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Stardustx
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« on: August 31, 2017, 07:03:01 PM »
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darklord
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2017, 08:43:03 PM »
Dark and intense story. Could be art imitating life in that part of the world.  Well done.
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Offline Sam
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2017, 08:54:10 PM »
Quote from: darklord on August 31, 2017, 08:43:03 PM
Dark and intense story. Could be art imitating life in that part of the world.  Well done.

yep, could be the israeli army in one of their routine operation in the occupied territories...
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gscmar64
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2017, 10:59:30 AM »
Great first story with the right amount of tension and pity for the characters. Definitely worth  merit for the fine read!
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2017, 11:38:27 AM »
Yes, very well done! Dark and graphic!
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #5 on: September 01, 2017, 02:05:06 PM »
This is the first story I've ever written so thanks for the feedback.  ::):  It's quite dark yes, I admit that I am sometimes the girl in the story in my fantasies, and sometimes it's me watching a much younger girl than in the story, (I didn't have the guts to make her any younger on here!) and it can get much darker in my mind I'm afraid!
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Re: Daddy, watch your little girl become a woman
« Reply #6 on: September 01, 2017, 02:24:06 PM »
RavishU doesn't have a fixed lower age limit for story characters, though a tag is requested for stories that feature the very young.

Good stuff.
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