It was a new job. It was money she needed. Yes it was bartending, and yes it was in a shitty part of town. But it was somewhere willing to hire her. So maybe the place had a reputation. And maybe the patrons were mostly black and mexican. But she was hot, and everyone knew hot bartenders made great tips. Her first night working had been interesting so far. To say the least. The place was noisy. And the patrons were rude, and loud, several people had yelled at her for being too slow or messing up their drinks. But some of the guys there had been nice. They had bought her some drinks, and with the night she was having she needed the alcohol to just make it through without breaking down crying. And so what if a few guys had groped her every time she came out from behind the bar. It's not like it was anything that bad, and it was a bar people got a little rowdy sometimes. But it had been several drinks, and the night was going by quickly. 3 am was quick approaching, then she could go home. Just another shot or two to get through, a little too tipsy to notice that the rest of the staff, the other bartenders, the servers, the bouncers, had all gone home. She was serving drinks to the last few people in the bar. A really tall black guy with lots of tattoos that kind of reminded her of Mike Tyson. A pair of mexican brothers who kept asking her to do shots with them. And a tall skinny white guy who said his name was Squeezy and who looked to be lost inside his oversized basketball jersey "okay guys, we're closing up. What'll you have"?

 Hector and Jose sat next to each other. The two of them looked so similar it was hard to tell them apart. They had actually switched seats when she turned around a few times just so they could complain that she had forgotten their names and demand free drinks in recompense. Both were a little on the short side, at 5'6" and 5'7". Both had short crew cut black hair, both had skin that was dark even for mexicans. They were day laborers, landscaping, construction, shitty jobs that required long hours in the sun and hard work. They both wore brown button up shirts, workers uniforms, and they had both been opening buttons on them as they drank to show of tight muscular chests. Hector catches her looking at his cross necklace, and takes it as a sign to pull open his shirt to show off the huge virgin mary tattoo he had on his left pec. "Hey you like it baby? You want one? I got a friend who can cover you in tats really nice, real cheap. We can take you there now."

 Shaking her head no , she responded "no thank you Jose, I told you. It's closing time". She paused to look around. It was eerily empty. Nearly devoid of life except for this bunch. She turned to pick up empty glasses and set them on the tray she was balancing on her right hand. Then wiping the table. But also looking at the door and frowning. The twin bouncers were gone.

Turning back to the others she said "come on guys, I wanna go home to bed before the sun comes up"

The two of them laugh together briefly. Squeezy giggles along, though he looks a little lost in his own little world. Jose agrees "Soon baby soon. We just want to finish drinking. You can't kick us out with drinks, it's the law." He claims.
"But look you've been working real hard tonight. You've been doing a good job for us. And I've been watching, you haven't gotten many tips. People been so rude. So I got a tip for you right here." He raises he right hand, a folded up $100 bill in it. "All yours, but I get to pick where I put it. It's a big tip it's only fair."

She was frowning as she listened to them and caught the skinny white guys eyes watching her. She smiled at him, then returned her attention to the others. She isn't sure why, but she feels he's somehow in control. Even though the others are far more intimidating. Looking up, she sighed. It had been a slow night. And made her question herself why she bothered to work at all." Well I don't know. Part of the reason I don't have a ton of tips is, you guys have kept me busy, and so therefore the tips, if they're lacking, is your fault." She smiled.."least that's my thinking.How about if you tell me where you want to put it first"?
The three of them laugh, even the tall black man chuckles as Jose responds "I think I'd start with that pretty mouth first." He laughs and takes another pull on his beer, finishing the glass and tapping the side to indicate he wants more. "It's alright though, if you don't want it. Some people can't handle big money." He folds the bill into palm, then slips four singles onto the bar for his drink. "But if you do want it, just after you put the drink down, just put your hands down on the bar and close your eyes."
She heard where and actually thought it sounded innocent, considering where she thought he'd say. Once again she let her eyes drift across each of them.The black guy was saying nothing, but watching. She caught herself thinking about his size, then brought her mind back. Stepping around she filled the glass with Coors light beer from the tap and set it in front of him.."it's illegal for me to mix drinks. Or fix drinks. Or sell them, so keep your dollar bills Mr big spender." She paused and snapped.."and I told you. We're closed. So, no more after this".

She stood looking at them across the bar...and saying softly.." hurry the fuck up, I hate not being able to see" ,then placed her hands on the bar, shoulder width apart, she closed her eyes and opened her mouth

 

Oh this is going to be so good. Dawn as a bar tender.  I need to go there.  Looks like another sizzling story you got brewing up with these three hooligans.   Can’t wait to read more.   Love the pic btw.

Oh this is going to be so good. Dawn as a bar tender.  I need to go there.  Looks like another sizzling story you got brewing up with these three hooligans.   Can’t wait to read more.   Love the pic btw.

thank you darklord. And you need glasses. Not for the picture, but there are four!

Nothing happened for a few seconds.Then there is the sound of shuffling as the four of them look back and forth at each other. Jose had planned on just slipping the bill into her bra and grabbing a cheap feel, but seeing her standing there with her mouth wide open gave him an entirely different idea. He pointed to the large black man and then to one of her hands. He didn't need to tell his brother what he's thinking as he quickly stands. As silently as he can he climbs onto the bar. Then as one the black man and hector each grab one of her hands, holding them down on the bar as Jose pushes his pants down to his thighs, freeing his dark brown nine inch cock. He shoved it right into her open mouth, grabbing the sides of her head with his hand he starts thrusting wildly into her mouth, trying to push it down the back of her throat. "YEEaaaaahhh! Mexican dinner for you tonight!"

She heard them shuffling around. And told herself and them, if they were listening." I'm in charge here and you best hurry". More noise..she could feel them closer. No real reason? It's just a feeling as the tiny white hairs on the back of her neck stood on end. Then she felt her hands grabbed. And if she had thought to close her mouth as her eyes opened to find two of them holding her hands down, seeing them, would have made it fall open. Before she could even bring her eyes up to Jose, she had swallowed a dark veiny cock. Well, not quite swallowed, but not from lack of effort..it was in her mouth. And poking her throat. Slightly tipsy, she started to suck in response, before she gave it a thought

 "Ohh someone trained this one already! Maybe she's a natural! You suck a lot of cock baby?" He yells loudly as his right hand gets a handful of her hair, dragging her face back and forth as he thrusts into her mouth. He's got a thick mat of black pubic hair that starts to tickle her nose as he goes deeper. The thick smell of his balls from sweating in his pants all day fills her nose. "Lick it baby! Lick it!" Jose encourages her. As Jose enjoys her mouth, Hector reached out his free hand, unbuttoning her shirt while she's distracted.
With her hands held tight to the bar, she had no choice really. But after sucking a moment then hearing him talking about her, she whimpered and blushed. It rushed to fill her face and into her neck. As he began using her face like a pussy, pulling her mouth on and off his cock, it did two things. It got bigger and harder and it slipped into her throat.

Her reaction was to gag, choke, slobber and her feet started doing a little tap dance. Nervously shifting from one foot to the next.

And trying to convince herself.."it'll just be him. It's just a blow job." She must be winning the argument as she sucked harder...eyes watering profusely
"Ahh fuck this little white cocksucker is good. Take out her titties, I want to cum on her titties!" Jose yells as he builds close to cumming. Hector had already unbuttoned her top and was now popping open the button on her pants. The black man looked from her face, where he was watching her cheek and neck bulge to her chest. Her black bra holding her tits up as they sway back and forth from the motion against her face. With one hand he grabbed the bra over her left tit, squeezing it hard then pulling it away from her body. He tugs her forward until her hips hit the back of the bar and stop, then the fabric tears right off at the seams, leaving him to pull away the shredded cloth.

Things changed in a hurry as he reminded her, of the obvious contrast in skin colors. And caused her to turn crimson...then hearing him she tried in futility to shake her head"no"..she did not want her tits out. And she damn sure didn't want his cum on them.But even as she tried, she felt her blouse opening and thinks..."oh my god my pants too!" A hand has found her tit. It must be a huge hand as it covers most of it and starts squeezing...she felt him pulling..then gasped as her bra. Just a thin piece of fabric designed to keep her tits from bouncing, was disintegrating
The button open, Hector slid his hand under the front of her pants. Firm hard fingers pushing her panties aside and two of them forcing their way into her cunt. Jose lets out a yell as his dick starts to spasm. He pulled back, stroking his cock quickly as he starts to cum. The first shot of it landing across her nose and lips, the rest shooting down onto her neck and over her tits, thick sticky white globs dripping down over her big round breast. "Aye fucking sluts wear white!" Jose yells as he finishes jerking himself off onto her.

 

Oh this is going to be so good. Dawn as a bar tender.  I need to go there.  Looks like another sizzling story you got brewing up with these three hooligans.   Can’t wait to read more.   Love the pic btw.

thank you darklord. And you need glasses. Not for the picture, but there are four!

Lol.  Yes. I missed squeeky. somehow.  What a great name for a character.

[just me]

omg .. bite girl .. bite hard  

What an intense follow up.  Just what we expect from a Dawn story.  Hot and gritty action.  Merit from me. 

Oh Dawn! Excellent classic premise, which as an ex waitress I can relate to somewhat.
The rapists are a fantasy and big mean bad guys who are going to take our starlet down all the way.
Somehow I don’t think she’ll be wearing anything.
So far a reluctant blowjob and an unwanted cumshot with some groping, a slow and steady pace that teases me and this is what I crave. In other words I bloody love it! And a merit has your name on it with a smooch, we’ll done xxxx

[vile8r]

Dear Dawn, Ohhhh I'm loving this. Very hot as only our Miss Dawnamber can do! I like the portrayal of your characters, Hector and Jose, the anonymous black guy, and then the white douche-bag, Squeezy! A real gathering of dirtbags. It's early in the story, but already you warrant a couple dancing penises!

 

Omg Dawn that was soooooooooooo hot!!!!!!  Very well done I loved it. Here’s s merit for another wonderful writer 

[Tars Tarkas]

As ever, Doctor Delicious is in a class all of her own.... incredible. Just incredible. You could prescribe this like viagra, with greater effect and no side-effects - other than perpetual erection syndrome!!!

Ever more entranced Tars xxx

Thank you Jessica   And vile8r   and Morgan   and Tars   and Just me 

The thick mexican cock left her mouth and so too did her saliva as it dribbled down her chin. It was joined by a blast of his cum and she was both disgusted and relieved, then squeaked and danced from foot to foot trying to escape the fingers that had found their way inside her cunt..she tried to move, then cried out.."heyyyyyyyyyy Squeezy...help!"..she took a breath and said.."tell them to" she paused as cum dribbled into her mouth and she swallowed " to quit"
Jose pulled his pants back up after shaking his cock off over her nose, smacking the side of his softening organ against her forhead leaving a mushroom print of cum and saliva. He jumped down off the bar and circled around his brother. Grabbing her right hand, freeing up Hector to move over in front of her, to lean over the bar and shove his hand further inside her panties, causing the hips of her pants to inch down as he puts his thumb over her clit, his pointer finger in her cunt, and his middle finger curls around to tease her asshole. "I got a tip. for your good service I'm going to make cum in your panties." Hector mocks.

Squeezy, who had been watching passively, smiling yells "Yo! Ok! I got this!" And reaches under his over sized jersey to pull out a gun. A long barreled colt .45, the gun was so large it looked almost comical in his hands. He waved it around. You need to let go of her hand! so she can pass me that bottle of crown. Don't you go no where though slut, let that little mexican finger you."

 She whimpered as they kept the degrading acts up, by slapping the excess cum off on her face. Then they switched places, and even though she tried to snatch her hand away, they easily held it.."you fuckers..you best not ruin my clothes too". She jumped, raising up on tip toe as he slid fingers in both her ass and cunt. His thumb on her clit.Narrowing her eyes, she threatened him.."don't you dare...just leave me alone. Tom, the bouncer is in back, and he's gonna shoot all of you"

Squeezy then came to her rescue and as he yelled out, hope surged into her brain. Then she stopped breathing. Stopped arguing. Stopped resisting and stared at the gun...she blinked and tore her eyes away from the gun, to look in his eyes and nodded, since she no longer trusted her voice
The look on Hector's face spoke volumes as he pushed his middle finger deeper into her ass and tugged hard with a "come hither" motion, tugging her asshole toward her cunt as his finger bounces up and down inside her pussy. He makes a kissing face at her. "Hey what sort of face do you make when you cum chica? And how many mexican have already seen that face?" Jose laughs as he lets go of her right arm. Squeezy to his right waves the gun around like he saw on some action movie, not gripping the handle tight enough. "Come on, come on, I'm thirsty. Hand me that bottle already. Or maybe the Makers Mark. And push down your pants and panties, I want to see your ass." He giggled. "And make sure to thank that nice mexican for fingering you. And thank the other mexican too, he gave you a fancy pearl necklace." He said as he motions the gun toward the cum on her neck and chest

Things had turned ugly. And dangerous. Now, she no longer feels inclined to do anything other than what she is told. And as he starts barking orders at her, the hope that he wouldn't want her to do horrible things, fled from his words. The guy moved away and she twisted to grab the bottle and groaned audibly as the fingers inside her became almost violent. Or at least rougher..she slid the bottle to him. Then paused and licked her suddenly dry lips nervously, before she wiggled her pants and panties down over her hips..they slid on their own down to her ankles. Effectively tying her legs together...a soft voice said.."t-thank you for fingering my pussy " and then a breath before saying.."and thank you for cumming on my face and chest"
Squeezy laughed loudly as he opened the bottle with his teeth. Taking a deep long drink directly from the bottle. He put the gun down on the bar in front of him, to hold the bottle in one hand, and his cell phone in the other. "Smile you're on face book live! Woooo!" he yells a little disjointedly. Jose, no long holding her arm, moves down the bar a short distance and hops over it, helping himself to the well fountain. Hector digs his finger in more, sliding his thumb inside her cunt, and reaching his other hand across the bar to tease her clit with his pointer and middle finger, rubbing it up and down quickly.

While all this was going, with Squeezy distracting her, the black man had been growing more and more aroused watching her being abused. He had opened the button and zipper of his jeans to release some of the pressure his massive cock was putting against them. With a strength that was irresistible he pulled on her hand, forcing her to bend over the bar, forcing her to lay her tits on Hectors arm as her hand is dragged into the front of his pants, her fingers touch his gigantic stiff tool. Thick around as a pepsi can, and covered in slick sweat. He speaks, a little quietly and in a high pitched voice. "Maybe if you get me off good enough I won't have to mess up your insides when I put this inside you."

 

And you wonder is anyone would react to your new story!  Love the setting just screams Dawn is at it in the right part of town. Love how she was set up by all the others,or are they just waiting for the douche patrol to finish before really showing her the business! Take this merit and a bit of advice from a devote fan- Don't doubt that your audience will desert you or your writing style!

[Tars Tarkas]

Thank you Jessica   And vile8r   and Morgan   and Tars   and Just me 

Heeeeey!  I’ll TAKE that sweet ass, all day, every day, and 27 times on any day ending in Y!!

Tars xxxx