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Into the Black (working title): Porn to support the bushfires
« on: January 09, 2020, 10:09:47 PM »
Last night (AEDT), I put up a post talking about how I wanted to do something to help the Australian bushfire crisis, namely compile a book of erotica written by our wonderful authors. What I didn't expect when I woke up this morning were the responses.

Given the many positive responses thus far--and in response to darklord's question, "Where do we submit the stories?"--I have created this thread for submissions for the book. I'm using the working title "Into the Black" because I was too tired last night to come up with a better title, so this may change in the future. (Suggestions can go in the discussion thread linked above.)

Of course, submissions below. I will ask just one thing of everyone who does contribute: please your story title in the subject line, along with codes and a nom de plume (if you want it to be different than your member name here). If you have a very long title, just put a shortened one in the subject line, and the full title at the top.

Enjoy, everybody, and happy writing.

Oh, and just to cover all bases for now: The stories you read here are entirely fictitious to the knowledge of their respective authors, a series of sexual fantasies involving consenting adults (hereby defined as being at or above the age of eighteen years). Any similarity to real life events is entirely coincidental.
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« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2020, 10:23:54 PM »
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Eye Witnesses

By Darklord

Jenna turned the key to the front door lock and followed her younger sister, Amy into living room. They had just returned from the police station following Amy's arrest for destruction of private property. It was another in a long line of offenses for the Eighteen-year-old, Amy, and Jenna knew she had to take matters into her own hands.

“I have had it with you. You have gone too far this time!” Jenna fumed as she stared her sibling down. “How many of those guys you were with last night did you fuck?” Jenna inquired as she paced back and forth.

“Who I fuck is none of your business. At least I can get laid. You can't part with your vibrator long enough to know what a real cock feels like,” Amy scoffed as she looked out the window to tune out the lecture that was getting underway.

The two girls lived with their mother following the parents’ divorce, and her mothers' work often took her out of town for days. Jenna had just turned twenty and her level of maturity led the mother to place Amy under her supervision while she was gone. Jenna's face flashed red with anger at Amy's insolent words.

“You snotty little bitch. I think it is time you get what is coming to you,” she hissed as she reached for the telephone. The dialing of the numbers caught Amy's attention.

“Who are you calling?” Amy asked a hint of apprehension on her voice.

“My girlfriends. We were going to the lake today, but you ruined that, so I am inviting them over. I am not only going to spank your ass, I am going to let them watch!” Jenna snorted.

“Let them watch!” You can't do that to me, besides I am too old to be spanked anyway, Amy quipped sarcastically.

"It is either you get your ass spanked by me, or I call your parole officer and you go to juvenile court," Jenna threatened.

Amy knew she was right. The only reason she was home and not in detention was that Jenna had signed for her release. "But I still don't understand why your gal pals have to watch," Amy replied as she sat down on the recliner in the living room to ponder her fate.

“It wasn't just my day you ruined. You ruined it for them too. It is only fair that they join in,” Jenna snorted. Amy thought about bolting for the door and running away, but that would only make matters worse. An agonizing wait ensued before there was a knock at the door. Jenna opened it and greeted four females around her age and ushered them inside. Amy felt uneasy as they began to file in. Her bravado was slowly melting away, being replaced by a somewhat inexplicable excitement.

“So this is the little trouble maker is it?” one of the girls remarked as they took seats in the living room.

“Yes, this is Amy. She delights in getting into trouble. Since she has ruined your plans for the day as well, I thought she could make it up to by allowing you to witness her punishment,” Jenna remarked.

They gave Amy the once over with icy stares. She was wearing a pink striped shirt with buttons down the front, a faded pair of jeans, and pink ankle socks. Her shoulder length auburn hair had a reddish tint, and her doe-like eyes made her rather attractive, yet there was a hint of rebel in her appearance. Jenna left the room momentarily leaving Amy uncomfortably surrounded by the four females before returning with a thick wooden paddle in her hand. It was the kind used in sorority hazing and an audible gasp slipped from Amy's mouth as she gazed at the imposing object.

“Stand up so they can all see you!” Jenna commanded rather sharply.

A lump came in Amy's throat as she slowly rose from the recliner. She tried to convince herself that it would only be a few quick strikes then the ordeal would be over with.

“Turn around with your back towards us,” Jenna ordered. Amy's heart was racing wildly as she reacted to Jenna's stern commands, yet she was totally unprepared for what came next.

“Take off your jeans!” Jenna ordered.

“No...Jenna. Please not that,” Amy pleaded.

The thought of exposing herself brought a mixture of hesitant shame, and hidden desire. It had long been a secret fantasy of hers to be spanked in front of people, but of course, she never actually got to experience it. Her fingers trembled, more from excitement than fear, as she fumbled for the button of her jeans. Popping it open, she slowly ran the zipper down and slid her jeans down her legs. A decadent thrill surged through her at the thought of doing this with others looking on. As she looked at the jeans bunched around her ankles she could hear the low giggles and comments from the girls behind her. She blushed in shame, not only at the idea of strangers staring at her panty-clad bottom, but from the strange sense of arousal she was feeling between her legs.

 “Bend over and touch your toes!” Jenna then commanded.

Amy could hear the paddle being smacked against Jenna's open palm as she shamefully bent over. She could have looked through the small crack of her legs to see the girls behind her, but she could not bear the sight, so she closed her eyes momentarily as she mentally prepared for the first blow. In an effort to prolong Amy's ordeal and properly teach her a lesson, Jenna held back the paddle and began smacking Amy's ass with her open hands. She grabbed the panties and pulled them tightly, giving Amy a wedgie, and exposing the bottom of her ass cheeks as she continued the open handed spanking.

Amy gasped softly as the fabric of the panties began stimulating her pussy, causing a noticeable wet spot to appear on the crotch. She knew that Jenna was doing it on purpose and her face flushed with embarrassment. The hopes that the girls would not notice her arousal was soon dashed by their comments.

“Hey look, her ass is beginning to match the tint in her hair,” one of the girls teased as the other laughed out loud.

“By the looks of that wet spot she must be enjoying this,” another remarked teasingly.

After a few more slaps with the hand Jenna deliberately ran her finger over the damp crotch of Amy's panties.

“What is this?” Your pussy is wet. You are enjoying this aren't you, you little slut,” Jenna teased sadistically.

Warm tears flowed down her face at Jenna's words. She was betrayed by her own body and everyone knew it. She wanted the floor to swallow her up and take her away from their gazes.

“I think you should give her an old fashion spanking on the bare, and see how much she enjoys that” one of the girls teased.

"Yes. If she is enjoying it this much with her panties on, imagine how much she will enjoy it with them off," another teased.

“What do you think Amy?” Jenna inquired as she readied the paddle. “Do you think I should make you pull your panties down for the rest of your spanking?” Jenna asked crudely.

 “NO!” Amy screamed defiantly at the thought of exposing herself in front of Jenna’s friends.

 “Stand back up,” Jenna remarked as she stepped back for a moment and steadied the paddle in her grip.

Amy slowly rose back into a standing position. The deliberate delay by Jenna in using the paddle only made the ordeal more trying for Amy.

“How about a show of hands,” Jenna remarked.” "Everyone that thinks Amy deserves a bare bottom spanking raise their hand?” She quipped.

Amy did not even have to look. She knew they all would raise their hands and she began sobbing softly.

“Sorry, you lose. Now pull down your panties and step out of them and your jeans!” Jenna announced sternly.

Amy’s face reflected her shame as she slowly slid the panties down to her ankles. As the air flowed over her bare legs and exposed pussy she felt a shudder of erotic desire. How could she possibly be turned on by this? Her mind soon recovered to the reality that she was standing half naked before other people. Out of pure instinct she moved her hands to cover her cunny and butt, but was told to put them on her head. She sheepishly obeyed. Jenna carefully aimed the wooden paddle at the soft mounds of ass flesh and alternated the blows until Amy's ass was a deep crimson, and she was sobbing intensely.

Feeling that she had adequately put her misbehaving sister in her place, Jenna stepped back and surveyed the well spanked bottom with a sense of accomplishment.

“You look silly standing there naked from the waist down. Finish taking off your clothes. Maybe standing naked in the living room for an hour will teach you not to fuck with me,” Jenna snorted as she left to take the paddle back into her bedroom.

The heat from her well spanked bottom was nothing compared to the growing heat between her legs as Amy stood naked for all to see. The forced nudity was having an unexpected effect on her libido. She secretly wished she was alone in her room so she could rub her clit to a mind blowing orgasm. Jenna and the girls decided to go get some pizza and rent a movie. Jenna took one of her friends with her while she left the other three at home to watch Amy and make sure she did not leave the room.

For some time there was an awkward silence, but Amy knew they were watching her. It was then that she felt another sensation. Hands were rubbing her. The girls had decided to have some naughty fun and were running their hands over her ass and between her legs. Amy was not about to fight it. She closed her eyes and moaned in sheer delight as fingers teased her clit and fingered her damp pussy. They fingered her pussy and stroked her clit until she exploded with the most intense orgasm she had ever experienced.

When Jenna returned with the pizza, Amy was allowed to dress and join them. Later that night as she soaked in the bathtub her mind rehearsed her spanking ordeal and her hands once again found their way to her pussy. She had finally experienced one of her hidden fantasies. It was better than she even imagined. She could only hope for some repeat performances in the future.



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Re: Into the Black (working title): Porn to support the bushfires
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2020, 07:42:43 AM »
After Hours Exam

By Carhamgrater

M/F

“Miss Roberson Doctor Cartier will see you in room five?” The nurse showed me to the room, leaving the door open as she goes to the closet I’ve never noticed before. “Please Remove  everything but your bra and panties and put on the gown, the ties are in the back!’ Taking out a coat putting it on she calls out  “Miss Roberson is in room five, you sure it’s okay if I leave?”

From somewhere else I hear him reply “In five and you going, right got it just let her know I’ll only be a few minutes more!” His Nurse sticks her head in through the door, about to say it when I wave her off.

“I heard!” then being cordial “Night Regina!”, The door is closed as Regina leaves, I settle back into the plush chair,happy that at least my back won’t be touching any cold plastic. On The other side of the door I hear a young voice.

“Of course I didn’t cry Doctor Cartier, I’m a big boy!”

“Well then do you want the lollipop since you’re a big boy?”

“Well I didn’t cry but it sure did hurt getting that needle!”

"Then maybe I should give you two!”  a chuckle followed by “Just keep an eye on the site if it should turn red comeback or if he develops a fever Mr. Mitchell, Bye Dennis!” Then the outer office door closes and I hear footsteps coming towards the door I’m behind. It opens and I turn to see Doctor Cartier in his white medical smock come in.

“So Miss Roberson what brings you in today?” As he comes pass me I can subtly smell his aftershave, Old Spice, I thought he was going to go to his desk instead he stops and leans in to me, gently lifting my left wrist and takes my pulse. A minute of silence pass then “Hmm 56, right where we've been hoping to get it to!” Letting go of my wrist  “Why don’t you hop up on the examining table and remove the robe please?”

Doing as he asks, he goes to his desk, dropping the file on it, and takes off his smock, kicks off his shoes  “Just so you feel more comfortable Miss Roberson!” He takes off his shirt and pants leaving himself clad in a pair of black briefs and socks. So are your breasts still tender to the touch?”

“Doctor you know I don’t want to touch myself like that!”

“Of course, how many times have you told me that!” Shaking his head, coming over to me, his hands reaching out to touch my breasts through the silk of my bra. “Does this hurt Miss Roberson?”His palm pressing the material against my breast, I shake my head no, dreading what I knew was coming next. He lifts his palms and they encircle my chest, taking the back of my bra and undoing the hooks so it falls off my chest.

His hands return to the front, my bra in them gently being folded like it was just freshly laundered. Placing it on the back of the chair he returns and once more press the palms of his hand to my now bare breast. The flesh of his palms is warm to my breasts, moving it in small circles over the top of my sensitive nipples, making them erect in seconds.

I thought I knew he was only being professional but in my mind I thought he was getting off making me feel like a dirty girl, responding to his gently touch like that “Well I have to say your nipples are responding like nature intended them to respond!” His left hand leaving my left breast “Is down there responding likewise?” His left hand gliding down the flesh of my stomach to the waistband of my thong, then under it, along the top of my pubic mound until his middle finger touches the top of my vulva.

He doesn’t give me time to answer, tracing my outer pussy lips up and down with his index finger and ring finger, his middle finger hovering over then as if seeking a passage its knows is there but cannot find. I can’t help myself between his hand on my right breast and is fingers on the opening of my sex I sigh in pleasure bring a smile to his face. Just as i thought his examination was over I feel his middle finger part my outer pussy lips, touching the inner lips, tracing them up and down just like his other two fingers were still doing to my outer lips.

My voice is getting huskier than it should be “Doctor I know you are just examining me but this feels wrong to me!”

“Oh does this make it feel more right?” His middle finger finding my clit, tracing it then making circular patterns over it’s sensitive surface. I’m squirming at his touch, losing control by the second as his warm breath traverses my left breast before the nipple is gently sucked into the warm cavity of his mouth.

A low “OHHHHHH!” escapes me as the tip of his moist tongue darts all over my nipple and areola. His finger tracing the infinity symbol  all over the surface of my clit. Oh god, I could feel myself getting wetter by the nanosecond. He must have felt it too, his mouth leaving my left breast, he stands and moves to the end of the table, reaching up, taking my thong by the side of the waistband and gliding it down my legs, before taking it to join my bra on the chair’s back.

Upon returning he lifts my legs up, drops the end on the table so only my lower back, and upper torso is supported. Splitting my legs, placing them over his broad shoulders he moves so the only thing preventing his mouth from touching my pussy is if I queef! Then I feel his warm breath as it passes over my outer pussy lips, the heat of his mouth as it clamps onto them, his warm moist tongue penetrating me, the tip of his tongue joining his finger on my clit exciting me even more.

What felt like hours but in reality only mere minutes he had my head rocking side to side eating me out like that. I prayed to God that no one else was in the office as I cried out “Oh god yes just like that!” His mouth doesn’t leave my sex but his eyes glares his understanding to me as he double his oral effort. Five minutes, I feel myself close, then it coming on the little tickle that  indicates that I'm about to cum! He must have sensed it to as he rammed his tongue as deep as he could get it, making me release all over his tongue, lips and chin.

“Ohhhhhh!” my head comes to rest on the right side. From the corner of my eye I see him stand up, his cock bulging his briefs, his hand moving the down his legs, releasing his hard cock that had to be at least six inches long and two inches in diameter. His right hand takes it rubbing it up and down my moist slit as he prepared to put it into me!

He align himself then I feel it penetrate me. Only the tip is in me “So do you mind if I do an in depth examination?” Not really waiting for me to reply he slowly moves to put more into me, I feel my inner pussy walls part as his cock glides into me deeper. I shudder as his full length is sheathed in me. The tip pressing hard against my cervix, making me feel fuller than ever.

I feel his cock moving in and out as he pulls his hips back and forth.  “Yessssssssssssss!!!!!” Escapes me as he fucks me with long slow thrusts. A few thrusts then he switches to short and fast strokes in and out “Oh god don’t tease me fuck me harder, deeper!” Almost instantly upon calling out he does just that, pounding his cock into me like a jackhammer!

I couldn’t help but moan in pure pleasure as he fucked me, moaning as loud as he was grunting. Oh if anyone could hear what was going on in here I would die of pure embarrassment! By inside my mind I was so thrilled that Doctor Cartier was doing this to me once more. More than twenty minutes pass before I feel him tense up, my own loins twitching as i was almost to the point of flooding my sexually excited passage.

“Oh god I can hold it back anymore Miss Roberson!” The intense wave of liquid heat travelling into me turned me into a human volcano. Releasing everything, expelling streams of hot cum from him back over his cock, followed by streams of my own. “Oh fuck you are so fucking good!”

Exhausted I lay on the table, my unwanted lust sated by his cock and technique. The back of my legs were covered in the sheen of sweat from his shoulders. The end of the table brought up then my legs gently laid on it! He goes collapsing into the chair “So what do you say Thai tonight?

“Oh no! No more today Graeme!” Rolling my head so I could see him breathing just as hard as I was “All I want is to go home and relax in a nice hot bath! "

I didn’t mean ‘tie’ but THAI as in food from Thailand Loretta!” Smirking at me as he gets up coming to me, pulling me to his chest then rolling us so he’s on the examination table “I swear sometimes after sex your about as intelligent as a blonde!” My red curls falling over his face as I rested on top of him.

“Well I didn’t think after this that you could move let alone eat!”

“What can I say Mrs Cartier!” More smirking “What can I say, man does not live on pussy alone!” I could help but burst out laughing at his attempt at a joke.

“Well Mr. Cartier why don’t we go to that Barbecue place over on Holland?" Looking down into his hazel green eyes

“I think I can go for one of their foot long smoked sausages right about now!”

“What six inches isn’t enough anymore?” We both burst out laughing at that!


                                                                                                               The End

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Re: Into the Black (working title): Porn to support the bushfires
« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2020, 10:20:09 PM »
I do apologise not responding sooner. Darklord, you know I love your story and was going to include it; I already stated as much in the discussion thread. (BTW, was keeping juvenile court in for Amy an accident? I edited out the "juvenile" part in the book; tell me if I made an error doing that.)

CHG, doctor/patient thing is a big fetish, and you handled this one well. I'll neaten it up a little and include it.
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« Reply #4 on: January 15, 2020, 05:01:46 AM »
Feel free to do anything needed to make the story publishable!

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« Reply #5 on: January 15, 2020, 06:50:11 AM »
I do apologise not responding sooner. Darklord, you know I love your story and was going to include it; I already stated as much in the discussion thread. (BTW, was keeping juvenile court in for Amy an accident? I edited out the "juvenile" part in the book; tell me if I made an error doing that.)

CHG, doctor/patient thing is a big fetish, and you handled this one well. I'll neaten it up a little and include it.


Thanks!   Glad you caught that

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« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2020, 04:34:16 AM »
I said I was going to contribute a story to the book (which, courtesy of a suggestion by CHG, may be getting a rename). I'm actually going to contribute two. The first, "A Faerie in His Bed," is a story I wrote about eight years ago for Kristen's Archives, and can be found both there and on Kristen's Board. The other, given below, is one I wrote specially for this book, called "A Bed, Some Rope, and a Feather."

This story does contain some light bondage, but is otherwise a fictitious story of sexual relations between consenting adults. Any relation to real incidents is entirely coincidental.


A Bed, Some Rope, and a Feather

by Army of One


(MF, oral, light-bond)

I felt the tip of the feather lightly draw along the length of my chest. My arms and feet had been tied out of the way to the head- and footboard, respectively, thus exposing my entire vulnerable body to whatever she had in mind for me. And right now, it was that peacock tailfeather in her hand. It was light and slow, and the sensations from the feather were sending shivers up and down my torso.

She looked along the length of my body. She noticed. She slid back, still keeping the feather running up and down, and wrapped her other hand around my hard cock. Her grip was firm, but not a squeeze. She stopped moving the feather along my chest, and leaned down, wrapping her lips around the head. Her movements were slow and deliberate, her hand meeting her mouth partway along my shaft as they moved in their opposing directions along the length; she was trying to keep me from cumming for as long as possible. She stopped for a bit, the head of my cock still inside her mouth, and just a little way inwards from her lips, just enough room for her--

I felt sparks travel through my body as her tongue rolled around the underside of the head. It hit a particularly sensitive part, and I jerked up into her mouth a little. She managed to roll with my unexpected reaction to her ministrations, and even seemed to take it as a sign (albeit not one I was making consciously) to bring me to and off the edge. She began her second set of orally-provided sensations to my cock, taking me deeper into her mouth and throat. Given the opportunity, I may have fucked her mouth, but for now, she was in charge, and she had started off slow, again making me feel every part of where my cock was being taken.

She still had a hold of the feather, which was now just hanging with the tip just on and drawing erratically around my chest. She had sped up her head bobbing, still taking as much of my length as she could without unexpectedly gagging. Her other hand had left my cock and was now sitting on my thigh; the occasional movement told me she was considering using it to play with my balls. She decided against it in the end, as the feather finally dropped away, and that hand was now around the base of my shaft, allowing her to finally play with the full package.

An orgasm was not far away. A few minutes, and a decent acceleration of her movements, passed before I had finally reached the climax of her activities. And I did not disappoint, as I filled her mouth with her cummy reward. She lifted her head up, and flashed a smile at me, telling me she was pleased with what had just happened.

*****

It was now my turn to become the naked, helpless one, as he tied me down by wrists and ankles, and picked the feather up. It seemed like he was going to repeat what I did to him, and for the first thirty seconds, I was proven right. But then he turned the feather around, placing the quill softly against my skin and moving it around. This was new; it hurt a little (the quill is quite pointy, after all), but was still quite enjoyable. He drew little circles around each of my nipples, making them hard. The feather then went away.

I felt one of his fingers slide inside me, subjecting me to a slow penetration that gently scraped across the G-spot. He leaned down, and flicked my clit with his tongue before kissing it. He then slid another finger in before returning to lick my clit and the top of my pussy. It took three fingers, moving at great speed, to bring me to the edge, and I had to tell him, "Fuck me, please, fu-aaah!"

I didn't get a chance to feel his gorgeous cock inside me before I exploded into an ecstatic embrace. In the midst of this blissful orgasm, I felt him slide inside me. "This is your reward for bringing me over the edge," he whispered in my ear, "as well as a treat for getting there yourself." Unlike before, where we each had initially taken it slow and graduated up, he started off relentless, never giving me a chance to properly catch my breath.

Due to his earlier orgasm, getting to the point of filling me took a while, and between him having to rest in order to properly catch his breath and not wear himself out, I had been brought back to orgasm twice. That said, the familiar feeling of a love hose about to wash your insides with its creamy gift rose, and I became the proud receptacle of a cumload worthy of kings.

He released my hands before collapsing on top of me, exhausted. We kissed passionately before he finally pulled out, a little spilling onto the bed as he did so, and removed the rope bindings from my legs. Neither of us were in any state to go anywhere, and we laid on the bed catching our breaths.
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« Reply #7 on: January 22, 2020, 06:52:40 PM »
So, I tried to tie it to the actual fires, and thought it'd be interesting to do differing perspectives throughout. Probably needs some editorial love - kill all the darlings, etc. Feel free to do so, or to do anything else needed to make it eligible.

A Bored Utopia
By Grumpy
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Hestia peered down through the gold-trimmed marble and ethereal clouds. She sighed loudly as she pointed to yet another earthly tree which instantly caught on fire. The orange flame and pitch-black clouds used to be beautiful to her, but even their beauty had faded. So many years had passed since the last time anything interesting happened in The Realm of Gods. Decades. Centuries. Millennia. Not a single human had ascended for six hundred years, and even then, that was just some tired old philosopher. Hestia pointed to another tree and giggled a little as the top of it crumbled and curled downward as the flames blasted it. She fell back on her chaise lounge and her long black hair followed to drape across her sharp face. She made no effort to remove it – what was the point, she thought. Instead she closed her eyes. Her mind conjured up images far more interesting than anything down below.

A man with a chiseled jaw and strong arms appeared behind her closed eyes. He was smiling at her and carrying a whole pig over his shoulders. Hestia bit her lip and let go of whatever little held her knees together to have them fall apart. The silk covering her up drifted apart with her knees and she slid her hand down her crotch. She consciously inhaled a long deep breath as she touched her clit with an expert finger. The man walked closer to her, but the smile had disappeared from his lips. He was saying something to her – his eyes distraught and desperate. Hestia paused her touching. This was her fantasy, why was it not doing what she wanted it to? She shook the thought and continued her touching, admiring the man. He was strong, his chest impervious to arrows, his arms of steel. He threw the pig off his shoulders and to the side. Hestia moaned, anticipating the man ravaging her right there. The man tackled her to the ground as a pillar of gold fell where she had just stood. She paid intimate attention to his lips as they moved, imagining their taste.



Luke downed the bottle of water and wiped his brow from the sweat. He picked up another bottle and splashed half of it on his face before taking yet another swig from it. He was panting. Now seven hundred meters away from the nearest fire, it was still close enough that there was nothing else to smell than burning, ashes, and smoke. He could feel the heat on his face. The thirty-minute break would be over fast, but without it, they’d all faint out there in the forest. It was his eighth hour on shift, and he would be on for at least another six before any sort of relief came. His arms were sore, his legs were burning, and his back was killing him. But it was necessary. The fire would consume everything without firefighters like him. It would destroy countless lives and livelihoods, and surely be the demise of any semblance of nature wherever it passed through.

“Luke,” his chief called out as he walked past and tossed him a sandwich. Luke caught it and ate it quick. He was hoping for a few minutes of sleep before being called back into action. He propped himself up against his folded jacket and drifted off to sleep.

“Worship me, Luke. I am your goddess!” A soft, yet demanding voice called out to him as his vision went black. He whipped his head around to see a being wrapped in light. A woman. A beautiful woman with long black hair and a youthful face. As his eyes adjusted to her light, he began to see through it. She was naked and- Oh, she was gorgeous! Perfect, even. He reached out to her, and as his hands touched her skin, he felt electricity beneath his fingertips. He cupped her breasts, and the woman moaned tilting her head back.

“Oh, Luke!” she said, “Be my lover, Luke.”

Luke traced her chest up to her neck and wrapped his hands around the back of her head. He tried to look into her eyes, but they were elusive, and he could not find them no matter how hard he searched. Her lips said his name again and he leaned in for a kiss. He met her lips with his own and-

“Get up! Come on, time’s a runnin’ Luke!” his chief shouted as he poked him in the chest with his boot. The older man with a white mustache leaned down to him while the other firefighters got up and ready. “Son, you might want to stuff that one away before you get up,” he said and nodded down to Luke’s pants. Luke looked down and saw the tent he had pitched.

“Fuck!” Luke said as he instinctively sat up and bent his legs to cover it up. His chief laughed and went on his way. That had been a weird dream. The weirdest he had experienced in a long time. Maybe ever. He thought of the woman in the dream. He could still see her, vividly, like he had seen it for real. He tried to shake the image and get rid of his boner and succeeded just as the trucks were about to leave again.



Hestia arched her back and released the breath she had been holding in. She was just about to orgasm as the man disappeared from her view. The warmth in her body died down, and no matter how she tried, her fingers couldn’t make her feel good anymore. She stopped trying and laid back down. It was always like this. She would see the man of her dreams, have intimate and passionate moments with him, then he would disappear and take her arousal with him.

Hestia screamed up at the skies in frustration. Why did they make her like this? Why was she the virgin? She didn’t want to be! When no answer came back from above – it never did – she rolled over to watch the earth down below again. The fire was bigger now. She sighed and pointed to a bush, which instantly caught on fire. A fire truck rolled up not far from it and the tiny people got out from it and got to work. Hestia rolled her eyes at them. Always trying to beat the gods at their own game and never succeeding. Fools. She paused to watch them work in vain. There was a farm building nearby that would burn if they didn’t get a move on – Hestia wondered if the men would get to it in time. It was like a game. She bet against the tiny people. There was a line of burning trees between them and the farmhouse that they’d have to get through first, and with the fire spreading as it did, there was no way they’d put it out fast enough.
She saw the men struggle with the same realizations as they tried to fight the flames toward the farmhouse. She saw them douse the ground and trees in water that evaporated in an instant. She saw them give up and she sighed. She won again. Then a man stopped in front of it. Hestia raised her brow – what would happen now? He looked up at the sky. Hestia nearly fell off her chaise. It was him! The man! From her fantasies! She saw him charge into the flames and she shouted for him to stop, but she could not be heard down there. Quickly she tried to move the fire out of his way as best she could as he leapt through trees and bushes. Don’t die!



Luke saw the farmhouse on the other side of the tree line. There was no way they’d make it in time. But they had to try. Everyone fought to push the fire back. To save the farmhouse. Everyone should be evacuated by now, but it is someone’s livelihood that will go up in smoke if they don’t save it. Sure enough, even with a dozen firefighters fighting the line, the progress was too slow. They had to change priorities.

Luke paused and contemplated why all this was happening. He looked up to the sky. It was filled with black smoke and orange embers. In the corner of his eye, he saw movement. Through the tree line he could see something move. Without thinking, he rushed forward, toward the fire. He leapt over the first burning log, and felt the insane heat penetrate his thick clothing as he kept going. The bushes and debris seemed to bend out of his way ever so slightly as he continued, and when he emerged on the other side, he knew he should’ve been severely burned. But he patted himself down and could feel no injuries.

He whipped his head to where he had seen movement before, and he ran toward the barn. He traced its wall until he came around the other side where two koalas sat idle, waiting for the inevitable. They looked at him as though they didn’t understand what he was. Luke approached the creatures, who didn’t doubt his sincerity – they had nothing left to lose, Luke thought. He lifted them up, one on each shoulder, and made his way back to the front of the barn. His mind was racing, trying to come up with ways to get back to his team, or otherwise get out. He couldn’t run through the flames with these two.

A sound made him pause. Soft, yet demanding. He looked up to see a woman in a white dress which was singed at the edges and covered in soot. She was standing at the brink of the fire, looking straight at him. She was smiling at him.

“Hey! Get away from there!” Luke yelled. He got closer. A crack to his left. A tree was breaking in two. It would crush her. “Hey! Move!” he yelled again and started running at her. Another crack and the whining of wood fibers tearing apart had him sprinting. He let the koalas down to the ground and tackled the woman away from where she was standing just as the burning inferno of a tree fell to the ground with a heavy thud. The koalas ran away, too far and too quickly for Luke to catch up to them.

“Are you crazy!? You could’ve died! What the hell are you still doing here?” Luke said as he got on his knees above the woman. She was still smiling, with long black hair covering her shoulders.

“Make love to me,” the woman said. Luke shook his head. She was insane. No wonder she hadn’t evacuated.



Hestia watched intently as the man made his way through the flames and to the barn. She knew he was the one from her dream. She had to have him. Her voice could not be heard on earth, but she could go there by proxy. That would have to do.

As her consciousness left her and entered the shape of a woman down on earth, everything seemed heavier than before. Her limbs, the sights, the smells. They all had a weight Hestia wasn’t used to. She took a step, then another. The dirt under her feet had texture. Not at all like up in the skies. It had been a long time since she had been down on earth. She stepped up to the fire she had created. It burned her leg, making her take a step back. Its beauty was even greater up close, but its prowess and fierceness had increased thousandfold. Hestia turned toward the barn and watched as the man came around, carrying a pig on his shoulders. Except, it wasn’t a pig – it was two smaller animals.

“Beautiful day is it not?” she said. The man paused and looked at her. He looked confused. Maybe he did not hear her. No, he responded. But the crackling of the fire drowned out what he said. He started running at her. Hestia could feel every sensation at once. He knew how she wanted her. He was coming to love her. As he laid her down to the ground, she could feel nothing but ecstasy. She waited for him to rip her dress open. When he didn’t, she thought he might need some encouragement.

“Make love to me,” she said. To her disappointment, the man grabbed her arm and pulled her up to her feet again. What was happening? Why wasn’t he exploring her body with his hands? Why wasn’t his tongue intertwined with hers? Hestia broke free from his hand.

“Are you out of your mind? In open defiance of me? I demand that you love me!” Hestia said and crossed her arms. The man looked at her as if she had said the most ridiculous thing ever. Did he not know that she could have him sent to her brother Hades in a snap of her fingers?

“Listen, lady, I’m sure you can get any man you want, but right now, I just want you to survive, alright?” The man responded.

“No fire can touch us, lover,” Hestia said confidently. The flames closest to them crept away at her request. She touched his cheek. It was warm. Hot as lava.

“If not us, then someone else, and I can’t have that on my conscience. Come on, up you come.” The man gripped her arm and pulled her up to her feet. He dragged her along with him as he explored the edge of the fire, looking for where to go. Was this man more concerned with people he had never met than with her? The idea confused Hestia. She was beautiful and pure, and godly beyond a doubt. This man had never seen a woman such as her before, yet he would choose to cast her away for someone he did not even know existed.



Luke had a few seconds to look the woman over. She was somehow familiar to him, even though he was sure he had never seen her before. In normal circumstances, a woman throwing herself at him like that, he would accept the offer. Especially if the woman in question looked like this one. He scoffed to himself – he had never seen anyone more beautiful than her. It was like she had no flaws at all. Except disregarding the evacuation order, that was.

Luke pulled the woman with him, desperately searching for a way out of the fire. He looked back toward his firetruck. It was getting further and further away as he searched for a safe passage. Just as he spotted a large patch of shrubs that were yet untouched by the flames and ran toward it, it caught on fire as if covered in gasoline. Another hole to his right. He pulled the woman toward that one, and it caught fire as well.

“No way out. Would you not lay with me now? I want you. I know you want me.“ The woman grabbed his hand and put it to her breast. Luke felt electricity flow from his fingertips. “There is nothing else you can do.”

Luke took a desperate look around. She was right, they were surrounded by flames. He was not getting out of there without a miracle, and she – without any protective gear – would not stand a chance. His eyes locked onto hers and the moment he saw the green in them, all sound disappeared. The periphery all faded into white, and he could see nothing but her. The dream! She was the woman from the dream! Luke leaned in and their lips came together.



Hestia’s lips were as soft as velvet, his adventurous, wanting to go further. She let him, and their tongues mixed, chasing each other around eagerly. Hestia felt the warmth come back to her, starting in her crotch and spreading all throughout her. She put a hand on his collarbone and his firefighter outfit fell from him into a void, together with all the soot and sweat. She traced his naked chest with her fingers and moaned into his mouth.

Luke didn’t notice they were both naked until he broke off the kiss and the electricity in his fingers had grown even stronger. He lightly squeezed her perfect tits. She tilted her head back and exhaled. It looked like she had anticipated it for all her life and wasn’t at all disappointed now that it came to pass, thought Luke. He moved himself lower and kissed her left nipple. He rolled the stiffening nipple between his front teeth and licked it greedily. Hestia moaned deeply and ran her fingers through his hair. Luke moved over to her right breast and gave it the same treatment, getting more aroused by the second.

Hestia explored his full, toned body with her hands, taking in every sensation she could. She reached down and wrapped her fingers around his cock. It grew rapidly in her hand as she massaged it back and forth. As if on cue, Luke came off her tits and she floated to her back, and Luke floated atop her. She spread her legs, and her wet pussy opened for him. She nodded to the perfect man on top of her, encouraging him to ravage her.

Luke slid down her body and aligned his cock to her pussy. He rubbed her slit up and down with the head of his cock. He moaned at the sheer pleasure. He couldn’t imagine anything better than what was happening. He had never experienced sex like that before. He aimed the head for her vagina and slowly inched forward. The warmth off her embrace was almost enough to make him cum right away, but he held it off. His eyes wandered up her perfect shape and again the green of her eyes made everything just make sense. He thrusted forward, deeply, burying himself inside her.

Hestia gripped his strong arms as he fucked her. She had never experienced anything like this. The amazing feeling that had always slipped through her fingers was there, and it wasn’t going away – it was stronger than ever before! Each thrust made her let out a high-pitched moan, and each thrust made it harder and harder to keep herself in control. Her legs were starting to shake. Her grip on his arms slipping.

Luke slipped his cock in and out of her welcoming pussy, his hips seemingly moving on their own, as if divined by a higher power. He could see her orgasm building just by the look on her face, and even more so, her body was desperately clawing herself onto him, her arms wrapping around his back, her hips thrusting back at him, her pussy clenching his cock. Just as he thought he could not hold on to his own orgasm anymore, he could feel her whole being starting to shake and spasm. She exploded, screamed into him, yet the sound was soothing and mesmerizing. Without a second to spare, Luke thrusted himself deep into Hestia in an orgasm of his own. His voice growled as rope after rope of semen was slung into her. His hips twitched in sync with hers as they both died in each other’s arms.



Luke broke the kiss and removed himself from the woman. He looked around to see a raging fire, a barn, and a farmhouse. It was like no time had passed since the woman claimed there was no way out. He took a step back, trying to process what had happened and what hadn’t. It had been real, what he just experienced, hadn’t it? It had to have been! It was- It was too real not to have been!

“Thank you, lover,” the woman said. “Come with me,” she continued and took steps toward the fire, intending to walk right into the inferno. Luke shook his head. He knew there was no way out. The fire was closing in on them. But he couldn’t go out like that.

“I can’t. I- I must try,” he replied.

Hestia paused. This mortal was a fool. He could not accept his fate. Besides, he would be living in paradise with her from now on. She sighed.

“What will you do even if you get out of here?” she asked, trying to persuade him to follow her, knowing that it will take a willing sacrifice to make him ascend. She saw his mind working overtime to find a way out.

“Make this fire pay for taking people away from their families and friends – for destroying lives,” Luke responded, picking up a log and trying to turn up dirt to create a path where he could walk. Hestia paused. He would still choose others over her? Was this fire all that? She was just trying to not be bored.

“Is that all you want? For the fire to stop?” She asked, hoping he would say that he wanted her. “If I could make it all go away, would you come with me? If I could make the fire burn out, would you?” Luke shook his head and scoffed and the preposterous statement.

“The only one with that power is the one who keeps it burning, and frankly, if that’s who you are then my answer would be an even bigger ‘no’.”

Hestia bowed her head down to the ground. She understood. He would not follow her no matter what she did. But if she made his wish come true, then maybe when he has outlived his mortal years, he may change his mind. She could wait a lifetime for him. To experience what she just had again, she’d wait a lot longer than a lifetime.

“Then so be it,” she said and the flames in front of Luke dissipated, carving out a road back to his firetruck.

“Hey, there’s a path here! Come on!” Luke shouted and turned back to grab the woman’s hand just to realize she was nowhere to be found. Not a trace of her. He had no time to lose, and took a step onto the path, then another. With each step, the flames around him dissipated a little more, until the entire tree line was as cold as winter. The black clouds slowly disappeared from the sky as the fires all started dying out. A minute later, rain came pouring down all around Luke and his firefighter team. They all celebrated, yet all Luke could think of was the woman. He looked back to where she had been, only to find the two koalas from before in her stead.

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« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2020, 06:28:22 AM »
Mmmm, has a bit of "Is It Wrong to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon" to it. Very delicious.

Grumpy, I'm going to let this be the book's lead story (I have already promised the tail story to someone else). It is a very hopeful story near the end, even considering the setting. If you're okay with it, I'll also state that this is in dedication to all the firefighters in the book's introduction.
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« Reply #9 on: January 23, 2020, 07:21:12 AM »
Lead story? Damn, I'm honored :) You're free to do whatever you want with it - put it wherever you want.

And yes, absolutely it's in dedication to the firefighters.

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Once A Year

By Rachel Thornton

M/F Cons


Molly lit the candles on the dining room table, she arranged the napkins and once again polished the wine glasses removing any fingerprint marks or blemishes that may have been there. The sound of gentle piano music played through the stereo speakers and with the lights dimmed down the mood and environment were relaxing and romantic. Exactly what Molly wanted tonight.

It was after all her wedding anniversary. Molly looked at her wedding ring and the image of her sweet and caring husband Ronald came into her mind and she smiled at the thought of feeling his arms around her and his lips on her neck.

As was tradition she had cooked his favourite meal, it was what they had shared the first night she had cooked for him and he told her she had won his heart via his stomach. The bowls of warm tomato soup were sitting in front of their chairs and the smell of a slow cooked lamb with mint sauce came from the kitchen. The roasted potatoes were getting crispy and the vegetables were steamed well. Pudding was going to be a simple spotted dick and ice cream, it was Ronald’s favourite dessert from his childhood and Molly was the only one who made it as good as his mother had. She doubted the food would be eaten until much later but she always wanted to have his meal prepared for him.

Walking towards the mantlepiece Molly stood in front of it and looked at herself in the mirror. Molly was thirty-one years old but could easily pass for someone years younger. Her golden hair cascaded around her shoulders and the simple teardrop necklace that Ronald had gotten her as an engagement present glistened in the subdued light. She was wearing a black dress that clung to her slender body. It had a plunging neckline and although short was stylish. Black patterned stockings coated her legs and as she applied the lipstick to her pouting lips admired how it matched her painted nails.

Molly smiled at herself and looked at the bunch of flowers that were to the side of the mirror. Seven red roses to celebrate seven years since their wedding day. She touched the delicate petals and allowed her fingers to roam the stems gently tracing over the thorns until eventually cupping the bud and lifted one to her nose to inhale the pleasing aroma of love.

Suddenly she heard the sound she had been waiting for and a smile appeared on her face. Three knocks on the door, the same every time Ronald came home, he would knock on the door before letting himself in. Molly stood with her back to the doorway but her eyes intent on the reflection and then she saw him. She saw her Ronald!

With a beaming smile on his face he glided towards Molly and wrapped his arms around her before peppering her neck with kisses. Molly loved being kissed on the neck and tilted her head to one side to allow her husband unrestricted access to her erogenous zone causing a gasp to be emitted from Molly’s mouth.

Slowly Ronald moved his hands to Molly’s shoulders and turned her gently towards him allowing her to stand face to face and as he looked down into her eyes saw a slight tear of joy appear in the corner of her eye. Wiping it away he shook his head and put his finger to her lips.

“No tears darling, we have so much to do tonight.” Ronald said and pressed his lips against his wife’s mouth who parted her own and allowed him to explore with his tongue as they passionately kissed one another.

Molly took Ronald’s jacket off and let it hit the floor, moving her hands to his face she felt the coldness of his skin, a result of him coming in from the cold into the warmth and pulled herself towards him hoping that her own building body heat would cause him to warm up quicker. As their kissing intensified Ronald started to move towards the door with his passionate wife in tow only breaking their kiss when they had to begin the slow climb to the bedroom. Ronald extended his hand and took Molly’s in his, beginning their ascension to the marital bed.

Once they were in the bedroom the couple wasted no time in shedding their clothes. Ronald undid his tie letting it fall to the floor before unbuttoning his shirt and finally removing his trousers until he was standing only in his very smart Calvin Klein boxer shorts. Molly, never losing eye contact reached behind her back and started the slow task of unzipping her dress before letting it fall to the floor. The sight that awaited Ronald was visually pleasing as his manhood began to visibly harden underneath the fancy underwear.

Molly stood wearing only her bridal underwear, an ivory half bra with matching thong. Her stockings were holdups and decorated with a baby blue garter at the top of her leg. Doing a slow twirl she swiveled her hips and did an exaggerated bend over to pick up her husbands discarded tie. Her back arched as she bent over fully letting her firm and beautiful bottom be the object of his desire. As Molly stood upright again, she stroked her hands over her thighs as she straightened up her hand spinning the tie in it.

Molly then wrapped the tie around the back of Ronald’s neck and pulled him towards the bed where he collapsed on top of her. Their hands started to wander over one another and as Ronald lifted her leg to wrap it around his waist Molly used her long nails to leave a playful scratch down his back. For the next half an hour they kissed and engaged in foreplay with one another. Molly released Ronald’s member and her hand was stroking it up and down as it fully hardened to her touch until it was as solid as granite. Ronald meanwhile had slid the thong down Molly’s shapely thighs and was rubbing his hand against her moistening mound. His fingers stroking the slit that waited his eventual entry and his thumb playing with and teasing the sensitive clit at the top.

“Please Ronald… Use your tongue on me.” Molly gasped between kisses and with his orders confirmed Ronald began the slow decent towards Molly’s sweet honey pot. His hands were still cold but Molly’s body heat was like that of an oven as she squirmed in delight as he kissed her nipples which had become loose from their half cup holder however Ronald was intent on his target and soon was kissing Molly’s inside thighs and with a slow long lick tasted her glistening arousal upon his tongue.

Precision kisses on Molly’s cliterous resulted in the desired result and as Ronald nibbled gently on the exposed bud his fingers slowly entered the wet and slick opening causing another wave of pleasure and desire form Molly to be released.

Molly lowered her hands and stroked Ronald’s head; her legs began to wrap themselves around the older man and held him firmly in place as his tongue and fingers worked in unison with one another resulting in the most beautiful symphony of erotica from Molly’s mouth.

“Ronald… Oh Ronald! I love you always!” Panted Molly as the speed of the oral lovemaking intensified and lit a series of internal torches inside her sex as trigger after trigger was ignited.

Sensing that she was nearly at maximum arousal Ronald ceased using his tongue and readjusted himself, so his hard and solid manhood was pressing against Molly’s maidenhead. With a slight push Ronald began to enter Molly causing the young woman’s eyes to roll back in her head as she was entered by the man she loved the most in the world. Inch by inch Ronald pressed his advance and finally was able to fully fit inside Molly’s body. Once comfortable Ronald started the motions of lovemaking, his hips moved to an imaginary rhythm as he withdrew himself halfway and them just as slowly reentered her. Over time and once sure that he wasn’t going to hurt Molly he picked up pace and the thrusting became more quicker as if the tempo of the imaginary band had increased.

Wrapping her legs around him again Molly found Ronald’s hands and they linked their fingers with one another as true lovers do. Again, their lips performed the tango as they fully shared their entire bodies with one another.

Molly started to feel the beginnings of her long-awaited orgasm build and nibbled on Ronald’s lower lip, the secret sign they had perfected that she was about ready to burst for him. Ronald increased the thrusting and moved his hands to her hips so he was as close to her body as possible. Molly squeezed her legs tighter around Ronald with her nylon clad heels digging into his buttocks. Simultaneously her inner walls began to contract and clenched Ronald’s member as wave after wave of orgasmic fluid washed free from Molly coating Ronald’s manhood and the bedsheets as well with her liquid arousal.

Feeling Molly’s orgasm on him Ronald couldn’t hold back much longer and with a roar of success unloaded deep inside Molly, his seed washing through the love channel of his wife like a torrent of energy. Burst after burst fired forwards and Ronald watched as Molly’s eyes went from being wide open to rolling towards the back of her head as she was filled with his love and his ejaculation.

As the pair of them panted together but still connected Ronald felt himself begin to shrink before eventually pulling out and he collapsed next to Molly, the pair of them looking into the others eyes with joy and delight. Once again fingers were interlinked and Molly raised his hand to her lips planting a series of kisses along his strong and slender wrist.

Molly could have easily fallen asleep at this point but she stayed awake looking at Ronald, there would be plenty of time for sleep later, this was a time for being awake she thought and as she thought of how much of a perfect moment this was the chime of midnight emanated from the antique grandfather clock in the corner of the room.

Suddenly the eyes of the pair of them grew sad and Molly could feel a tear building up behind her eyes. Ronald kissed her hand one more time and then climbed out of the bed picking up his strewn clothing about the floor and holding them close to his chest.

“Close your eyes darling.” Ronald said, trying very hard not to allow his voice to break. Molly just nodded and as her eyes closed, she mouthed the words that always stuck with Ronald.
“I love you sweetheart.” Molly whispered over and over until the chimes finally struck their last and Molly eventually opened her eyes and looked towards her bedside table and the picture of her and Ronald smiling into the camera.

It was a picture of their wedding day. Taken three days before the car crash that had killed Ronald and broken her heart forever. Molly looked around the now empty room with only her clothes on the floor and openly sobbed, taking the picture and holding it close to her chest.

Standing by the bed looking over her Ronald also tried to suppress his own tears. He reached his hand out to offer a comforting bit of support to Molly but as it did for three hundred and sixty-four days of the year his hand passed through her as if he wasn’t there. All he could do now was just watch his wife live her life as he counted down the days until their love broke the barriers of the real world and the supernatural and he could cross back over. To spend one perfect night with his Molly. Once a year.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2020, 03:12:33 AM by Rachel_Thornton »

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« Reply #11 on: January 24, 2020, 05:56:50 PM »
A beautiful story Rachel- Let no one tell you that your writing isn't good enough to be called an elite writer here!

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« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2020, 09:16:13 PM »
Dammit! I knew what was coming, and it still brought me close to tears!

As discussed, I will be putting this story at the end, the other bookend to Grumpy's lead. Additionally, similar to Grumpy's story, I will, if you want, also say that this is in honour of those who didn't make it, either while fighting fires or trying to escape them.
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« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2020, 10:06:56 PM »
Great stories all (Mine not included)  Loved that story Rachel.  Very good writing.

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« Reply #14 on: January 24, 2020, 10:46:34 PM »
OMG......Rachel this story really touched my heart as you know it would.  :'( :'( :'(
Very well written!!!!  I loved it. Definitely worth a merit.  :-*