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Warning: You must be 18 or over to read stories of rape.  If you do not like such stories or you do not understand the difference between reality and fantasy, please read no more. Rape is a heinous crime and the penalty is many years in prison. The people who commit rape are despised everywhere. No one is being hurt, and this is pure fantasy.  In addition this particular story features characters under the age of 18 and although persons of distinct ethnicities are portrayed, no offense is meant to anyone.

Note: This story may be familiar to some of you as I have posted it under different names on a couple of other sites. However due to posting restrictions on those sites they have had to be re-edited. This is the original uncut version.


WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, M+F, rape, gang)
by Panthers70

Synopsis:

Ch1 A beautiful mature white woman is caught walking alone late one evening in the wrong part of town and is raped by three Pakistani teenagers.
 
Ch 2 She comes back the next evening for them to fuck her again but things don't go as expected and she ends up being savagely gang raped by twelve Pakistani men

Ch 3 The next day Amy returned wanting to get fucked again. The Pakistani men obliged by subjecting the brown haired beauty to multiple rapes which lasted most of the night. By the time her final gang rape was over she had completed her transformation to becoming a slave to Pakistani cock.

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Amy had just finished a lovely meal with a group of work colleagues. She had parked up in the opposite direction to her friends so said goodbye to them and started her five minute walk back to her car. She was around 5’6” tall with long brown hair and was wearing a white top, black slacks and a light grey leather jacket. Although she was in her late thirties she had looked after herself really well and had a stunning body with curves in all the right places.

It was around 9 pm and getting dark but with all the food shops and restaurants still open the High Street was still very busy. As she walked she noticed that she was just about the only white female around and people were openly staring at her. She heard a few wolf whistles and some lewd comments and as she approached a bus stop the pavement was so crowded her path was nearly blocked and her progress slowed to a crawl.

Suddenly a Pakistani youth, probably aged around sixteen, pushed past Amy giving her ass a quick grope as he did and then turned round and stood in front of her. His eyes moved down from her face to check out her curvaceous body and then up again to stare straight into her eyes. One hand went down to his crotch and he began stroking the large bulge in his jeans.

“What’s a white bitch like you doing round here ... You looking for some action?”

Amy began to panic and ran across the road, dodging the traffic, and just wanted to get back to her car as quickly as possible and get out of there. She could see her car less than 100 yds away but as she glanced over her shoulder she saw the Pakistani teenager crossing the road along with another youth. Amy got to within 20 yds of her car when a third youth appeared in front of her blocking her way. The other two came up behind and she was completely encircled. Before she had a chance to scream one of them clamped a hand over her mouth.

“You won’t make a fucking sound bitch if you know what’s good for you.”

They grabbed her arms and roughly pulled her down a narrow dimly lit alley between two shops. The end of the alley opened out to a small area with back doors to two of the shops. Apart from cardboard boxes and black bin bags all full of rubbish the area was completely deserted.

“Let me go, please let me go” Amy pleaded as they surrounded her and moved closer and closer.

One of the youths pressed up behind her and began dry humping her, grinding the bulge in his jeans against her ass. Another grabbed her hair turning her head towards his and forcing his tongue deep into her mouth. The youth who spoke to her in the street grabbed her breasts and began to knead them roughly.

“Wow you sure are stacked, you’re fucking built for sex”.

He moved one hand down between her legs and pressed hard against her pussy.

“Lady you come to our neighbourhood looking to get fucked yes? You want some Pakistani cock?”

He unzipped his jeans allowing his already erect cock to spring free.

“You like the look of that bitch? You want that up your white cunt don’t you?”

With that he pushed her slacks down to her ankles and tore off her flimsy white panties. He was determined to dominate this white beauty and fuck her so good that she’d be begging for more of his cock.

“Stop, stop please stop” she sobbed.

The other two youths moved a couple of steps back as he spun her around and pushed her face first towards the wall, her arms reaching out above her head to stop her pretty face hitting the cold concrete. He kicked her legs apart and moved up behind her, gripping her hips firmly as his cock pressed up against her pussy. Edging forward he began feeding his prick inch by inch into her until he was balls deep up her and nine inches of Pakistani meat was buried in the white beauty.

“How does that feel lady? How do you like a Pakistani cock up you?”

He pulled back until there was only about an inch inside her and then with one savage thrust he buried the whole length of his prick in her again.

“Here we go you fucking white bitch” as he settled into a rhythm, pumping his cock into her, each thrust filling her with his stiff prick.

“Take this ... and this ... and this ... you white whore”.

She couldn’t believe what was happening to her, being raped hard by a Pakistani teenager while his friends watched. She’d never had a cock this big before and it felt like he was going to split her in two. After a couple of minutes pumping into Amy he stopped with his prick still buried deep inside her. He reached up under her leather jacket and grasped her breasts again.

“What a fucking body. You need my cock up you every day.”

He began to fuck her again, long powerful strokes feeding his prick deep inside her. His hands gripped her breasts tightly as he continued to piston in and out, his thrusts getting faster and faster.

The other youths were shouting encouragement.

“Come on Kasib give it to her ... breed that white bitch”

“That’s it Kas stick it right up her ... she’s fucking loving it”

“Is that right Lady? Do love the feel of a Pakistani prick in your cunt?”

Although Amy desperately fought against showing any signs of emotion her body was starting to become aroused by the savage fucking she was getting from this teenager and her breathing was becoming ragged.

He leant forward and whispered in her ear,”I fucking knew you wanted it. All you cunts are the same. You can’t wait to try Pakistani meat.”

Amy moaned “It’s ... so big ... so big ... oh my god ... aaarrghhh”.

Her head started to roll from side to side and her moaning got louder as a massive orgasm coursed through her body. That was enough for him to power into her even harder and faster, each thrust almost lifting Amy off her feet. He continued to power into Amy giving her the fuck of her life, harder and deeper than she had ever experienced before. Finally after another four or five minutes of pistoning into the brown haired beauty he felt his own orgasm close.

“Nearly there lady ... gonna fill you up with Pakistani cum.”

He moved his hands down from her breasts to her hips locking her in place on his cock.

“Fuck ... fuck ... fuck ... here it comes bitch ... aaarrghhh” and his hot seed exploded into her cunt.

“You fucking loved it didn’t you? I said you would.” he said to her triumphantly.

He pulled out of Amy allowing her to fall to the ground and smiled to the other youths.

“That’s how to treat a white whore. They’re all the same, acting so superior but all they want is a cock up them. This bitch is one great piece of ass. Who’s next to fuck her?”

Rehzin and Jusamad both started going to work on the brown haired beauty. They dragged her across to the bin bags and pushed her down on her back. Rehzin quickly forced her legs apart and mounted her, feeding his prick into her. Inch after inch of his stiff cock invaded her juicy cunt until he was balls deep inside the hot white woman. He held her hips tightly as he began to slide in and out quickly increasing his speed until he was pumping her hard and fast.

Jusamad took hold of her head tilting her face towards him and pushed his cock into her mouth. Any thoughts in her mind that he would settle for a simple blowjob disappeared as he suddenly heaved his hips forward and rammed his cock to the back of her throat. Amy gagged on it, gasping for air as his thick meat filled her mouth.

“Suck it you bitch, suck my cock.” he ordered.

He gripped the back of her head so she couldn’t move and then began slamming his prick in and out, fucking her mouth just like it was a cunt. A series of shattering orgasms ripped through her shaking body as the double assault produced feelings of sexual satisfaction inside her stronger than she’d ever experienced before. It wasn’t long before she felt two loads of hot cum blast into her fabulous white body. Rehzin shot every drop of his seed deep up her cunt while Jusamad fired one stream of semen down her throat before pulling out and spraying the rest all over her pretty face.

“Wow! She really is a great fuck!” said Rehzin, a satisfied smile on his face.

“Well move over,” Jusamad replied, “I’m going to fuck this bitch so hard she won’t be able to stand for a week.”

For the next thirty minutes the two Pakistani youths gave Amy a good going over as firstly Jusamad savagely fucked her cunt and Rehzin pumped his cock in and out of her mouth. Then they each took her again while she was lying on her back and they flipped her over and both fucked her doggie style before spraying even more cum over her face.

Once Rehzin and Jusamad had finished with her it was Kasib’s turn to continue the rape of the beautiful white woman. He stripped her of her leather jacket, white top and bra, and for the first time the three Pakistani teenagers could take in the majestic sight of Amy’s magnificent naked body, her full firm breasts, narrow waist and nice round ass.

Kasib pulled her up so she was on her hands and knees and buried the whole length of his cock up her wet cunt. While he pistoned his prick into her he spread her ass cheeks and pushed a finger up her anus, quickly followed by second. She screamed as his fingers rotated round in her dry chute but that was nothing like the pain she experienced a few seconds later when she felt his cock leave her cunt and attempt to push into her ass. Even though he was well-lubricated with her vaginal juices it was hard going trying to push past her tight anal sphincter. He pushed in harder, rotating his hips all the time, and very slowly but surely he got a little deeper into her. Eventually her muscles relaxed just a fraction more, just enough for him to feed his cock deep up her ass. She screamed and felt pain like never before as he started to fuck her ass properly.

“Aarrgh! Take it out. Take it out please.” she pleaded with the young Pakistani. “It’s too much for me.”

Kasib ignored her, driving his prick into her harder and faster, loving the feeling as her tight rear passage gripped the whole length of his cock. He savagely hammered his prick up her and her screams filled the alley as continued the relentless assault on her ass.

“The bitch just loves cock. It doesn’t matter whether it’s in her cunt or ass she just can’t get enough. Isn’t that right pretty lady?”

Amy’s face was contorted with pain as her squirming body tried to free itself from the cock invading her ass, but he had a firm hold on her hips and there was no escape. He continued to ream her mercilessly, the sound of his thighs slapping against her ass clearly audible as he pounded her with long hard strokes. Then without warning he changed positions. Keeping his cock inside her he pulled her down on top of him as he lay back on the bin bags. Her legs were spread wide apart either side of his and his arms encircled her waist holding her in position as he started slamming his cock deep up her ass again.

“Oh my God! Stop, please stop. I can’t take any more!” she screamed as the destruction of her ass continued.

This only spurred Kasib to slam into her with even greater intensity and it wasn’t long before her ass was full of his cum as well as his prick. By now his two friends were ready to join in the action again. Jusamad knelt down between her legs and his cock was soon ploughing deep into the welcoming cunt of the gorgeous woman, while Rehzin roughly forced her lips apart and began fucking her mouth.

Her body tingled all over as her cunt, ass and mouth were all stuffed full of cock as the three Pakistani teenagers continued the rape of the brown haired beauty. Soon jets of cum were blasting down her throat and into her ass and cunt. They continued to take it in turns to use her gorgeous body for their own satisfaction, filling all her holes in a variety of positions. All of them took her ass and cunt again while she was down on her hands and knees. They pounded into her battered cunt while she was lying on her back, and from time to time she also had a cock down her throat. They fired stream after stream of cum all over her face and body and it was leaking from her ravaged ass and cunt. It took another hour and many orgasms later but eventually the three Pakistanis were finally finished with Amy.

They got dressed and stood looking down at the stunning woman. She was lying on her back on the bin bags, legs wide apart and eyes closed, motionless apart from a few involuntary twitches of her magnificent body. Cum was all over her, in her hair, on her face and body, and was leaking from her lips, ass, and pussy. They really had thoroughly worked over the brown-haired beauty.

The three Pakistani teenagers high-fived each other, and they had a feeling that this wasn’t the last time they would see the gorgeous white woman. They were sure that before long she’d be back for more cock.

« Last Edit: June 04, 2018, 06:34:29 AM by Panthers70 »

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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, rape, gang)
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2018, 02:20:48 PM »
What a great first story!  In my yes it could have used a bit more background story to set it up. Major kudos for not posting a wall of words, that made the reading even more enjoyable earns a merit!

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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, rape, gang)
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2018, 09:53:51 PM »
Thanks for the kind words carhamgrater. I agree, I think it would have been better if I had developed Amy's character a little more before the action started.





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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, rape, gang)
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2018, 09:55:31 PM »
If you've read the story please post feedback, positive or negative. What did you like about it and what could have been done better?

It's mainly by feedback that I can improve as a writer and so hopefully produce better stories for you to enjoy.

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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, rape, gang)
« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2018, 05:29:15 AM »
This is your first story I've read on RU and I gotta say, you do a good job of gangrape. I especially like the interracial angle!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, rape, gang)
« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2018, 07:44:48 AM »
First, I love the theme, thank you for posting stories and hope to see many more from you!

Since you're asking for specific feedback, here's my personal opinion...
I'm with Carhamgrater on this one... I'd like to see more character development as a background device. 

I mean, who is Amy really?  Is she innocent, sweet, and naive?  Perhaps she helps immigrants and now it's ironic that she's being destroyed by Pakistani's?  Or perhaps she's racist, and hates foreigners... perhaps she got passed over for promotion at work to a foreigner because of unwritten diversity rules... or maybe she just can't fathom the thought of being physically touched by a non-white man.  If so, there's so many angles you could play off of that during the plot details.  As an example, she starts having orgasms.  Is she so sexually innocent that it shocks her?  Or is she racist and then you could have the tug of war of the men trying to humiliate her with orgasm and she has to fight her soul to try to prevent it? 

Speaking of tug of war, I'd like to know more about the Pakistani teens... is this their first rodeo?  Or is this the first time they've crossed the threshold of interracial ravishment?  Why does this turn them on so much?  Is the interracial taboo because of their upbringing?  At school do they lust after say, the white cheerleaders, and hate the rejection?  Is it because it's so unobtainable that they've decided to use force now?

I think backgrounds like this add a whole new dimension to the story to make it pop, and there's so many ways to play off those themes to explore.  It then gives you literary avenues to add narrative and inner thoughts and dialogue, and offsets the fatigue of having to read/write a constant string of descriptions of physical fucking.  In my mind, it makes the sexual parts so much hotter when you feel like you really know the characters.

Anyway, hope that helps... please keep going, and I'd love to see a sequel as I think you've set it up that way with this foreshadowing line of how she might secretly enjoy it...
Comments inspire more frequent story posts... just sayin'...

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« Reply #6 on: May 29, 2018, 11:57:53 PM »
Chapter 2

The following day Amy hardly managed to get any work done. Her mind was still trying to make sense of what happened to her the previous evening. How she had been savagely raped in a dark alley by three Pakistani teenagers and how her body had started to respond to their big cocks deep inside her. How she actually started to feel some pleasure from the thorough going over they gave her.

A part of her was disgusted at what had taken place. Why had it happened to her? All she had done was go out for a meal with her work colleagues. She hadn’t flirted or teased anyone. She had done nothing to provoke the rape apart from being a beautiful white woman in the wrong place at the wrong time. However she also remembered the wonderful sensations as they fed their big cocks into her and how she had been penetrated deeper than ever before. She remembered the fantastic orgasms running through her body like bolts of electricity as they filled her cunt and ass with their pricks. Sure she’d had plenty of lovers before as with her gorgeous looks and stunning body guys were always hitting on her, but all her previous boyfriends had made love to her. Yesterday was different. The three teenagers hadn’t made love to her, they had raped her, fucking her harder and rougher than she’d ever been fucked before.

Towards the end of the afternoon Amy was sitting at her desk in her office replaying in her mind the events of the previous evening as she had done countless times before that day and just as all the other times she felt tingling sensations run through her body. She closed her eyes and leant back in her chair. One hand slipped under the top of her loose fitting blouse and cupped her breast, the other moved down under her desk and hitched her skirt up. Her panties were already soaking wet as her fingers found her pussy and without hesitation plunged into her cunt.

“Yes, Yes! That’s it! Fuck me! Fuck me!” she moaned quietly as she pictured Kasib deep inside her again. “Give it to me! Fill me up with your big prick!”

Her tongue circled her lips as her head rolled from side to side. Her hips arched up off the chair to meet the thrusts of the imaginary cock fucking her.

“Oooh! I’m coming! I’m coming!” she gasped as an orgasm raked through her quivering body. “So good! So good!”

As the wonderful sensations subsided she came back to her senses and quickly straightened her clothing. One thing was now totally clear to Amy. What happened yesterday had awakened her previously suppressed sexual desires and she was desperate to feel a big cock deep inside her. She wanted to raped again and didn’t care if she was thought of as just a piece of white meat to be used whenever anyone felt like it.

That’s why a few minutes before 9pm that evening the stunning brown haired beauty parked her car and walked towards the alley where she had been royally screwed by the Pakistani teenagers less than twenty-four hours previously.

For the next ten minutes Amy wandered up and down the busy High Street scanning the crowd for Kasib and his friends but there was no sign of them. She was aware of the looks she was getting from some of the men and how they were mentally undressing her with their leering stares. Unlike yesterday however she didn’t feel uneasy about the attention she was getting, in fact she was becoming turned on by it. She loved how, without even trying, she was the object of their sexual desires.

Although Amy couldn’t find Kasib he had been watching her ever since she got out of her car. He was sitting at a window table in a cafe just two doors up from the alleyway. The café was south facing and to stop the sun shining in too strongly had tinted windows which acted similar to a one-way mirror. Although you could see out ok it was difficult to see in so even though he was only a few yards away she wasn’t aware of his presence.

“Well well well! The bitch is back for more cock.” Kasib thought to himself and felt his cock stiffen as he looked the brown haired beauty up and down. She was wearing a baggy navy hoodie, zipped at the front, a black skirt which reached down to mid-thigh, and her long brown hair was tied in a pony-tail. She was just as gorgeous as he remembered from yesterday and oozed sex appeal.

“Okay lady, you’re about to get another good fucking” he whispered as he got up and walked outside.

Amy was still searching the High Street for Kasib as he moved up behind her. His hands gripped her hips as he pressed hard up against her, grinding his groin into her ass, and heard her softly moan.

“So you’re back for more of my cock up you? You didn’t get enough yesterday?” he whispered in her ear, “I told you once I’d fucked you you’d be back for more!”

Kasibs initial urge was to immediately drag the gorgeous woman back down the alley and rape her again. He thought that the white bitch coming back to tease him again with her fabulous body deserved the savage fucking he was going to give her. He would show the hot white woman who was in charge in this neighbourhood, but he had another idea. He would fuck her in due course, but first he was going to show her off like a trophy. He was going to let everyone in the High Street know that a Pakistani teenager had a beautiful mature white woman addicted to his cock. Indeed there were already a number of men watching the couple and all wishing they were in his place with their stiff pricks grinding into her ass.

His hands left her hips and began to explore her athletic body. One hand circled round to her caress her stomach, her skin smooth and soft to his touch, then gradually moved lower under the elasticated waistband of her skirt and inched down towards her pussy. His other hand reached up to the top of her hoodie and very slowly pulled the zip down enough to allow his hand to slip inside and move down towards her breasts. Kasib was in for a double surprise as his hands reached their targets. No panties, no bra, nothing but bare skin. His hand was all over her firm full breasts, kneading them roughly and tweaking her erect nipples, while lower down he slipped a couple of fingers into her wet cunt bringing a gasp from Amy.

By now there must have been around twenty men circled around the couple watching the show. Some of them were rubbing the hard bulges in their trousers. All of them wanted to swap places with Kasib, imagining it was their hands exploring her fabulous body. They watched him continue to grind his groin against her ass. They watched his arm disappear inside her hoodie and saw the material billow out as his hand groped her breasts. They watched the movement under her skirt as his fingers motioned in and out of her cunt. Finally they watched her body jerk and heard her moan with pleasure as the gorgeous white woman was brought to orgasm by the Pakistani teenager.

“Okay time for me to give that body what it was built for.” he whispered to her. “Time for you to take a big cock up your tight white cunt.”

He took her hand and pulled the brown-haired beauty back down the alley where he had raped her yesterday. The dimly lit area at the end of the alley seemed a little bigger this evening as the cardboard boxes had been cleared away but the black bin bags were still there and it still had a cold unfriendly feel to it.

Kasib pushed Amy back against the far wall and immediately pressed his body up against her. He grabbed her pony-tail holding her head still as his mouth clamped down on hers. He forced her lips apart and shoved his tongue into her mouth. Releasing his hold on her pony-tail freed his hands to roam all over her body, over her magnificent breasts, narrow waist, full hips and tight round ass. He then moved one hand round to the front of her hoodie and pulled the zip right down. A chill ran through Amy as he pulled her hoodie open allowing the cool evening air to sweep over her exposed body, but that feeling soon disappeared as she felt his warm hands cupping and squeezing her bare breasts. And all the time their mouths remained locked together, his tongue duelling with hers.

She heard the sound of a zip being pulled down as Kasib freed his stiff prick from the confines of his jeans. He pushed his left arm between her legs and lifted her right leg up as high as it could go, her skirt rucking up around her waist. Seconds later his cock was rubbing against her pussy and then with one quick upward movement of his hips he buried the whole length of his cock up her soaking wet cunt.

“Aargh! It’s so big!” Amy screamed as he began pistoning into her with long powerful strokes.

He looked deep into her brown eyes and said, “How does that feel lady? How does it feel to have me up your tight white cunt?”

They were so engrossed in their fucking that neither of them noticed they had an audience. Hidden in the darkness of the unlit part of the alley some of the men who were watching the couple a few minutes earlier in the High Street had followed them hoping to see the gorgeous white woman get nailed by the Pakistani teenager. And they weren’t disappointed as they saw him power into Amy. A couple of them were busy stroking their exposed pricks, imagining what it would be like if it was them deep inside her and what they were going to do to the stunning brown-haired beauty when Kasib had finished with her.

“You fucking love it don’t you.” he hissed at her, “You love the feel of my prick inside you.”

He was determined to give her the fucking of her life and began to power into Amy faster and faster, burying himself deep inside her. He glanced down to see her lovely breasts bounce up and down with each savage thrust and it wasn’t long before he felt her body jerk against his as she came for the second time that evening.

Kasib pushed his right arm between her legs and raised her left leg lifting her off the ground completely, her body supported by his hands on the cheeks of her ass and her legs spread wide allowing the teenager easy access to her cunt. He continued to pound into her as hard and deep as he could, driving her back into the wall. She screamed and her body quivered as multiple orgasms shot through her like bolts of electricity.

For what seemed like forever to Amy he slammed his big cock deep inside her and she knew she was getting the best fuck of her life, even better than yesterday. Kasib was thinking similar thoughts, that this exquisite white beauty was the best he had ever had.

“God you’re amazing,” he said as he relentlessly hammered his prick up her, “You’re just built for fucking!”

Kasib felt a stirring in his balls and realising that his orgasm was not too far away pistoned into her with even greater intensity. Seconds later he gave one last thrust and held his prick deep inside her as he began to spew a seemingly never-ending hot stream of cum into the depths of her cunt. The sensation of his hot seed filling her was too much for Amy and she screamed wildly as yet another orgasm coursed through her trembling body.

The couple clung to each other for a minute or two as they slowly came off their sexual highs before Kasib finally withdrew his softening prick from her and lowered her to the ground. Amy slumped back against the wall, eyes closed, unable to even talk after being so thoroughly fucked.

As Kasib pulled his jeans back on he heard a noise in the alley. Turning round he saw a dozen men appear from the shadows, their cocks out and carnal lust etched all over their faces. Amy quickly zipped up her hoodie and straightened her skirt as they slowly edged closer. Kasib moved out of their way and walked over to the far corner of the alley where he could watch the gang rape of the gorgeous brown haired beauty.

Amy backed away but the men continued to edge forward and soon she felt herself trapped against a wall. The pack edged closer to their prey and suddenly they were on her, ripping off her hoodie and skirt and exposing her magnificent naked body to their lust filled stares. Hands were all over her as the gang fought to get a piece of this gorgeous woman. A couple of them took it in turns to shove their tongues into her mouth while others grabbed at her breasts and ass. More hands were between her legs and she felt fingers sliding up both her ass and cunt. She had returned to the High Street to get another fucking from Kasib and his two friends and but this was too much. Tears began running down her cheeks as she realised there was no escape and she was going to be gang raped by a dozen Pakistani men.

They continued to feel her up for another ten minutes or so and she had lost count of how many tongues were forced into her mouth and how many fingers had been rammed up her ass and cunt. This was just the start of the assault on Amy and now her gang rape was just about to get started properly as they picked her up and threw her on top of the bin bags. As they turned her onto her back she felt one of the men move between her legs and tried to force his cock into her cunt but she fought against the invasion as hard as she could, locking her legs together to deny him access and punching him with all the strength she had left.

This only made her rapist angry and she felt a stinging pain as he slapped her face hard a couple of times.

“Hold her down while I teach this bitch a lesson.”

Straight away she felt hands grabbing her wrists and ankles and her legs were pulled wide apart. The man looked straight into her brown eyes as he mounted her again and savagely shoved his prick all the way up her wet cunt and began thrusting in and out. Nothing gentle, just raw animal fucking. He didn’t last long and quickly shot his load into her before pulling out. Another man took his place and began hammering into her, loving the feeling of fucking a mature white woman for the first time.

Amy felt someone grab her head as a cock was forced into her mouth and down her throat. She gagged and couldn’t breathe as her air supply was cut off and it wasn’t long before her face started to go bright red. She thought she was going to die as the man just cruelly laughed at her holding his prick deep down her throat but finally he pulled out allowing her to fill her lungs with air again. It was a brief respite though as he plunged his prick back down her throat again and began to fuck her just like it was a cunt but at least as he thrust in and out she was able to catch her breath. After a few minutes he pulled out and she felt her head being twisted round so another man could shove his cock in her and these two took it in turns to fuck their pricks down the gorgeous white woman’s throat.

At the same time as the two men were raping her throat, more and more men were viciously hammering into the brown haired beauty’s cunt as her legs were held wide apart. They pistoned into her as hard and fast as they could before filling her up with their hot cum. As soon as one man had finished, another took his place in raping the gorgeous mature woman’s magnificent body. It wasn’t long before they’d all fucked her but her ordeal was far from over.

Kasib watched as they flipped her over so she was on her hands and knees and another cock entered her ravaged cunt doggy style. He grabbed her hips and slammed into Amy for all he was worth, loving the feeling of power he had over this white bitch as he raped her. Three of the men moved up to her head and took it in turns to force their cocks down her throat so now she was getting fucked hard at both ends. One after another the men took turns in ravishing the mature woman’s cunt and filling her up with their cum, the overflow leaking out between her legs and forming a puddle on the bin bags.

Soon they’d all taken her from behind and most of them had fucked her throat as well. Amy was almost unconscious from the pounding the men were giving her and her body was in a state of almost continuous orgasm. Just as she thought her ordeal might be close to ending she felt one of the men move behind her again. If she hadn’t got a cock buried deep down her throat she would have screamed as she felt her ass cheeks being pulled apart and a cock roughly forcing its way up her rear channel. Once all the way up her he started to thrust in and out, viciously reaming her ass, and when he had shot his load up her another man took his place followed by another and another, all intent on raping this gorgeous white woman’s ass as hard as they could stop. It wasn’t long before they had all sampled the delights of her lovely rear channel but still they weren’t finished with her.

They turned her over so she was lying on her back again and formed a queue to mount her. Most of them buried themselves up her cunt while others decided to have another go at her ass and a few more fucked her throat and she was never without a couple of pricks inside her. They took great pleasure in roughly raping this white bitch and filling her stunning body with their cocks, making sure she knew what to expect if she ever came into their neighbourhood again.

Gradually the men finished using her and one by one they disappeared back out to the High Street and eventually only Kasib remained. He walked over to her motionless body and shone the flashlight from his mobile phone on her. He saw semen caked all over her face, hair and body and it was leaking out from between her legs and from her mouth. Despite that he still thought the hot white woman looked gorgeous and wanted to fuck her magnificent body again and again. He reached forward and caressed her cheek with his palm.

“Lady you are fucking amazing taking all those cocks up you. I said your body was just built for sex and you should be getting it all day and all night and that just proves it.”

He scribbled his mobile number on a piece of paper and put it in the pocket of her hoodie.

“If you want me and my buddies to fuck you again just give me a ring and if you want to be gang raped again, well you know where to come.”

With that he got up and left Amy alone in the alley. One way or another he thought he’d be seeing the brown haired beauty again quite soon.

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« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2018, 06:26:12 AM »
Chapter 3

Amy didn’t bother going to work the next day as she recovered from the savage gang rape twelve Pakistani men had given her the previous evening. A few showers and a long soak in the bath had got rid of most of the aches in her body but her cunt and especially her ass were still sore from the pounding they had received. She should have been shocked and disgusted at what they had done to her but it just showed what a cock loving slut she had become as what she remembered most was the countless orgasms which ripped through her while they ravaged her. Depraved as it sounded she’d loved it and wanted to feel that excitement again.

She knew they thought a white woman alone in their neighbourhood was fair game to them for them to fuck and she had seen from their lust filled eyes the effect her magnificent body had on them. She was already tingling with excitement as she thought of what would happen if she ventured back to the High Street but she had made up her mind that that is exactly what she was going to do that evening. She didn’t care if it was a bunch of teenagers like Kasib and his friends or a group of older men, as long she got another thorough going over.

Amy knew she oozed sex appeal but she made a special effort to look good this evening. She guessed it was a waste of time wearing a bra or panties as they wouldn’t be on her for very long so she just slipped on some white stockings and a matching white garter belt, together with a pair of high-heeled white shoes. Her dress was a white sleeveless wrap over type, the two sides of it tied together by a simple bow, and showed her stunning body off to maximum effect. Her long brown hair cascaded down across her shoulders and a touch of gloss gave a wet look to her pouting lips. She finished off preparations by applying a little rouge to her cheeks and then stepped back to look at the result in her full-length mirror. The Pakistani men had lusted after her dressed casually in a baggy hoodie and skirt and her body literally shook as she thought about the effect her appearance would have on them this evening. Apart from being a beautiful mature white woman walking alone in their neighbourhood she wasn’t going to give them any other encouragement and when they fucked her she wanted them to think that they were raping her, though she knew her body would eventually give the truth away.

She parked her car in just about the same place and at the same time as she had done the previous evening. As soon as she got out of her car men started to stare at her, checking out the curvaceous figure of this beautiful white woman and a couple of them recognised her as the cock loving white slut who had been gang raped the previous evening. They couldn’t believe that she had dared to come back to the High Street after the savage fucking she’d had and now she was parading herself in front of them, teasing them with her hot body.

As she walked along the crowded street she felt them grab at her breasts and ass and she had to slap away a few who had tried to slip their hands inside her dress and get between her legs. She heard the men curse at her. Bitch, whore and cock tease were most popular, along with some others in Pakistani which she didn’t understand. Suddenly six men grabbed Amy and dragged her down the alley where she had been raped the two previous evenings.


“So the cock teasing slut didn’t get enough fucking last night did she?” one of them said. “Well let’s see how you like this.”

They were so impatient to rape this gorgeous white woman that just a few yards into the alley she was pushed roughly against a wall. While two of them held her wrists the man who spoke to her gave a sharp tug to the front of her dress. The bow immediately gave way allowing the dress to swing open and reveal her near naked body.

“Look at that, she’s come ready to be fucked.” as he pushed a hand between her legs feeling how wet she was down there. “Wow, the slut is soaking wet, she wants it all right.”

He didn’t waste any time and without any foreplay he forced her legs apart and shoved his prick into her. She gasped as she felt his cock hammer into her while hands took possession of her breasts and groped them roughly. The man loved the way despite all the cocks she’d taken her cunt still felt nice and tight around his prick. He reached round and grabbed her ass, pulling her a little tighter against him and allowing him to go even deeper inside her. Amy’s body shook as an orgasm hit her much to the delight of the man raping the brown haired beauty.

“You fucking love this don’t you?” he said as he felt her body tremble. “That’s why you came back isn’t it? To get gang raped again,”

She didn’t say anything but he was right of course.

He thrust in a few more times before holding his prick deep inside her and filling her cunt with his cum. No sooner than he had pulled out than another man moved in and started raping the gorgeous white woman. After a few minutes he too shot his seed into her before the third man took his turn between her legs. He was rougher than the other two pile driving his cock into her as if it was a weapon, determined to get as much enjoyment as he could from fucking her stunning body. Amy was in heaven as this Pakistani man gave her two more orgasms before filling his hot cum into the gorgeous woman. He pulled out allowing the other three men to fuck her. As soon as the last one felt his climax approach he pushed her down on her knees and shot stream after stream of cum all over her pretty face. Having finished using the gorgeous white woman they returned to the High Street leaving Amy in a dishevelled state in the alley, on her knees with her dress pulled wide apart and cum all over her face.

Before she even had chance to get up ten more men burst into the alley and dragged Amy onto the bin bags. They had heard that a few of their friends had just raped a white woman and were determined to have their go at her. Her arms hung loosely by her sides as one of the men started fucking her, cheered on by the rest of the group.

“That’s it. Fuck her. Fuck the white bitch.”

“Give it to her. Teach her not to be such a cock tease.”

“Fuck her harder, the slut loves it rough.”

He grabbed one of her legs and threw it over his shoulder so that he could drive his cock deeper into the brown haired beauty, pistoning into her like he was using a pneumatic drill. Amy’s body shook as an orgasm hit her quickly followed by second as the man drove his prick right up against her cervix. A few seconds later she felt his hot cum inside her and then it was another man’s turn to fuck her. He didn’t last very long and was quickly replaced by third man, then a fourth. Two of the men got impatient and took it in turns to ram their pricks into her mouth and down her throat. The next man to mount her drove his prick up her ass and began to pile drive his cock in and out of her rear channel. She would have screamed but her mouth was also full of cock. The Pakistani men couldn’t get enough of her stunning body as they continued the gang rape of the beautiful white woman. They hammered into her relentlessly, shooting jet after jet of their hot seed deep inside her.

“That’s it, breed that white bitch. Give the whore a Pakistani baby like she wants.”

The men started to be a bit more creative now, shifting her into different positions as they fucked her. She felt pricks shoved up her cunt, ass and down her throat as they took her on her back, on her hands and knees, and from behind lying on her side holding one leg high up into the air. By now they had all fucked Amy in every hole but were still continuing to rape the brown haired beauty. They were determined to teach her a lesson, to teach her not to come into their neighbourhood and tease them with her hot body.

She laid back and let the Pakistani men use her as they wanted. She had no control over the numerous orgasms which by now rocked almost continuously through her body but otherwise gave no signs of how much she was actually enjoying the fucking they were giving her. They all thought they were gang raping a cock teasing white slut and little did they know how much she was loving it, loving how they were relentlessly pounding their cocks into her luscious body.

They pushed her face down on the bin bags and one of the men climbed on top of her and straight away shoved his prick all the way up her ass. She screamed at the sudden invasion but they were quickly muffled as a hand clamped over her mouth. He thrust in and out as he reamed her ass mercilessly, using his cock like a weapon as he furiously drove it up her rear channel. He didn’t last much longer and soon another man replaced him, followed by third and a fourth, all drilling their cocks into her ass as if they were trying to destroy it. The next group of men switched back to her cunt, taking it in turns to plough into the gorgeous white woman and then fill her up with their hot seed. The final couple of men were greedy, fucking her in both the ass and cunt as they finished their violation of her stunning body. Finally they shot their cum into her and she collapsed back down onto the bin bags, completely exhausted by the savage fucking the men had given her. They stepped back and taking the last look at the gorgeous white woman they had just gang raped, walked back out into the High Street satisfied they had taught the bitch a lesson she would never forget. Finally Amy was left alone, cum leaking from all her holes and her well satisfied body aching from the ravishment she had received.

After taking a few minutes to pull herself together she stood up, tied her dress back up again and tried to wipe as much cum as she could from her face. She left the alley and started walking back down the High Street. She’d only been back in the neighbourhood for just over an hour and already sixteen different men had fucked her. That number was quickly increased to twenty-five as another group of men dragged her into a cafe, bent her face down over a table, and continued the gang rape of the gorgeous white woman. They rucked her dress up around her waist and two men grabbed her arms and pulled her forward across the table. She felt one of the men move up behind her and lift one of her legs onto the table. Her inviting wet cunt was now easily accessible and the man lost no time in driving his prick straight into her.

They followed the same routine as earlier, each one hammering into Amy for as long as he good could before shooting his cum into her and then pulling out so the next man to take their turn in fucking her magnificent body. Once they had all been inside her they queued up to fuck her again. Amy felt her dress pulled open and hands take possession of her breasts, kneading them roughly, and at same time a man shoved his prick into her mouth and down her throat. She gagged as he held his prick steady inside her, his balls pressed against her chin. She was just starting to feel like she might pass out when he began moving his cock in and out fucking her mouth like it was a cunt and this allowed her to get some much-needed oxygen into her lungs.

By now most of the men had fucked her again, either in the ass or cunt, as they continued their assault on the beautiful white woman, turning her over again so she was lying on her back. One of the men quickly positioned himself between her legs and mounted her, driving his cock deep into Amy. Just as before, as soon as he shot his load up her, another man took his place, followed by another and another, her wet cunt never without a cock inside it. Finally the last man finished with the gorgeous mature woman and they stood around her, staring at the brown haired beauty lying almost motionless on the table, her majestic body and pretty face covered with their cum, and semen leaking from between her legs. They had fucked this beautiful woman to exhaustion.

The men left and the cafe owner gave Amy a little time to recover before insisting she leave. She only had time to pull her dress back on before being ushered out back into the High Street, her face and hair still caked with their cum. Other men laughed at her as they watched the gorgeous woman walk unsteadily down the street, all aware that she had just been gang raped by some of their friends.

She passed the restaurant where she’d eaten with her work colleagues two days ago and just as she reached a little park, a gang of ten teenagers approached her. They quickly surrounded the brown haired beauty and started feeling up her hot body. Their hands were everywhere as they pulled her dress wide open allowing the cold evening air to sweep over her body. They groped her breasts, grabbed her ass and shoved their hands between her legs pushing fingers into both her cunt and ass. Two of them held her head and gave her long open mouth kisses, forcing themselves into her mouth and sucking her tongue. Amy started moaning and her body was quickly becoming excited by the things these enthusiastic teenagers were doing to her. They dragged her into the park and pushed her down onto the grass. The gorgeous white woman found herself on her hands and knees as cocks were thrust into her at both ends. The youth in her cunt was especially rough, hammering into her as hard as he could with long savage thrusts, each one pushing the cock in her mouth further down into her throat. While they pounded into her hands reach down and grabbed her breasts, squeezing them firmly and tweaking her nipples. The youth behind her soon finished with her and was replaced by another teenager who was equally rough. His cock was a little bigger and each thrust reached right up to her cervix as she felt herself filled by this young Pakistani. It wasn’t long before yet another orgasm coursed through her body.

“God she’s a good fuck,” he grunted, “such a lovely wet cunt.”

“You love my cock up you don’t you bitch? You’re a slut for Pakistani cock aren’t you?”

She didn’t say anything but yes she did love the way he was fucking her and yes over the last couple of days she had become a slut for Pakistani cock. She had discovered the joys of hard rough sex and couldn’t get enough cock up her. Although she was actually enjoying it she loved that they all thought they were raping her, it was such a turn on.

Youth after youth took it in turns to fuck her and now as well as hammering their pricks into her cunt they were also starting to ream her ass as well. They pushed her down onto her back and continued to savagely gang rape the brown haired beauty, hammering their cocks inside her as hard and deep as they could. Unlike the older men earlier they weren’t fucking her to punish her, they were just fucking her because they lusted after the gorgeous white woman and wanted to get their cocks into her curvaceous body.

Amy was lying on her back with her arms hanging limply beside her as they continued their ferocious assault on her body. By now as well as just drilling their pricks into her well-lubricated cunt they were grabbing her breasts and shoving their tongues into her mouth as they fucked her. She was loving the effect her stunning body was having on them and how the young Pakistanis thought they were raping her and not realising that she actually wanted all their cocks up her. One after the other they took it in turns to hammer into the hot woman’s cunt, thrusting into her hard and fast. For most of them it was the first time they’d had a beautiful mature white woman and they were so excited they couldn’t hold out too long before they climaxed into her but more than made up for that by the stamina only teenagers had and they were all were able to come back and fuck her multiple times. Finally even they had been exhausted by the prolonged rape of Amy’s magnificent body and one by one they finished pumping into her. Most of the group left leaving just one of them alone with the gorgeous woman.

Now thirty-five Pakistani youths and men had taken the brown haired beauty that evening and her body ached so much it took her a few minutes to stagger to her feet and tie her dress up again. She didn’t realise there was anybody else there and was surprised when the youth took her hand and started pulling her back out of the park and along the High Street.

“What are you doing? Where are we going?” Amy asked the young Pakistani who just a few minutes ago had been viciously raping her.

“You’ll see in a minute. Don’t worry, a hot bodied bitch like you is sure to enjoy it.” he sneered at her.

A couple of minutes later they arrived at a big building which looked like it had started life out as a cinema. All the windows had been bricked up and there was just one flickering red neon sign above the door which gave away its current use, “Pool Hall”

The youth pressed the buzzer and looked up at the CCTV camera. Seconds later they heard a loud click and the door opened. The teenager pulled Amy into the narrow entrance hall and they heard the door lock shut behind them. He then guided her through another set of doors which opened out into the main room. There were about twenty snooker tables arranged in four rows at the far end of the room, and a little bit closer about the same number of pool tables. To their right was a bar area which is also where people went to hire out the tables. That part of the room was reasonably well lit but the rest of it was dark, illuminated just by the light of the tables which were in use. The teenager went to talk to the barman while the gorgeous white woman surveyed the room. About ten of the tables were in use, some with two people playing, others with four, with around another ten people sitting in the bar area. Amy estimated that there must have been close to forty people in the room and her body shook with excitement as she realised they were all Pakistani men.

The room went so quiet you could hear a pin drop as they stopped playing and stared at this gorgeous white woman who had dared to come into their Pool Hall. They took in the lovely sight of her curvaceous figure and without exception they all wanted to get their cocks inside her. To them it didn’t matter if she was willing or whether they would have to gang rape her, the fact that she was here in their Pool Hall, parading herself in front of them, was enough of a green light in their eyes for them to fuck her.

As they started edging towards her all the lights went out apart from one which was illuminating one of the pool tables close to the bar, like a spotlight shining on to a stage. Amy was in no doubt about what was going to happen, they were going to fuck her on the pool table. Although she had loved the feeling of all the cocks she had taken up her so far that evening she began to wonder whether taking on a forty man gang rape was going to be too much for her. She thought about trying to escape but quickly realised that would be impossible as the men had already surrounded her and were less than six feet away. They stared at her with lust filled eyes imagining what they were just about to do to the stunning brown haired beauty and a few already had their cocks out.

They edged closer and closer to the gorgeous white woman and then suddenly they were on her. Her dress was ripped off leaving them a clear view of her magnificent body, naked apart from the white stockings and garter belt. Amy was carried over to the pool table and the men held her arms and legs so she was lying on her back, spread-eagled on the table. She felt hands roaming all over her body, grabbing her breasts and diving between her legs, battling to see who could get their fingers up her cunt, and heard them shouting as they fought each other to see who was going to be the first to mount her and who was going to be the first to shove their pricks in her sexy mouth. She didn’t know who it was, maybe the barman, but she heard someone take charge.

“Stop pushing everyone, you’ll all get your turn. We’ve got all night and the cock teasing slut isn’t going anywhere.”

“Those of you who want to use her mouth first go to the top of the table and those of you who want to feel her up move to the sides. The rest of you form a line here.”

“That’s it, that’s much better. Okay, well get started then. Go ahead and fuck the bitch.”

She felt cocks being rammed into her cunt and down her throat, while hands roamed over her stomach and breasts. The man fucking her throat came quickly and fired a couple of streams of hot semen into her mouth and then a couple more on her pretty face and in her hair. No sooner than he had finished when another man took his place and she felt her mouth and throat filled again. The man between her legs pulled out just in time to shoot his load all over her breasts and stomach. Another man mounted her and began hammering into her for all he was worth.

“Take this you cock teasing slut, and this, and this.” he snarled at her as he savagely thrust his prick into her.

“You’re not going to be able to stand when I’ve finished with you.” he smiled down at her wickedly as he savagely raped Amy.

When he came he didn’t bother pulling out, wanting to breed the bitch, and his hot cum filled the white woman’s cunt. Another man mounted her, then another, and another as the Pakistani men continued the assault on her stunning body. By now two men were taking it in turns to shove their cocks down her throat, twisting her head from side to side in turn. Cum was now dripping from her battered cunt and a few of the men decided to take her in the ass instead. They reamed her rear channel hard and fast it wasn’t long before cum was leaking out of her ass as well.

She felt herself being turned over and stretched across the table so her breasts were flattened against the green baize. A man moved up behind her and Amy felt one of her legs being pulled up onto the table, allowing easier access to both her cunt and ass. She felt him feed his cock into her welcoming cunt and start to piston in and out of her. At the same time two more cocks were taking it in turns to fuck her mouth and throat. Hands continued to roughly grab at her breasts and also slipped under her ass. When it wasn’t being used by a cock she felt fingers penetrate up her rear channel.

By now nearly all the men had taken an active part in her gang rape and were coming back to pound into her wonderful body for a second time, using all three of her holes for their own gratification. Meanwhile Amy was still loving having all the Pakistani men take her and the fact that they all thought they were raping her turned the brown haired beauty on even more. They flipped her over onto her back again and the next batch of men continued the assault on the gorgeous white woman, drilling their Cocks into her cunt or ass and down her throat, then firing streams of cum either inside her or over her already semen caked body. She heard a cheer go up and wondered what was happening when she felt her cunt empty for the first time in ages. She looked up and saw the barman approach the table, gasping as she saw the incredible size of his erect cock. It was easily bigger than any cock she’d taken, close to twelve inches in length and really thick.

“You ready now to get a real fuck lady?” he said smiling down at her as he approached the table.

He grabbed her hips and pulled her towards him so her ass was resting on the edge of the table. He pushed her legs wide apart and then mounted her, feeding his massive cock inch by inch into her juicy cunt. Amy gasped as she felt the size of the man invading her, stretching her like no one had ever done before. She felt his cock push hard against her cervix, filling her up completely, and still he wasn’t all the way in. Her whole body tingled with pleasure and an orgasm coursed through her as the man hammered his cock into her cunt hard and fast. A second quickly followed.

Though she had planned to remain passive throughout the gang rape and let them think they were fucking her against her will, the wonderful sensations this man was giving her were too much just to lie still. She started arching her back, driving her hips up to meet his thrusts, and then locked her legs up around his back, trying to see if she could get him just that little bit deeper inside her. She screamed with pleasure and her head rocked from side to side as the monster cock lit fires of desire all through her body.

“Oh my God, you’re splitting me in two,” she cried out, “It feels so wonderful. Fuck me, fuck me!”

He looked down at the gorgeous white woman lying beneath him impaled on his prick, her body thrashing around as he brought her to heights of pleasure she had never experienced before. He briefly stopped his assault on her body and leaned down to whisper in her ear.

“Lady I know we’ve broken you and you’re now totally addicted to Pakistani cock. I know that in the future you’ll be coming back to the neighbourhood every day so we can fuck you. You can’t live without our cocks.”

“Okay lady, you asked for it.” he said to her with an evil grin on his face. “You’ve a body that was just built for fucking, let’s see how much you like this.”

He reached down, grabbed her shoulders, and began ramming his cock up her again with long savage thrusts. He quickened his pace and felt her body tremble as another series of orgasms shot through her. After a couple of minutes pistoning into the brown haired beauty he pulled out and turned her over so she was lying face down on the table. He spread her ass cheeks and then placed the tip of his gigantic cock against her anus. She tried to twist away, scared that he would destroy her ass.

“Hold her steady,” he commanded the men,” she’s going to enjoy this.”

They held her arms and he grabbed her hips firmly, locking her in place and giving her no way of escaping the anal rape she was just about to experience. Even though they were both well-lubricated he found it hard going to get past her tight anal sphincter. He pushed in harder, rotating his hips all the time, and very slowly got a little deeper into her. Finally her muscles relaxed just enough for him to feed his cock deep up her ass. She screamed and felt pain like never before as inch after inch of his massive prick invaded her rear channel and soon she had taken eight inches of his meat up her ass. Even though he was only moving in and out slowly the pain was still intense and tears were running down her cheeks.

He gave her a little time to get used to his mammoth size and then began to push in a little deeper. Suddenly it felt as though he was bottoming out so he rotated his hips and changed the angle of penetration slightly. This did the trick and now he was all the way through her rectum and was pushing the tip of his prick into her colon. The pain persisted as he went deeper and deeper into her until finally she felt his balls pressing against her ass cheeks. She had taken all twelve inches of his monster cock inside her.

“That’s it lady, I knew you could take it.” he said. “Now just relax and enjoy it.”

As she gradually adapted to hisincredible size the pain gradually started to subside and her screams were replaced by moans of pleasure. He took this as a signal to start fucking her ass properly, increasing the length of his thrusts, and loved the way the walls of her rear channel gripped his shaft like a tight fitting glove. Now he was reaming her ass hard and fast and Amy’s body was shaking with almost continuous orgasms. The barman soon felt his own climax approach and it wasn’t long before he flooded her with stream after stream of his hot juices. As he pulled out cum poured out of her first stretched anus and she collapsed onto the table.

The barman moved away but many of the men still hadn’t finished with the beautiful white woman. There was no point in using her ass, the barman had completely wrecked it for the rest of the night, but there was still two other holes to fill. Several of them moved back up to her face and took it in turns to shove their cocks down her throat, while others moved up behind her and rammed their pricks up her cunt doggy fashion. By now they knew it wasn’t rape and she was enjoying taking all their cocks inside her, but it didn’t lessen their pleasure as they all loved fucking the magnificent body of this gorgeous white woman.

She was turned around onto her back again so the last few men could mount her. By the time the last man entered her only around twenty people were left. They crowded round the rutting couple and started jacking off and as soon as he pulled out of Amy they gave her a cum bath, firing stream after stream of hot white fluid all over her head and body. Her breasts and stomach were completely covered with semen and it was caked on her pretty face and in her hair. She had taken a proper pounding.

Amy lay back on the table almost unconscious. It was now nearly 4 AM and since she had parked her car up nearly seven hours ago around seventy-five Pakistani youths and men had fucked her, most on multiple occasions. Initially most of them had thought that they were raping her but now it was obvious to them how much she actually wanted it. Amy knew the barman was right about the things he whispered to her. They had broken her and she was totally addicted to Pakistani cock. The brown haired beauty knew that in the future she would be returning to their neighbourhood every day so they could give her magnificent body the fucking she craved.

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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, M+F, rape, gang)
« Reply #8 on: June 04, 2018, 06:33:05 AM »
I always had intended chapter 3 to be the final part of the story but if people think they like to read more about Amy and her life as a Pakistani cock slave I could easily rewrite the last couple of paragraphs.

What do people think?

By the way, if any of you do want to read future chapters let me know how you think I should develop the storyline.

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Would love to see this continue. For some reason i would love to see them trace her back to her place of work and take her there! If this is the last we see of Amy then she went out with the bang of all bang!! Either way another merit earned!

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Panthers70...
VERY nicely done.  You got me pretty riled up, actually.   :]

As for feedback, you can't go wrong following TheYellowKnight's advise.
God help me, but sometimes I just need to be used by a bunch of men at once. Most of the time I'm happy with just one good cock, but sometimes... I just need to be overpowered by six or eight guys and used until I pass out.

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Just a quick update,

I was wondering whether to write another chapter changing the location to Amy's home or (as carhamgrater suggested) her workplace but at the moment I think I'll keep this is the final chapter.

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I asked you to read mine so it is only fair that I read yours.

Speaking frankly I would categorize this as a typical Snatch her, rape her and forget her story. Although the grammar is excellent and not some disconnected gibberish that we see in so many armature stories, it just did not get me excited as I know you are capable of doing.


It needs foreshadowing, of which there was none, and much more descriptive content. A more detailed description of Amy and what she was wearing. Her hair and how it was fixed.  Longer narration of the stripping of her clothing. This is a very important aspect of any rape.


I would also refrain from the over use of certain terms like white bitch and Pakistani cock. Also a slower more detailed description of how the arousal in her began slowly and although she fought it she could not overcome her bodies natural tendencies.

I hope I'm not too critical and would like to see more from you.

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I asked you to read mine so it is only fair that I read yours.

Speaking frankly I would categorize this as a typical Snatch her, rape her and forget her story. Although the grammar is excellent and not some disconnected gibberish that we see in so many armature stories, it just did not get me excited as I know you are capable of doing.


It needs foreshadowing, of which there was none, and much more descriptive content. A more detailed description of Amy and what she was wearing. Her hair and how it was fixed.  Longer narration of the stripping of her clothing. This is a very important aspect of any rape.


I would also refrain from the over use of certain terms like white bitch and Pakistani cock. Also a slower more detailed description of how the arousal in her began slowly and although she fought it she could not overcome her bodies natural tendencies.

I hope I'm not too critical and would like to see more from you.

Rockie :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_kiss.gif:

Thanks for your comments Rockie, they are much appreciated.

The one line "great story-can't wait to see what happens next" comments are nice because at least it shows people are interested in your story but it's much better to receive constructive criticism like you have provided as it's the only way authors are going to improve.

In reply…

1.When I wrote it I had no intentions of it being a literary masterpiece (and I certainly succeeded there!) but purely as a simple stroke story.

2.I totally agree about the lack of character detail and that has also been flagged in previous comments. It's a point I have noted for any future stories I write.

3.One of the problems with this story in particular is that it was originally written and posted at another site which has much stricter guidelines as to what you can post and what you see here is a slight rewrite of a watered-down version of my original idea. Reading it back now I think I should have totally rewritten some of the parts.

Anyway, thanks again for your comments.


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Re: WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE (mmmF, M+F, rape, gang) New Chapter added 04JUN
« Reply #14 on: December 07, 2018, 07:22:48 PM »
CUMS on your story


ooops sorry. but thank you. I enjoyed it

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