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Rescued ? .........A stand alone starter
« on: March 05, 2019, 04:59:51 PM »
It was a new job. It was money she needed. Yes it was bartending, and yes it was in a shitty part of town. But it was somewhere willing to hire her. So maybe the place had a reputation. And maybe the patrons were mostly black and mexican. But she was hot, and everyone knew hot bartenders made great tips. Her first night working had been interesting so far. To say the least. The place was noisy. And the patrons were rude, and loud, several people had yelled at her for being to slow or messing up their drinks. But some of the guys there had been nice. They had bought her some drinks, and with the night she was having she needed the alcohol to just make it through without breaking down crying. And so what if a few guys had groped her every time she came out from behind the bar. It's not like it was anything that bad, and it was a bar people got a little rowdy sometimes. But it had been several drinks, and the night was going by quickly. 2 am was quick approaching, then she could go home. Just another shot or two to get through, a little too tipsy to notice that the rest of the staff, the other bartenders, the servers, the bouncers, had all gone home. She was serving drinks to the last few people in the bar. A really tall black guy with lots of tattoos that kind of reminded her of mike tyson. A pair of mexican brothers who kept asking her to do shots with them. And a tall skinny white guy who said his name was squezy and who looked to be lost inside his oversized basketball jersey "okay guys, we're closing up. What'll you have"?

Hector and Jose sat next to each other. The two of them looked so similar it was hard to tell them apart. They had actually switched seats when she turned around a few times just so they could complain that she had forgotten their names and demand free drinks in recompense. Both were a little on the short side, at 5'6" and 5'7". Both had short crew cut black hair, both had skin that was dark even for mexicans. They were day laborers, landscaping, construction, shitty jobs that required long hours in the sun and hard work. They both wore brown button up shirts, workers uniforms, and they had both been opening buttons on them as they drank to show of tight muscular chests. Hector caught her looking at his cross necklace, and takes it as a sign to pull open his shirt to show off the huge virgin mary tattoo he has on his left pec. "Hey you like it baby? You want one? I got a friend who can cover you in tats really nice, real cheap. We can take you there now."
 She laughed again. About the 400th forced one so far. Shaking her head no , she responded "no thank you Jose, I told you. It's closing time". She paused to look around. It was eerily empty. Nearly devoid of life except for this bunch. She turned to pick up empty glasses and set them on the tray she was balancing on her right hand. Then wiping the table. But also looking at the door and frowning. The twin bouncers were gone.

Turning back to the others she said "come on guys, I wanna go home to bed before dawn."
The two of them laugh together briefly. Squezy giggles along though he looks a little lost in his own little world. Jose agrees "Soon baby soon. We just want to finish drinking. You can't kick us out with drinks, it's the law." He claims.
"But look you've been working real hard tonight. You've been doing a good job for us. And I've been watching, you haven't gotten many tips. People been so rude. So I got a tip for you right here." He raises the right hand, a folded up $100 bill in it. "All yours but I get to pick where I put it. It's a big tip it's only fair."

She was frowning as she listened to them and caught the skinny white guy watching her. She smiled at him, then returned her attention to the others. She isn't sure why, but she feels he's somehow in control. Even though the others are far more intimidating. Looking up, she sighed. It had been a slow night. And made her question herself why she bothered to work at all." Well I don't know. Part of the reason I don't have a ton of tips is, you guys have kept me busy, and so therefore the tips, if they're lacking, is your fault." She smiled.."least that's my thinking.How about if you tell me where you want to put it first"?

The three of them laugh, even the tall black man chuckles as Jose responds "I think I'd start with that pretty mouth first." He laughed and took another pull on his beer, finishing the glass and tapping the side to indicate he wants more. "It's alright though, if you don't want it. Some people can't handle big money." He folded the bill into palm, then slipped four singles onto the bar for his drink. "But if you do want it, after you put the drink down, just put your hands down on the bar and close your eyes."

She heard where and actually thought it sounded innocent. Considering where she thought he'd say. Once again she let her eyes drift across each of them.The black guy was saying nothing, but watching. She caught herself thinking about his size, then brought her mind back. Stepping around she filled the glass with coors light beer from the tap and set it in front of him.."it's illegal for me to mix drinks. Or fix drinks. Or sell them, so keep your dollar bills Mr big spender." She paused and snapped.."and I told you. We're closed. So, no more after this".

She stood looking at them across the bar...and saying softly.." hurry the fuck up, I hate not being able to see". Placing her hands on the bar, shoulder width apart, she closed her eyes and opened her mouth. Nothing happened for a few seconds. There is the sound of shuffling as the four of them look back and forth at each other. Jose had planned on just slipping the bill into her bra and grabbing a cheap feel, but seeing her standing there with her mouth wide open gave him an entirely different idea. Pointing to the large black man and then to one of her hands. He doesn't need to tell his brother what he's thinking as he quickly stands. As silently as he can he climbs onto the bar. Then at once the black man and Hector each grab one of her hands, holding them down on the bar as Jose pushes his pants down to his thighs, freeing his dark brown nine inch cock. He shoved it right into her open mouth, grabbing the sides of her head with his hand he started thrusting wildly into her mouth, trying to push it down the back of her throat. "YEEaaaaahhh! Mexican dinner for you tonight!"

She had heard them shuffling around. And told herself and them, if they were listening." I'm in charge here and you best hurry". More noise..she could feel them closer. No real reason? It's just a feeling as the tiny white hairs on the back of her neck stood on end. Then she felt her hands grabbed. And if she had thought to close her mouth as her eyes opened to find two of them holding her hands down, seeing them, would have made it fall open. Before she could even bring her eyes up to Jose, she had swallowed a dark veiny cock. Well, not quite swallowed, but not from lack of effort..it was in her mouth. And poking her throat. Slightly tipsy, she started to suck in response, before she gave it a thought.  "Ohh someone trained this one already! Maybe she's a natural! You suck a lot of dicks baby?" He yelled loudly as his right hand gets a handful of her hair, dragging her face back and forth as he thrusts into her mouth. He's got a thick mat of black pubic hair that starts to tickle her nose as he goes deeper. The thick smell of his balls from sweating in his pants all day fills her nose. "Lick it baby! Lick it!" Jose encourages her. As Jose enjoys her mouth, Hector reached out his free hand, unbuttoning her shirt while she's distracted.
With her hands held tight to the bar, she had no choice really. But after sucking a moment then hearing him talking about her, she whimpered and blushed. It rushed to fill her face and into her neck. As he began using her face like a pussy, pulling her mouth on and off his cock, it did two things. It got bigger and harder and it slipped into her throat.

Her reaction was to gag, choke, slobber and her feet started doing a little tap dance. Nervously shifting from one foot to the next.

And trying to convince herself.."it'll just be him. It's just a blow job. And they're lovers not cruel fuckers" She must be winning the argument as she sucked harder...eyes watering profusely. "Ahh fuck this little white cocksucker is good. Take out her titties, I want to cum on her titties!" Jose yelled as he builds close to cumming. Hector had already unbuttoned her top and was now popping open the button on her pants. The black man looked from her face, where he was watching her cheek and neck bulge, down to her chest. Her black running bra holding her tits up as they sway back and forth from the motion against her face. With one hand he grabbed the bra over her left tit, squeezing it hard then pulling it away from her body. Tugging her forward until her hips hit the back of the bar and stop, then the fabric tears right off at the seems, leaving him to pull away the shredded cloth.
Things changed in a hurry for her as he reminded her, of the obvious contrast in skin colors. And caused her to turn crimson...then hearing him she tried in futility to shake her head"no"..she did not want her tits out. And she damn sure didn't want his cum on them.But even as she tried, she felt her blouse opening and thought...oh my god my pants too! A hand has found her tit. It must be a huge hand as it covers most of it and starts squeezing...she felt him pulling..then gasped as her running bra, Just a thin piece of fabric designed to keep her tits from bouncing, was disintegrating. The button open, Hector slid his hand under the front of her pants. Firm hard fingers pushing her panties aside and two of them forcing their way into her cunt. Jose lets out a yell as his dick starts to spasm. He pulls back, stroking his dick quickly as he starts to cum. The first shot of it landing across her nose and lips, the rest shooting down onto her neck and over her tits, thick sticky white globs dripping down over her big round breasts. "Aye fucking sluts wear white!" Jose yells as he finishes jerking himself off onto her.
The thick mexican cock left her mouth and so too did her saliva as it dribbled down her chin. It was joined by a blast of his cum and she was both disgusted and relieved, then squeaked and danced from foot to foot trying to escape the fingers that had found their way inside her cunt..she tried to move, then cried out.."heyyyyyyyyyy squezy...help!"..she took a breath and said.."tell them to" she paused as cum dribbled into her mouth and she swallowed " to quit"
Jose pulled his pants back up after shaking his dick off over her nose, smacking the side of his softening cock against her forehead leaving a mushroom print of cum and saliva. He jumped down off the bar and circled around his brother. Grabbing her right hand, freeing up Hector to move over in front of her, to lean over the bar and shove his hand further inside her panties, causing the hips of her pants to inch down as he put his thumb over her clit, his pointer finger in her cunt, and his middle finger curled around to tease her asshole. "I got a tip. For your good service I'm going to make cum in your panties." Hector was teasing her.

Squezy, who had been watching passively, smiling yelled "Yo! Ok! I got this!" And reached under his over sized jersey to pull out a gun. A long barreled colt .45, the gun was so large it looked almost comical in his hands. He waved it around. You need to let go of her hand! so she can pass me that bottle of crown. Don't you go no where though slut, let that little mexican finger you."
She whimpered as they kept the degrading acts up, by slapping the excess cum off on her face. Then they switched places, and even though she tried to snatch her hand away, they easily held it.."you fuckers..you best not ruin my clothes too". She jumped, raising up on tip toe as he slid fingers in both her ass and cunt. Hs thumb on her clit.Narrowing her eyes, she threatened him.."don't you dare...just leave me alone. Tom, the bouncer is in back, and he's gonna shoot all of you"

Squezy then came to her rescue and as he yelled out, hope surged into her brain. Then she stopped breathing. Stopped arguing. Stopped resisting and stared at the gun...she blinked and tore her eyes away from the gun, to look in his eyes and nodded, since she no longer trusted her voice

 The look on Hector's face speaks volumes as he pushes his middle finger deeper into her ass and tugs hard with a "come hither" motion, tugging her asshole toward her cunt as his finger bounces up and down inside her pussy. He makes a kissing face at her. "Hey what sort of face do you make when you cum chica? And how many mexican have already seen that face?" Jose laughed as he let go of her right arm. Squezy to his right waved the gun around like he saw on some action movie, not gripping the handle tight enough. "Come on, come on, I'm thirsty. Hand me that bottle already. Or maybe the makers mark. And push down your pants and panties, I want to see your ass." He giggled. "And make sure to thank that nice mexican for fingering you. And thank the other mexican too, he gave you a fancy pearl necklace." He said as he motioned the gun toward the cum on her neck and chest

 Things had turned ugly. And dangerous. Now, she no longer feels inclined to do anything other than what she is told. And as he starts barking orders at her, the hope that he wouldn't want her to do horrible things, fled from his words. The guy moved away and she twisted to grab the bottle and groaned audibly as the fingers inside her became almost violent. Or at least rougher..she slid the bottle to him. Then paused and licked her suddenly dry lips nervously, before she wiggled her pants and panties down over her hips..they slid on their own down to her ankles. Effectively tying her legs together...a soft voice said.."t-thank you for fingering my pussy " and then a breath before saying.."and thank you for cumming on my face and chest"

 Squezy laughed loudly as he opened the bottle with his teeth. Taking a deep long drink directly from the bottle. He put the gun down on the bar in front of him, to hold the bottle in one hand, and his cell phone in the other. "Smile you're on face book live! Woooo!" he yelled a little disjointedly. Jose, no long holding her arm, moves down the bar a short distance and hopped over it, helping himself to the well fountain. Hector digs his finger in more, sliding his thumb inside her cunt, and reaching his other hand across the bar to tease her clit with his pointer and middle finger, rubbing it up and down quickly.

While all this was going, with squezy distracting her, the black man had been growing more and more aroused watching her being abused. He had opened the button and zipper of his jeans to release some of the pressure his massive cock was putting against them. With a strength that was irresistible he pulled on her hand, forcing her to bend over the bar, forcing her to lay her tits on Hectors arm as her hand is dragged into the front of his pants, her fingers touch his gigantic stiff tool. Thick around as a pepsi can, and covered in slick sweat. He speaks, a little quietly and in a high pitched voice. "Maybe if you get me off good enough I won't have to mess up your insides when I put this inside you."
 And more. Now she is staring at the gun, and staring at the phone. Hoping he is lying. My god if my parents see me with fucking mexicans and blacks, they'll disown me!...the fingers in her holes along with the shame which is mounting from being really the only one 90% naked, has her cumming, in spite of her efforts to not give them that satisfaction. It ran in a river out of her cunt, to soak his hand and arm and the the insides of her thighs..she felt herself pulled then....Up on tiptoe, tits squished on an arm, then her hand is placed on a tree trunk. Or what felt like it. Shocked eyes went up to his face. And what she heard was.."get me off and I won't put this inside you". So, her tiny hand wrapped around it. Rather, gripped it since it didn't go all the way around, and she began squeezing and twisting and pulling. Tits on an arm...face near the bar, she's staring at...the stupid gun
The black man, who had given his name as Joe earlier moaned happily as her small hand starts tugging his cock. He moves his hand up, from her wrist to above her elbow to let her move her hand more freely. Pushing on the side of his jeans, moving them a few inches down his wide black hips, showing off more of his deep black skin. His cock is huge as it comes into view. Ten inches long and far too thick around. It's so big that it feels heavy in her hand.

Hector laughed, and bit her ear as she's bent over his arms. He doesn't stop though. "Yell out when you cum gringa, that's the fun." He says as he tugs at her holes. His left hand jerking up and down on the hood over her clit. Jose had moved around behind her. And was staring down at her ass with lustful eyes. Squezy put the bottle down as he watched her stare at the gun. "You like that huh?" He says picking it up.
He holds it up close to her face. "Go on then, give it a kiss."
As the black guy pushed his pants down, her eyes caught the movement and turned that way. Then she wished she'd left them on the gun. Hard to tell which scared her more, but they went back to the gun then and taking her other hand over the bar she squeezed his balls...rather..one ball, then the next as they too were fucking huge.Eyes again staring at the gun.She didn't even bother telling the mexican guy she came. Nor that she was about to cum again. She figured he'd know.

She blinked and turned white and shook her head no as the gun came to her face. Shaped just like a long skinny cock...she was looking cross eyed down her nose at it as she tried to stop her lips from trembling as she kissed it
 "Pretend it's crazy Jose's cock. He said you had some skill sucking it!" Squezy leaned in close, the tip of the barrel pressing against her lips. Hector looked over the top of the bartender, to Jose standing behind her. he nodded at his brother who had picked up an empty wine bottle. Hector slid his finger out of her ass, and almost immediately after Jose shoved the top of the empty wine bottle into her hole. "Don't clench white girl, it will break. Pretend it's your boss aye, just loosen up and take it."
She whimpered in shame and fear as her lips parted and the gun slid inside. Afraid to move and afraid NOT to follow directions, she began sucking on it. telling herself it's easier to suck this than that fucking black cock. She felt the fingers leave her ass finally then gasped and the gun slid deeper as she felt what had to be a bottle going into her hole....her eyes went from the hand holding the gun, up to squez's face. Trying to do two things. Make sure he's not recording this or streaming it live and to try to use her innocent demure eyes to soften him up...maybe he'll make it all stop
Squezy though, giggled as she made puppy dogs eyes at him. "Must really love the taste of metal. Hah I like this thing too. It's my best friend. Sleeps with me every night. Maybe tonight it will sleep with you." He turned the barrel back and forth, making it bulge lewdly at her cheeks. He looked at her, to her arm to Joe. "Holy shit that's the biggest fucking cock I ever seen. How the fuck do you carry that thing? " Joe gave a short laugh in response. "Yo yo fuck these mexicans. This is some shit I got to see. Get on the bar Joe We gonna make this bitch ride that!"

Joe nodded, and with one swipe of his arm cleared all the bottles and glasses away from a long stretch of counter. He lets go of her arm. At near the same time Jose slides the bottle out of her ass, and Hector withdraws his fingers. Pulling his arms out from under her, though grabbing her tits briefly as he does. Joe stands, towering over the bar at 6'8". He doesn't so much as climb the bar as sit down on it. When he lays out his feet reach almost all the way to squezy's bottle. Squezy moves the gun around, dragging Dawn by her cheek until she's in front of him so he can get a good look at her stripped body. He looked down between her legs, to her dripping tight cunt, to Joe as he lay back, his cock in the air like a flagpole. Taking the gun from her mouth but keeps it pointed at her face. "Climb up. Get on. Take that huge ebony dick. Make a show of it, you gonna be famous."

The monster cock in her hand left. And the bottle in her ass did too. The glasses and bottles crashing to the floor..the gun now is directing her and she moved with it. Then she blushed crimson as she watched him looking at her naked body. The gun left her mouth but stayed aimed at her. Whimpering, she lowered herself down to tug and pull her pants and panties and heels off her feet. Then using the stool, climbed up on the bar. INSTANTLY feeling on stage. She has her head to the side. Staring at the gun, then she turned around to look at the black cock standing up in front of her. She debated sucking it, but knew that first she didn't want to choke and puke, and riding it, does not mean sucking.

Crawling up his body, knees to either side, she raised up, which caused a twinge of fear. Normally she'd reach down and guide it. This was too long and she had to raise up..then lowering her cunt onto it.

It was a kodak moment. As her lips spread wide and then she lowered herself..about halfway down and started gyrating her pelvis while squeezing and relaxing while crying. It felt like a minivan inside her.
Both the mexican brothers whistle. And squezy has a laughing fit as she so easily fits the first half inside her. "Someone's been practicing bull riding. This bitch is a rodeo clown." Jose teases. Joe moaned deeply. Being so big it was rare for him to fit so readily inside a girl. The sudden warmth and tightness makes his toes curl in his shoes as his knees raise up of the bar a few inches. Squezy picks up the camera and the gun, standing, and aiming both at her. "Naw naw naw, spin on that shit. Face me. The audience wants to know faces you make as you make your big debut in horse fucking.". hector added " yeah and I'm gonna fuck your skull chica".

Everything screeched to a halt. Their eyes going to the door. Then she was pushed off Joe and off the bar as the guys scrambled for their clothes. Picking up their personal things, they headed for the back door, Hector pausing to scoop the $100.00 bill up. Then they were gone.

She stumbled over to her pants and pulled them on, and was buttoning her shirt when the front door opened. In walked a police officer  "are you alright Miss? I heard noises and you're supposed to be closed. If your boss hadn't given me a key, I could not have entered " Before he was even done talking, she was crying, and picking up her panties and heels. Her bra was ruined, and telling him she was being raped. "Stay here Miss" he said as he ran to the back. She watched him go and started picking up broken glasses. He returned a minute later"I'm sorry Miss, they are not there. Do you need to go to the hospital? Did they make it that far"?..."no, I'm okay officer..what did you say your name was?" He smiled..."Oh I'm sorry, Officer Duncan Ma'am... let me take you home"

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Re: Rescued ? .........A stand alone starter
« Reply #1 on: March 05, 2019, 05:08:46 PM »
Amazing Dawn!!! This had everything and she thought she could get off lightly.
And the bit at the End, Officer Duncan again!! Your stories are amazing

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« Reply #2 on: March 05, 2019, 05:10:05 PM »
Amazing Dawn!!! This had everything and she thought she could get off lightly.
And the bit at the End, Officer Duncan again!! Your stories are amazing
:emot_rotf.gif: "didn't know if anybody would even catch that "Duncan" thing..way to go Jess!!!! :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_kiss.gif:

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« Reply #3 on: March 05, 2019, 05:28:43 PM »
oOh this so well to another one off or at least another installment Officer Duncan and his handcuffs in the cruiser and her place! Loved every word Dawn. When I can a merit will be forthcoming!

dawnamber
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« Reply #4 on: March 05, 2019, 06:01:34 PM »
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oOh this so well to another one off or at least another installment Officer Duncan and his handcuffs in the cruiser and her place! Loved every word Dawn. When I can a merit will be forthcoming!

thank you carmgrater

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Re: Rescued ? .........A stand alone starter
« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2019, 06:27:10 PM »
Even in a stand-alone you are able to fill it with such detail and desire that we are asking for more. I enjoyed the rollercoaster ride you took us on from the start right up until the end. I especially enjoyed the line "I wanna go home to bed before dawn." Thank you for continuing to impress us with your stories. I am so pleased to call you my friend. Merit when 24 hours has expired!

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« Reply #6 on: March 05, 2019, 06:31:39 PM »
Even in a stand-alone you are able to fill it with such detail and desire that we are asking for more. I enjoyed the rollercoaster ride you took us on from the start right up until the end. I especially enjoyed the line "I wanna go home to bed before dawn." Thank you for continuing to impress us with your stories. I am so pleased to call you my friend. Merit when 24 hours has expired!


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« Reply #7 on: March 05, 2019, 07:18:05 PM »
*lays in a pool of my own sweat*  :emot_thedrool.gif: Goddamit! I was supposed to be getting off line to make some supper and then I come across this!  I don't know if my blood pressure will take much more. Dawn enthralls us with 'Bully', then decides we haven't had ENOUGH so throws this one at us too! I swear.....she is a female Duncan!  Just when we think we can't get pounded any harder by one of her stories........she does it to us again!

 :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: FIVE dancing penises for you, babe!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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« Reply #8 on: March 05, 2019, 09:14:08 PM »
*lays in a pool of my own sweat*  :emot_thedrool.gif: Goddamit! I was supposed to be getting off line to make some supper and then I come across this!  I don't know if my blood pressure will take much more. Dawn enthralls us with 'Bully', then decides we haven't had ENOUGH so throws this one at us too! I swear.....she is a female Duncan!  Just when we think we can't get pounded any harder by one of her stories........she does it to us again!

 :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: :emot_mrhappydick.gif: FIVE dancing penises for you, babe!


WHOA 5 dancing dicks!!!!  :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_thedrool.gif: :emot_thedrool.gif: :emot_thedrool.gif: :emot_thedrool.gif:

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« Reply #9 on: March 05, 2019, 09:26:06 PM »
You had me right on the outset of this one. I have worked in pizza joints etc and nothing is more irritating the last ones who will not leave.   I like how you went straight to the action on this one too.  Another superb example of your writing skills.

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« Reply #10 on: March 05, 2019, 09:29:22 PM »
You had me right on the outset of this one. I have worked in pizza joints etc and nothing is more irritating the last ones who will not leave.   I like how you went straight to the action on this one too.  Another superb example of your writing skills.

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« Reply #11 on: March 06, 2019, 12:48:09 AM »
A wonderful story, I just loved how you got across the victim trying to rationalise it, always hoping it would be less bad than it is. Merit from me x

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« Reply #12 on: March 06, 2019, 03:47:33 AM »
Good work Dear.  Particularly loved the gun of course.  :)  Got my hopes up it did ... and then I realized we were in gang rape ... not extreme :P

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« Reply #13 on: March 06, 2019, 06:24:51 PM »
Incredible work. I mean, your writing skills should be marketed like Viagra! Damn, how to have a hardon so bad it hurtssss. Just read a DawnAmber story, liberally, before action is required.... she will tell you you have never been rougher, I guarantee you, no matter who she is! ;)
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