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To Rebuild Our Future
« on: May 24, 2018, 07:50:15 PM »
The following is dedicated to some members of this forum who has welcomed me with open arms since i joined a month ago. This warped story from my imagination is my way of saying thank you!

I can guarantee that all involved in this story is above the legal age. No women were hurt in the writing of this story, the guys (really who cares!) remember it for the good of the future!
 
So with out further ado
                                                                                   To Rebuild Our Future

Part One:

 

2495 AD

Welcome to the future as it came to be after Jun Si Kim And Donald Trump the VIII settles what their respected ancestors start generations ago. A twenty second war that devastated the known world,both pressing the grey button on their respective desks and sending out an electrical magnetic pulse that wiped all communication and most of the internet superhighway. The world plunged back into the what amounted to the dark ages of mankind.

Various pockets of mankind formed, the one this story is concerned with is the ‘Daughters of She Of The Brokenwing’ and her home ‘Ravisty’
For fifty five years the brightest mind try to restore ‘Ravisty”. A list of names were found and a concept took form- travel back into the mists of time to rescue the works of the list. Five years later they were ready to send one back!

This is her story!

2555 ADEMP  Virgin Hall

“You’re absolutely sure that I will arrive in only piece?”

"For the gazillionth time yes Sonja and when you’ve completed your assignment we can bring you back in one piece with the information we’re sending you to collect.” Check the dials one more time “Now are you ready to go back or should we call Miriam?”

“No I ready!”

A toggle switch is thrown and a crackle or energy is heard and she pops out of sight all that is heard is “You ly…!”

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July 5TH 2018 West side Virgin Hotel Chicago Delivery Alley

The stagnant air sparks and splits apart for a microsecond, depositing a black leather clad female onto the dirty dark pavement.

“Ing bitch!” Coming to her feet “Motherfucker that hurt!” Checking herself over, popping the top buttons of her leather Looking down “Oh just fucking great!” Swinging her booted foot at the nearest garbage can “You’ll arrive in one piece!, to bad she forgot to mention  stark ass naked in your leather duster and boots!” Doing up the buttons again “Well at least I should turn their heads when I find them!” Cheeking her pockets, the neutralizer, list of names, breath mints and money totalling two dollars and eighty-five cents “Fuck not even enough to get a Starbucks latte and danish!’ Shaking her head “This just keeps getting better by the minute!”

Walking to the street looking up and down, “Well at least she managed to place me where we figured the get together was located. Walking to the front door, entering seeing a chalkboard:

                                                                            Ravishment University Alumni
                                                                                     Banquet Room 69

Making her way deeper into the hotel finding the banquet room about to go in when a voice startles her from behind “Here let me get the door for you!” A hand reaches around her, grasping the handle and opening the door for her

Turning  to the gentleman “Thank you!” Looking him over from head to waist, her brown eyes spotting the name tag over his left breast pocket ‘Hi! I’m CARHAMGRATER!” Walking in, getting out her list, scanning it.

“Why doesn’t it shock me?” A slightly obese man in a pair of blue jeans with a t-shirt 'Eat, Sleep, Rape, Repeat' that barely contained his beer belly standing there.

“Pardon?”

Undoing the top three button, arching her back so her breast are emphasized. As she thought his eyes are glued to her breasts. “Like what you see?” Moving closer  “Maybe you like to go somewhere and play with them?” He just looks my face then back to my breasts

“Do I have to talk slower for you “DDOO YOUUU WAN TA GO SOME WHERE AND TOUUCH THEMMM?”  And this is what our revered leader considered worthy to talk with daily? Jesus Christ how did men of this era write what became our revered bible?

“Look don’t get the wrong idea but I’m in a very happy relationship with my girlfriend!”

Grabbing him by the hand , twisting thumb joint in a hiatusue hold, rendering him helpless, I drag him to the nearest ladies room, going to the extra wide stall in the rear, a picture of a seat with wheels on the door. Opening the door then depositing Carhamgrater inside, releasing the hiatusue hold, taking out the neutralizer hooking it into his ears, instantly rendering his a statue.

Running the controls I divert all unnecessary blood to his cock hardening it so I could begin the harvest of his story memory. Taking off my duster I hang it on the little hook inside the door then looking over to the thing I was about to mount, shivering at the thought of soiling my body with his love juice. Swallowing a bit of bile I move closer, swing my right leg over his form and lower myself onto his erection.

Beginning to ride him the neutralizer displaying titles of his stories  “Confession”, ”Wolves” and some that I clearly remember being accredited to Gscmar64 “What Jehovah Witnessed’ and ‘The Woods” But our records showed that he never returned to the hallow halls of her domain. Oh well we score some extra revisions for our bible!

As the meter climbs more titles pass my eyes, none of which I was hoping to reclaim and bring back to our time. Then it came over me the little tickle that tells me that I was beginning to actually like what I was doing, making the urge to go faster harder to refute. Giving a bit of control back to him, he grabs my hips helping lift, thrusting up into me like I was his girlfriend!

Then I felt it, his grip on my hips pulling my hard to his lap, his cock twitching inside me and the inner warmth begins to flow into me. On the small screen the meter completely filled showing forty five recovered stories. Then the warning of insemination starts “Eww gross!”

Jumping up off him tearing the neutralizer off his head,rushing to the over sized toilet bowl, jamming the ends of the neutralizer into my pussy, dialing ejaculate, then sitting on the toilet seat as the neutralizer worked the walls of my pussy the opposite of how a cock does. Soon I spewing the whole content of his sperm out of my into the bowl.

Detaching the neutralizer I notice a title that I never seen before. I quick scan read it  my eyes widening at the words passing by. The bastard wrote about raping our revered leader, how could he! Walking over to the drooling piece of slime, pulling back and launching a swift solid kick to his balls, crunching them between the sole of my boot and his pelvic bone!

‘Aaaaaaaaggggghhhhhhh!” fucking bastard is lucky I don’t cut his cock off! Grabbing my duster off the hook i leave him on the floor holding his ruptured balls. Making my way back into room 69. Scanning the crowd I begin walking the out perimeter of the room, eyes name tags as I pass looking for anyone on my list!

Then just as I was about to pass the podium table I see her name tag. The revered one!
                                                                                        Brokenwing
                                                                                         Moderator

Going in front of her,falling to my knees “Oh Revered One, How can this lowly one serve you!”


                                                                                    More To Follow

Thanks to Darklord for posting the picture that started my imagination flowing- when will you learn! ;)

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #1 on: May 24, 2018, 08:20:02 PM »
Talk about self-referentially creative. I can't wait to see my wonderful role in all this.
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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2018, 08:22:54 PM »
Ooooh I wanna play!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2018, 05:39:34 AM »
I'm pretty sure i can drop in a cameo or two!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2018, 04:33:32 PM »
And now Part two of To Rebuild Our Future

Part Two: The Revered One

Looking up from the floor I see the look of confusion on her face. “Revered One is something wrong?”

“Who are you talking to?”

“You, Brokenwing you are the revered one of ‘Ravsity’!”

“Ravsity, revered one, what the hell have you been smoking?”

“Oh I can assure you that I am as clean as you yourself claim we should be!” Taking out the neutralizer, attaching it and running the medical check up program. When it dings I show it to the revered one. She whistles!

“Man this must be a new beta version of an iPhone that’s being tested! Getting up  coming around to view the neutralizer. I shake as the skin on the palm of her hand touches mine “Please I am not worthy to touch the revered!” Back to my knees,forehead down on the floor
“Look get up and let’s go somewhere and talk about this revered thing okay?”

Holding her hand out to me, all eyes are on us as i get up and go to exit the room. By the door a male comes in “Greyghost84” on his name tag. As we go to pass “Well where have you been hiding beautiful!” trying to grope the revered one’s breasts. I spring to her defense, opening my duster, instantly his eyes attach themselves onto my breasts.

 Walking to him “Hey big boy!”  he reaches out to touch me then is falling to the floor holding his balls after my right knee mashes then into his stomach. “You are worth of touching the revered one of Ravsity!” A hand on my duster’s shoulder

“Thanks but I can take care of myself!” escorting me out into the hallway,then pass the bathroom where the other asshole is still inside moaning in pain. Leading me to room 101. Once inside “Now want to tell me what the hell is going on”

"Settle in revered one and I will tell you all!” Moving to look out the window. A faraway look on her face.

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March 2/ 2495 AD

It started the second day of March 2495, the leader of the Collected States of NorKor and the leader of Norsouca did the unbelievable and started the war of ruination that lead to the world reverting to hunting and gathering status.

Moving to the small fridge in the room “Anything electronic were instantly rendered inoperable almost overnight a third of the world’s population disappeared. Most people in the big cities started rioting with in a few months, when the food began becoming scarce. Some survived the EMP fall out by burying themselves into underground bunkers like my mom and dad did. For the next few years our people tried to get thing working like the neutralizer. Soon we were the only one in the immediate area who had the ability to live in a semblance of the pre war days.

Thirty years to the day them went in I was born, a most momentous day it was! A cache of electronics with a HP in a circle was discovered by my dad in an old building. Bring one back to our encampment the few scientific people we trusted was able to get the olden technology to turn on. Doing a memory check a folder containing a cache of Ravsity information was found, as it was rematted to work on our new technology.

Opening another folder they found “My Downwards Spiral  along with 12 other books by yourself. As they were read we learned how to govern ourselves so we could prosper in the new world

“But they were just stories of how I was treated growing up?” An astonished Brokenwing tries to comprehend what she just heard. “I can’t
believe that your society is based on something I wrote to come to terms with my life, did anything else survive that EMP

“Oh yes a list of writers you thought were worthy to read!” Digging in my Right duster’s pocket, extracting the folder piece of paper, passing it over to her,

Darklord, Vile8r, GeminiGuy, SoftGameHunter, TheYellowKnight and Tony V. Brokenwing’s eye widen “Why is there a line through Carhamgrater’s name?”

“I have already retrieved his work, revered one!”

“He gave you a copy of everything he wrote?”

“No revered one I took what was need direct from his cortex using this neutralizer!”

“It didn’t hurt him? Retrieving his stories did it?”

"Oh no revered one, it was pleasurable at first until i read his raping you then i made it hurt for him!”

“What do you mean made it hurt?”

“He wrote that he left you curled up in a fetal position so I returned the favor before I entered the gathering and finding you!”

“You mean only a little while ago, oh my god  we have to go see if he’s alright!”

“Why revered one, he’s scum who doesn’t deserve to have the privilege to interact with you in any capacity!”

“Two reasons, the first what he wrote wasn’t reality it was a story he wrote to me to say sorry for an incident between us and second i consider him a friend and i don’t like to see my friends hurt!”

Getting up to go to the door, Brokenwing  doesn’t notice Sonja, taking the neutralizer out. As she passes, Sonja places the contacts onto the nape of her neck, pressing paralyze. As Brokenwing goes to the floor “Please forgive me revered one but I can’t have any interference in my mission. He hand going to Brokenwing’s waist, undoing the button on her jeans, then the zipper revealing a baby blue thong that her hand easily slid under.

‘Oh god I can’t believe what I’m about to do!’ her middle finger seeking the love button of the revered one. Finding it, tracing an inverted figure eight over it’s surface making Brokenwing respond by getting moist. ‘What would they say if they knew what I was doing to the revered one?’

The silence in the room is shattered by “Oh we know Sonja,you should be ashamed of your actions!”

“Please forgive my actions but she wanted to go help that scum Carhamgrater!” The air shimmers and splits open, a another neutralizer materializing into the room

“Press the retrieval code and use this neutralizer to continue on with your mission!”

“What about the revered one?”

“We will bring her to us so she can make us a better people naturally hence the pressing of the retrieval code!”

“Alright!”, inputting the code and pressing the button. Brokenwing shimmers and vanishes, never to be heard from again.

“Now Sonja I suggest you get on with what we need done! Having the revered one is something we never expected but she isn’t the reason we sent you back!” A pause “we suggest you become a SoftGameHunter, if you understand what I’m saying”

“Oh I understand and will do as you suggest!” Making my way back to room 69!


                                                               Next Part Three: SoftGameHunting
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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2018, 04:36:33 PM »
I got my ass kicked!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2018, 04:38:51 PM »
In my defense I sent an apology to you! Greyghost84

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #7 on: May 26, 2018, 04:59:09 PM »
All is forgiven! I hadn't realized you had sent me a message!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #8 on: May 26, 2018, 05:25:20 PM »
Why do I get the feeling I'm going to want a beer before I read the next chapter?
The rumors about me are scurrilous, depraved rantings of a sick mind, and I categorically deny any sense of falsehood attributed to them.

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #9 on: May 26, 2018, 06:12:45 PM »
All is forgiven! I hadn't realized you had sent me a message!

Promise your next cameo won'y be as painful!

Why do I get the feeling I'm going to want a beer before I read the next chapter?

Beer before it or an ice pack after not sure either would help!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #10 on: May 28, 2018, 05:12:34 PM »
Part Three: SoftGameHunting

As I return to room 69 I’m met by the Greyghost84 coming out, walking a little funny. Spotting me he flattens himself against the wall his right leg slightly angled into the left leg. As i approach i open my duster, “Seems i have treated you wrong and must make it up to you!”

Lowering my hands “You may cop a feel without fear of reprisal!” Standing in front of him, sliding me arms behind me. As his eyes bulge out of their sockets, hesitating, slightly trembling as he reaches out and gently touches my nipples
Getting a little braver, closing his full fingers onto each breast “Can I say something?” I nod my head “My room is only one floor up is your willing?” Anger on my face, his hands fly off the right to cover his balls, the left his face “Sorry forget I ever opened my mouth please!”
Extracting himself from being between the wall and me, rushing off!

Continuing to the door, opening it seeing even more people than before. Deciding my first course of action was to retrieve the revered one’s system, even though it would be useless  to us in the future but it was her’s. As I approach where she was sitting I see a salt and pepper breaded man with black glasses. Scanning his left breast, failing to see any name tag. The near i get the more i notice his scrutiny of me

“Something I can help you with?”

“I been sent by Brokenwing to get her system and bring it to her!” Hoping the stranger would believe my lie.Shifting in his seat the beard moves off the right side and i see his name tag “Moderator! Do bug SoftGameHunter at your own risk!” Inside i fist pumping
Faking nervousness “Excuse me is it true what your name tag reads?”

Yes miss, I’m SoftGameHunter why?”

“Brokenwing said if I came across you I was to ask you to come to her room!” looking him right in the glass covered eyes praying to the revered one that he would just do as I said and not ask any questions!

“Is Wing in trouble?”

“No sir she said to tell you that she found some notes for another chapter of “Thrown Out Into The Dark Web” that she wanted to show you where no one could read them over your shoulders!” to make a little more convincing “She says Carhangrater been known of stealing people’s idea and writing a crap story around them!”

To my knowledge that only happened once and he deleted that story when confronted about it!” Pushing his chair back “But if Wing wants to be extra secretive and meet privately what kind of guy would I be if I didn’t go to her! Actually winking at me as he said the phrase ‘go to her’ Coming around the table “Say I didn’t catch your name

‘Because I didn’t give you one!’ was the first thing to my mind followed by make something up Sonja! “Oh sorry it Futurediva!”

“Can’t say i’m familiar with any of your stories

"Oh I just joined a month ago and haven’t really posted one yet! I’m more  known for posting music videos rather than stories!”

"Ah that explains why, I mostly read the stories and do the detention hall!’ taking my by the elbow, escorting me to the door “So let’s not keep Broken wing waiting any longer!”  As we pass by Greyghost84 is on his way back in about to say something but a glare from me closes his mouth as he swallows.

As we walk to the room Brokenwing took me too, in silence, I wondering how i’m going to get the neutralizer out without SoftGameHunter noticing. At the door i call out “Brokenwing I’m back with SoftGameHunter!” Opening the door stepping aside so he could go in first.
“Hey Wing if you wanted me all to yourself you know you could have pm’ed me and i would have commmmm…” The neutralizer coming in contact with the back of his neck after i poked the through the hair on the back of his neck.

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2555 ADEMP Virgin Hall

The air sparks then splits open and a form comes to rest on the floor her legs wide open, her outer pussy lips glistening with her love juice. Two rush to her cleaning her up, closing her legs with the help of two others to dress her in a lime green unitard before the new arrival is places on a memory foam chair, the neutralizer removed.

“Now what bathroom did you leave him in?”

One answers her one,”In 2018 revered one!” passing her a capsule of concentrated water to her “Would you like a meal revered one?”

“I’ll see to the revered one you four back to your duties!” as they leave,“Revered one it is such an honour to welcome you to our lives in person!”

“Oh my god Sonja wasn’t spouting crazy talk after all!” Brokenwing faints in the seat of the chair!

“Well that went better than I thought it was going to go!”

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July 5th, 2018 Virgin Hotel Chicago, Brokenwing’s Room

Christ why didn’t I wait until he as either sat down in the chair or on the bed! Jesus he must weigh a good 225lbs of wasting away muscle. Dragging you is taking all I can do, I’m not going back to the future with a hernia. Then I remember that the neutralizer can be set to negate up to 300 pounds.

Turning it one and doing it, I easily get ole Softie up onto the bed, opening the fly of his pants, my eyes widen to the size of saucers “Damn why call yourself SoftGame. I’ll bet when that is hard, it’s more a tournament than a game!” Checking on the neutralizer making sure the connection is solid, my eyes drifting back between his legs, wondering if my jaw could open far enough to take that into my mouth!
Only one way to find out, grasping the limp shaft in my right hand, feeling it’s warmth as I begin to undulate my hand up and down the length. Darting the tip of my tongue over the head of his cock noticing a vanilla like taste on the flesh. Did he just have oral sex? Opening my hand, running my tongue along the entire length of his shaft.

Yes there was the same taste the entire length as well as the cock head.  Looking to the neutralizer seeing “100 Great Days of Rape” completely transferred, “Bad Night To Lose A Bet beginning, great only 115 more to go!’ Face it Sonja unless you plan on jacking him off for three straight hours, you’re gonna have to take him like you did Carhamgrater! Shaking at the thoughts of that massive piece of male flesh penetrating my even with me contolling how fast and deep.

Climbing up on the bed. Straddling his erection, lowering myself down. Grimacing as the cock head penetrates me. ‘Oh fuck and that’s only the tip!’ running through my thoughts  Super slow I continue lowering myself, impaling myself on the longest, thickest cock i’ve ever taken in my life. With the flesh of my thighs touching his I gasp out “Oh fuck is this what a softball bat feels like!”

Waiting until I can move without the sensation of my insides turning inside out I start to fuck myself on his cock. As i lift my eye catches the screen of the neutralizer only one hundred stories to go. As the pain in my puusy turns to waves of pleasure i start shifting faster up and down “Oh god where can I get me a cock of this size back home?”

What felt like hours was in reality roughly twenty-six minutes according to the neutralizer to collected every shred of stories his inner matrix held onto! Twenty-six minutes and at least ten orgasms for me, normally I would detach the neutralizer but all I want was a quick nap.
Sexually exhausted, I don’t realize that the neutralizer is continuing to search SoftGameHunter’s  inner matrix. A beeping waken me, looking to the neutralizer, seeing it still attached to a now drooling lump of flesh.  “Oh shit what have I done?” Detaching the leads hooking them to the carotid artery running a med scan, looking to what was SoftGameHunter,reaching over closing his eyelids “Sorry big fella!”

Detaching the leads, checking the progress one hundred and seventy stories collected between them both. Well if nothing else this proves that the bible can be redone, now all i had to do is get rid of my last fuck toy and move onto the next! An wicked idea comes to mind going to find what i remember being called a phone, finding it on the little table on the other side of the bed.

Picking it up, “Hello I would like to report a dead tub of lard in my room!” No reply, just a screen showing the local time and date “How do you use this thing?” my fingers slips hitting the button marked “0” and speaker

“Yes can i help you?” I drop the thing ‘Jesus Christ!”

                                                                       Part Four Darklord!

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2018, 05:53:21 PM »
Well, since you decreased my weight but increased it where it counts, I'll forgive my most undignified demise.

And for the umpteenth time, people, the soft in my name refers to the game, not to the hunter!
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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #12 on: May 28, 2018, 06:10:43 PM »
Well i tired to make you sound better to attract more female readers to you! ;)

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #13 on: May 28, 2018, 07:57:19 PM »
This is just amazing! I love it.   Next is my part. wheeeeee!

Seriously, very imaginative writing. Love the interplay with our real characters.  Good stuff. 

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Re: To Rebuild Our Future
« Reply #14 on: May 29, 2018, 02:11:05 AM »
This is wonderful, CHG! One of your most imaginative works!
I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!