just like that, Candice was completely exposed, shivering at her destitute vulnerability.  With the humiliation of being forcibly stripped, her cheeks flushed, enduring the dual lustful gazes that examined her exposed curves.

The twins both whistled simultaneously, marveling at her bouncy but taut flesh that was ripe for perverse abuse.  And they couldn't wait to get started...
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