Amazing Dawn!!! This had everything and she thought she could get off lightly. And the bit at the End, Officer Duncan again!! Your stories are amazing
oOh this so well to another one off or at least another installment Officer Duncan and his handcuffs in the cruiser and her place! Loved every word Dawn. When I can a merit will be forthcoming!
Even in a stand-alone you are able to fill it with such detail and desire that we are asking for more. I enjoyed the rollercoaster ride you took us on from the start right up until the end. I especially enjoyed the line "I wanna go home to bed before dawn." Thank you for continuing to impress us with your stories. I am so pleased to call you my friend. Merit when 24 hours has expired!
*lays in a pool of my own sweat* Goddamit! I was supposed to be getting off line to make some supper and then I come across this! I don't know if my blood pressure will take much more. Dawn enthralls us with 'Bully', then decides we haven't had ENOUGH so throws this one at us too! I swear.....she is a female Duncan! Just when we think we can't get pounded any harder by one of her stories........she does it to us again! FIVE dancing penises for you, babe!
You had me right on the outset of this one. I have worked in pizza joints etc and nothing is more irritating the last ones who will not leave. I like how you went straight to the action on this one too. Another superb example of your writing skills.