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Offline AnimalKing

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Eat The Pain
« on: May 16, 2018, 11:54:39 PM »
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« Last Edit: July 05, 2018, 05:29:14 PM by AnimalKing »
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Pain, always pain.

Offline vile8r

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Re: Eat The Pain
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2018, 01:08:57 AM »
You have a great mastery with words! Really like this!
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I could rape your pussy, but I'd be in and out in a few minutes. So I choose to rape your mind, and I'll be inside you forever!

Offline AnimalKing

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Re: Eat The Pain
« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2018, 01:18:34 AM »
Thanks Vile8r, that's really cool of you.
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Pain, always pain.
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Re: Eat The Pain
« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2018, 05:32:32 AM »
Oh this begs to be made into a graphic novel so the pictures can aid the words. love the atmosphere of dread your words convey. Please as fast as possible continue this!
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Offline SoftGameHunter

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Re: Eat The Pain
« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2018, 11:40:15 AM »
Very poetic in its presentation. You've set a scene and a mood with very few words. Yes, do continue with more parts.
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The rumors about me are scurrilous, depraved rantings of a sick mind, and I categorically deny any sense of falsehood attributed to them.
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