Author Topic: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added  (Read 6711 times)

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #45 on: May 24, 2020, 08:17:44 AM »
Thank you Hanshansen. Much appreciated .

Shocker
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #46 on: May 24, 2020, 09:47:31 AM »
Excellent conclusion, loved that she jumps at the opportunity to make another girl miserable. So much for empathy due to experience.

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #47 on: May 24, 2020, 09:57:10 AM »
Thanks so much Shocker

Offline Rachel_Thornton

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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #48 on: May 24, 2020, 01:46:58 PM »
Well done for this story. Loved reading every humiliating moment that you put Ashley through and the final task was just as dirty and nasty as imagined.
Really felt like you enjoyed writing this as well as it seems like something you put a lot of work into.
So now Ashley is in the cliq and has an entire year to think what she is going to do to Megan, I only hope you consider writing this at some point.
Wonderfully presented and written. Merit for sure!!

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #49 on: May 24, 2020, 01:52:28 PM »
Thanks Rachel. It was challenging :) I may pick it up at that point. You never know. Thanks for your support.

SheerHose33
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #50 on: May 24, 2020, 05:25:54 PM »
Excellent conclusion and I must say it was a hot read throughout.
Liked the humiliation aspect a lot more than I first thought I would
And this story is a great introduction to any new comers to the section
She passed and does that mean she’s the new Lisa? I think also you can do a sequel to this But that’s up to you of course I liked what we got immensely so a merit from me too xx

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #51 on: May 24, 2020, 05:29:15 PM »
Too kind, Jessica. Thanks so much.

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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #52 on: May 25, 2020, 07:23:29 AM »
Great finale DL, very enjoyable read - do we have to wait a year for the sequel? LOL

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #53 on: May 25, 2020, 08:05:17 AM »
lol. Thanks Angie

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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #54 on: June 02, 2020, 03:00:31 AM »
I had an accident where I almost died.
When I die, I want to leave good things to the world.
That's why I'm deleting all my stories.
I respect everyone's opinions, have fun.
« Last Edit: February 03, 2022, 04:51:00 PM by goodpoint »

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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #55 on: June 02, 2020, 03:14:10 AM »
I had an accident where I almost died.
When I die, I want to leave good things to the world.
That's why I'm deleting all my stories.
I respect everyone's opinions, have fun.
« Last Edit: February 03, 2022, 04:52:32 PM by goodpoint »

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #56 on: June 02, 2020, 04:54:41 AM »
This is perfect story and perfect end.
İ admire your writing.  :emot_bravo.gif: :emot_bravo.gif:

But i want to extend the story little more.
I have different ideas about Megan prince.
if you let me add it here

I have to change the end of the story a little bit for this.
Because to be able to connect the story to Megan. Then I ll write Megan and Ashley and Lisa... :)

I m waiting for permission from owner the story..


Feel free to write what ever you want.   Have fun :)

Offline goodpoint
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #57 on: June 02, 2020, 06:16:47 AM »
I had an accident where I almost died.
When I die, I want to leave good things to the world.
That's why I'm deleting all my stories.
I respect everyone's opinions, have fun.
« Last Edit: February 03, 2022, 04:51:22 PM by goodpoint »

darklord
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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #58 on: June 02, 2020, 06:40:51 AM »
Look forward to reading it :)

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Re: Ashley's Hell Week Conclusion added
« Reply #59 on: June 02, 2020, 06:51:20 PM »
I had an accident where I almost died.
When I die, I want to leave good things to the world.
That's why I'm deleting all my stories.
I respect everyone's opinions, have fun.
« Last Edit: February 03, 2022, 04:51:29 PM by goodpoint »