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« Reply #15 on: September 08, 2018, 01:01:33 PM »
Bet you little mind can be as deviant as some here! We may have to have a contest to see just how deviant we can become! ;)

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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #16 on: September 08, 2018, 10:07:55 PM »
Bet you little mind can be as deviant as some here! We may have to have a contest to see just how deviant we can become! ;)
I can actually say, for a fact, that her suggestions so far are probably only scratching the surface as to what he can think up.
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In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves (Part 5A
« Reply #17 on: September 09, 2018, 08:10:56 PM »
Okay, so as Rachel has sort of made known, she and Chris made a request, to be engaged in some forced lesbianism between them. I'll say this now, it was hard. (Yes, I could've meant that, and yes it was, but I actually mean I had trouble writing what I was visualising this time, not that visualising a decent scene was easy either.) And this was after I had taken a bit of a break from writing so I could concentrate on getting the flat in better shape.

Did I do a good job? Probably not. I actually think that this is the weakest part of the story so far, in terms of writing and the ongoing plot. In addition, this part isn't complete yet; I'll have the second half of this written and posted within the next 24 hours, hopefully.

Now, just to reiterate: This story contains rape in a militaristic environment, and is intended as fantasy. It has no known resemblance to real life, and any perceived similarity is coincidental. The author does not condone rape in real life.


CeCe and Chris were delivered back to the hut the next morning. Chris looked like she had gotten some sleep, even though she still had a fresh load of M'Butu's cum inside her.

CeCe, on the other hand, had gotten no sleep, and looked it. Her wrists still had rope marks on them, and her arms and legs were sore, although for different but related reasons. She laid on the bed, and dozed immediately off to sleep.

"I don't think she got any sleep last night," Sophie noted.

"I agree," affirmed Rachel. "Let's let her sleep off last night. Hopefully at breakfast, no-one will notice her missing." And Sophie, Rachel and Chris snuck out, the guards paying no heed to the three as they left.

They were halfway through "second breakfast" when a scream pierced the air. One of the guards had CeCe by the arm, dragging her out to where everyone else was gathered. She was thrown to the ground between the other three girls.

Mubutu, M'Butu's younger son, swathed through the crowd. "What is going on here?" he yelled.

"I found this one still in her bed, sir," the guard responded, succinctly and dutifully.

Mubutu knelt down. "You're supposed to report to breakfast every morning," Mubutu told the girl. For that, you shall be punished."

"No!" Rachel jumped up from the cock he had been sucking, and faced Mubutu down as much as she could. "You are not going to abuse that girl again. Let me take her punishment; I'm the reason she was still in bed, anyhow."

Chris stood beside her. "No, I'll take it for her," she stated, then turned to Rachel. "You already took one punishment for us, and they went light on you; I am not letting you get hurt more."

"Right!!" Mubutu ordered. "Since you two seek punishment so much, I have the perfect one for you." He then waved to two of the soldiers, who immediately took hold of Rachel and Chris's arms, keeping them in place. "Take the Asian girl away, and see to her punishment. Since her friends are keen on taking her place, you can go easy on her." He thn turned to Sophie, who had now stood up like everyone else. "Consider yourself lucky; you might just avoid the most today." He then walked off, leaving her to wonder what fate she was consigning the others to.

Rachel and Chris were thrown onto one of the tables. The sneering faces hid ideas, some of which started to come to the surface. "How about you two kiss while we wait?" The two girls looked at each other, unsure. "We said, kiss!" the soldier barked again, and pushed Rachel's face towards Chris's. Startled by the immediacy of it, the pair locked lips.

The crude comments flew from the soldiers. "Kiss her like you mean it!" "Feel her up!" "Suck her cunt!" "Finger her!" Hands were laid delicately on breasts, and Chris felt a small pang of jealousy at Rachel's D-cups, compared to her own Bs.

Mubutu returned, carying a large wooden box. He cut through the crowd, just in time to see Rachel start to guide her hand down Chris's body, soldiers' hands still forcing their heads together. Everyone backed away from both Mubutu and the girls, and Rachel and Chris stopped kissing and faced him immediately. "Don't stop on my account," he ordered, almost flippantly. "Finger her cunt, just like you were going to."

Rachel gingerly slid two of her fingers into Chris's pussy, and began thrusting them into her. Chris was uncomfortable at first, she was still a bit dry when they went in, but she soon relaxed, which in turn let the juices flow a little more.

This slow show, however, didn't satisfy Mubutu, and he came over and took Rachel's hair, pushing her head down into Chris's crotch. "Suck her cunt," was the crude response. Rachel kept fingering Chris as she as forced to lick her clit, bringing her to the point of climax.

Mubutu sneered at Chris as Rachel righted herself. "Return the favour." She shook her head meekly, but when he saw Mubutu start to reach over, she immediately put her head down and copied what Rachel had done to her, bringing her to her own orgasm.

Soon the girls were parted, forced onto the big black cocks that waited for them at full attention. After each cock had come down their throat, however, they were forced back together in a kiss, making them swap the loads that had been deposited in them; similar happened with every load in their cunts, as they were forced into a sixty-nine, lapping up each drop of male ejaculate.

On the periphery sat Sophie, who watched the spectacle glad it wasn't her. he looked off to the side, and noticed that some of the soldiers, after having their turns with Chris and Rachel, were peeling off. She decided to leave her sister and Chris to their forced entertainment, and see where the soldiers were going.

Continued in Part 5B...
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In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves (Part 5B)
« Reply #18 on: September 10, 2018, 08:01:28 AM »
What Sophie found both confused and terrified her.

CeCe was bent over against a wall, hands tied behind her back, soldiers using her mouth as their own personal fuckhole. What she didn't notice was the steel anchor in her ass, preventing her from moving away from the wall.

She knelt next to her just as the next soldier was finishing up, spilling seed into her mouth. Cum was dribbling from her mouth. Sophie leaned in, and licked away the dribbling cum, before kissing her, scooping as much of the cum from CeCe's mouth with her tongue into hers. She then put her forehead to CeCe's and whispered, "I'm sorry. This was as much my fault as it was Rachel's and Chris's. You don't deserve this." The tied Asian girl began to cry at her friend's emotional admission.

Suddenly Sophie was violently pulled back by her hair, landing on her back and looking up at the soldier who grabbed her. "You dare try to interrupt a punishment?" he yelled down at her, before grabbing her arm and taking her over to the standing rack, chaining her hands to the top frame. Then she felt it, as the cat-o'-nine-tails1 hit her back, making her scream out. She received nineteen more lashes across her back and ass before she was unchained, collapsing under her own pain.

Then the real pain started, as she felt herself being lifted off her feet slightly, only to be dropped on top of a soldier who had slid underneath her, making her take his hard cock in her cunt. The second soldier knelt over the top of her, and slid his own cock into her cunt as well, making her scream in pain from the stretch.

CeCe looked on as Sophie was brutally double penetrated, before having her view blocked by another soldier wanting to facerape her.
*****
Sophie and CeCe limped back to the main courtyard, their bodies, Sophie's especially, broken and abused, and spotted Chris and Rachel, cuffed together by their wrists and ankles, their faces in close proximity to each other's, almost like they were kissing. Closer inspection revealed why: they were wearing collars—no, neck cuffs— that had been linked together by a very short chain, and a double-ended dildo had been shoved down their throats. It seemed like they were almost gagging on it. Mubutu as still there with a couple of others, penetrating them with more double dildos, these ones almost too big for them to take comfortably in either cunt or ass.

Mubutu and his cronies finally stopped punishing them, removing the toys and unchaining them. They gasped for much-cherished air. They were then taken by the arms and returned to the hut. CeCe and Sophie followed not far behind.
*****
One of the guards walked into the hut. The girls got nervous, CeCe especially; she as the only one who hadn't been to M'Butu's room, so she knew she was up next. "M'Butu is not happy with your behaviour today. He hopes you were properly punished." And just like that, he left the hut again, and returned to his post.

CeCe stood and approached the door timidly. "Umm, doesn't M'Butu want any of us in his room?"

"No," came the guard's response. "He doesn't want to deal with any of you tonight."

Relief washed over CeCe's face, even though she knew it was only a temporary reprieve.
*****
The girls were in bed early that night, their bodies needing the time to heal. Chris, however, was having trouble sleeping. She looked over at Rachel, and stood and walked over to her mattress. "Hey," she whispered, hoping to rouse her a little.

Bleary eyes opened. "Hey," Rachel murmured sleepily. "What's wrong?"

"I was wondering, did you enjoy what we did?"

"Chris, we were being punished. We weren't supposed to enjoy it."

"I know, but deep down, wasn't there a part of you that liked you kissing me and all that?"

"Since you put it like that, I suppose there was. Yeah, I did like it a bit."

"I liked it too. And I'm glad it was with you."

A small smile cut across Rachel's face. "I'm glad it was with you too."

"Do you mind if I sleep with you tonight?"

"Of course." Rachel slid across her bed a bit, allowing Chris to lie down with her. The pair looked into each others' eyes, and Rachel leaned down to kiss Chris. Hands roamed along each others' bodies, gliding over breasts, gently cupping battered pussies. They rolled over on the bed, spooning each other, and drifted back off to sleep, for the first time in the past few days content.

1 Not a knotted cat-o'-nine-tails, although I won't deny that is on the camp somewhere.
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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #19 on: September 10, 2018, 10:32:38 AM »
In answer to your question of did you do a good job? The answer is totally yes! This is exactly what I was hoping for and it has started a potential snowball effect for later on.

In my opinion you need chapters like this. If you have each chapter be brutal rape and sex then the reader starts to become desensitised to it and it becomes just another sex scene. Now you have started a moment of tenderness and character development between two of your characters. By making them begin to have feelings for one another and explore them just think how devastating it's going to be for them to see the other abused in more degrading methods and techniques. The rape will be much more traumatic to both of them now as they try and protect the other.

Also the potential for jealousy between the four is planted, what would Sophie think knowing that if it came to it I would give her up to keep my new lover safe?

As I say, chapters like this are just as important as the sex and you have done well Sir!
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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #20 on: September 10, 2018, 11:17:20 AM »
I do like how some of the story can be potentially told through the interaction and dialogue between the victims.  I also get a sense there could be some sort of betrayal coming or maybe alliances like in reality tv shows.  Lots of intriguing possibilities that I look forward to reading.
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« Reply #21 on: September 10, 2018, 03:36:08 PM »
I have to say I agree with Rachel, not every part needs a depiction of brutal sex action against one of them. A little background of what is going on behind the scenes could make this story even more exciting!

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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #22 on: September 10, 2018, 04:23:43 PM »
In my opinion you need chapters like this. If you have each chapter be brutal rape and sex then the reader starts to become desensitised to it and it becomes just another sex scene. Now you have started a moment of tenderness and character development between two of your characters. By making them begin to have feelings for one another and explore them just think how devastating it's going to be for them to see the other abused in more degrading methods and techniques. The rape will be much more traumatic to both of them now as they try and protect the other.

Also the potential for jealousy between the four is planted, what would Sophie think knowing that if it came to it I would give her up to keep my new lover safe?

The burgeoning relationship between you and Chris I felt was a natural consequence of what Mubutu put you two through, so it was fitting for me to include it. But saying that, yeah, it will make what happens to them all that more poignant for them.

I do have some more of these "hope spots" lined up for future installments, which will bring you girls closer together, and you'll all be making tough decisions because of it, especially you, Rachel, as the unofficial protector of the group. But I don't want to spoil too much before I even start writing it, so I'll keep mum about it.
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In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves (Part 6)
« Reply #23 on: September 13, 2018, 09:01:06 AM »
Okay. I'm going to say something here—well, actually a few somethings.

When I started writing this part, my intention had been to keep this story going as in real time as possible. Recently, that's become difficult, and the past three parts have had a couple of days break between their postings. That came about because, as I stated for Part 5A, real life came first a bit. As such, despite having been writing this story for nearly two weeks, the girls have only been here five days by the end of this part.

There is now another factor that's come into play, and to get a sense of what that is, I'll quote Rachel_t's comment from earlier in this thread:

If you have each chapter be brutal rape and sex then the reader starts to become desensitised to it and it becomes just another sex scene.
Now this is in reference to what's happening beyond the fourth wall (i.e. in readers); however, at this point in the story, the same could be said of the characters. They've been raped at least twice a day already that they are becoming desensitised to it as well, hence the lack of screams in this part.

Since the daily actions are going to be so repetitive I'm not going to worry about the daily rapes after this part; it'll just be more of the same. I'll look at significant moments, but the rapes will be special occasions only. They are still happening, I'm just not going to write about them in any great detail.

Hopefully, this'll bring me back up to real-time again as well.

(Hopefully I've made sense there; I wrote this part half-tired.)

This story contains rape. The author does not condone it in real life.


It was cold and raining. Sophie, Rachel, Chris and CeCe were standing out in it, bent into minimalistic metal stocks. M'Butu was under an umbrella, dressed in full military regalia, brandishing a very large paddle with short spikes on it.

"You four were very defiant and disobedient to my men yesterday," he yelled at them, pacing up and down along the line. "Firstly, I find out that one of you chose to sleep in!" He brought the paddle down hard on CeCe's ass, making her scream out in pain.

"Please, it wasn't her decision; I insisted she sleep," Rachel pleaded.

"I heard," he stated. "And your decisions just made things worse." The paddle came down on Rachel's ass with the end of the sentence. "I make the rules here, not you!" He then focused back on the rest of the group. "Then I find out two of you tried to redirect the punishment onto yourselves. Very noble, I must say, but it doesn't change"—he smacked Chris's ass—"her punishment. It just gives us more people to punish." And he brought the paddle down on Rachel's ass again.

"Then," he continued, "as my men are doling out punishment on one of you, another one of you tries to interfere." He brought the paddle down on Sophie's asscheek on the final syllable; the shock made her jump and squeal.

"Now, when I come to collect you four ffor your punishment, I find two of you sleeping together. I have been kind to you, and provided each of you with a bed, and yet you choose to insult"—Rachel felt the paddle for the third time—"my hospitality!"—Chris also felt the paddle, and tears welled in her eye as she looked over at Rachel, who returned her look, mouthing to her, "I'm sorry"—"I'm going to keep you four here. If any of you speak or cry or move, I will have T'Shulu punish you all."

They didn't see freedom until after the end of breakfast, during which time T'Shulu had paddled them on average every half hour. As each of the soldiers finished their breakfast, they came over and simply slidtheir cock into one of the girls' mouth, cunt or anus, uncaring to any pain they were feeling. Once they were unlocked from their stocks, they all limped back to their hut; once inside, Chris collpsed on the floor in tears, the others huddling around her in consolation.

*****

The girls were looking out of the window at the soldiers as they were building something.

"What do you think it is?" CeCe asked.

"I don't know," responded Rachel, "but I'm betting it's going to be used on us." They all stepped away from the window, and sat on their mattresses, except Chris, who laid down on Rachel's while she massaged her ass.

"Your ass still hurt, Chris?" Sophie asked. Chris just nodded, and smiled when Rachel bent down and kissed each ass cheek, making her smile. Sophie looked at her sister. "How is it your ass isn't sore?"

"It is," Rachel replied. "I'm just ignoring it."

Chris raised an eyebrow and turned back to her lover. "Come on, your turn," she said, and immediately switched positions with Rachel. She then began massaging her ass, eliciting pleasured moans from her subject. "I am not going to let you go through today in pain."

CeCe and Sophie looked back out the window. The device the soldiers had been building was finished, and stood somewhat proudly in th middle of the courtyard. It seemed like a wooden table, although a hole had been cut out of one end, and a piece of wood with leather cuffs at each end was affixed to the center of the table. Another pair were situated on either side of the hole, and a third just below the band of wood.  "Ummm, Chris, Rachel," CeCe said, "you may want to come see this."

*****

The girls had been herded out to the courtyard not long after the device was finished. It was pretty obvious that they were supposed to service the assembled soldiers. What was going to happen before that was new, though.

Chris was taken over to the wooden device and strapped down, her head sitting over the hole. Rachel was next, her wrists bound into the cuffs at the middle, making her look like she was about to lick Chris. The remarks made by the soldier who strapped her in confirmed ths: "Since you two like pleasing each other, M'Butu figured you might as well please us while you do so." With that, Chris's head was pulled down through the hole and a cock inserted into her mouth, while Rachel's pussy parted for another cock. Knowing what the men were wanting, she put her head down, and started eating.

Sophie and CeCe watched the perverse spectacle before being surrounded, separated and forced.

*****

The fucking lasted for a couple of hours, during which time Chris and Rachel go to swap positions, giving Chris a chance to clean out Rachel's cum filled cunt. They all walked back to the hut, slight, but not pronounced, limps on them. They were met at the door by the guards. "You," they told CeCe. "You are wanted in M'Butu's room."

*****

CeCe walked in t find M'Butu with another soldier, about the same age, talking. She recognised the other man.

"Come in," M'Butu greeted. "I believe you've met Lieutenant Hobaki." CeCe nodded her head. "He took a shine to you when you were servicing his men a couple of days ago, and wanted to see you again. So I invited him here tonight."

"It's a pleasure to see you again, little one," Hobaki said cordially, walking over to her. CeCe ws scared; he had been as relentless as the rest of his regiment in raping her while she was tied up. As such, the gentle yet forceful kiss he placed on her lips was an unexpected shock. She felt both enjoyment and terror from the act.

M'Butu took her waist in his large hands from behind her, and guided her back to him, making her sit on his lap so that his cock went up her asshole, an uncomfortable and reluctant intrusion. Hobaki held her face as she leaned back onto M'Butu. "Don't worry," he assured; "I'll be more gentle this time." And he slid his cock into her cunt.
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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #24 on: September 13, 2018, 06:55:58 PM »
What you said makes sense.

I think some of the build up and premonition can be just as erotic.  For instance, the building of the device in the courtyard while all the characters are left wondering what it will do... that was exciting to read.  If you had extended the mystery of the device to another chapter, I would have been totally fine with a tease like that.

The real-time aspect doesn't matter, at least to me, I'm enjoying this story no matter what.  I don't mind it when authors take their time to construct things to their satisfaction.

I also love the title by the way, an over the top proclamation befitting the writing.  I almost imagine a herald standing next to M'Butu addressing the crowd with an announcement, with this title.
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« Reply #25 on: September 14, 2018, 12:07:29 PM »
Maybe it's time that the girls lose a compatriot. CeCe already has an admirer! Just saying! Loving how this one is going!

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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #26 on: September 14, 2018, 12:23:05 PM »
I like your thinking, take one out and give her special privileges making her feel more important than the rest of us. That would be the perfect thing to cause some hatred between the group or maybe see them splinter into two groups. I can see Sophie and CeCe getting fed up with Rachel and Chris looking after each other   >:D

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« Reply #27 on: September 14, 2018, 05:31:38 PM »
I actually have plans for CeCe, some of which involve what she has requested (this plan was actually in the back of my mind before she made her request). So stay tuned, and I'll get writing and posting.
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In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves (Part 7A)
« Reply #28 on: September 17, 2018, 10:09:11 PM »
I am openly going to admit: this next part is getting difficult to write. Not just because of the fact that I've been busy these past four days, but...well...you'll see as you read on. As such, I'm going to separate this part into two; the second half I'll put up as soon as I finish it. I do know where I'm going to go with this, but it's just writing it that'll take a while.

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Sophie was still asleep on her mattress. Chris and Rachel were awake, Rachel's fingers dancing around and inside Chris's juicy pussy as they kissed.

CeCe stumbled into the hut, looking a little worse for wear. Her collapse on the floor from exhaustion was enough of a signal to make everyone take notice of her, even Sophie, who was woken up by the unexpected noise.

"You okay?" Chris asked.

"M'Butu called in the leader of those soldiers who had secured a victory in battle a couple of days back," CeCe, responded. "They both fucked me all night."

Sophie crawled over to her and hugged her.

*****

And so their lives became a sexual blur. Every morning was their "second breakfast" of orally-extracted cum, followed by hours of gangrapes. Never a moment went past when the girls weren't filled with cum. Every night, one went into M'Butu's room, and spent the entire night with him and his cock, to be returned the next morning, and join the girls in repeating the process all over again.

They no longer dared to defy the order of these things; they knew the penalty of that.

*****

This order continued until one morning, when CeCe rose from her mattress, and immediately ran for the toilet. Chris and Rachel rose from the bed they now shared each night (Chris lost her mattress a week prior, after being spotted in bed with Rachel, a careless thing since they were wary not to be spotted in the morning when the guards changed over); Sophie was still with M'Butu.

"Are you okay?" Rachel called in to her. CeCe's response was vomiting, and not the "I'm okay" she had planned to say instead. The girls ran in to her.

After she had finished, CeCe turned around from the bowl, unnecessarily feeling sorry for herself. "Sorry," she apologised. "I'm okay now."

"What's wrong?" Chris asked. CeCe delayed her answer; it seemed like she didn't want to cause any trouble from it. But eventually she leaned in and whispered it, almost crying as she did so:

"I'm pregnant."
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Re: In the Honour of the Great African Warlord M'Butu, His Sex Slaves
« Reply #29 on: September 18, 2018, 01:06:58 AM »
Whoa... that's certainly an interesting plot twist.  I'm looking forward to see how you write the next parts to navigate this story arc.
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