Author Topic: Have you ever?  (Read 6485 times)

Offline Davidswill

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Re: Have you ever?
« Reply #15 on: October 23, 2017, 02:00:15 PM »
extremely hot. Go on with the story.

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Re: Have you ever?
« Reply #16 on: November 06, 2017, 08:17:03 AM »
BUMP!

I love the PoV on this one.  It's very inventive, represented as a Questionairre, to the reader, who's helpless to answer.  "Just nod, or shake your head."  So, it's extremely effective at putting the reader in her place.  The interrogator's, monologueing, bragging TBPH, and the menace is very palpable.  "Not yet, but you will be..."

Unique, one of the most unique stories I have ever read, because of how it's presented.  Especially how depersonalized, and how dehumanized the reader is, while the interrogator goes on and on about the depravities she's endured.  The reader is reduced to a pair of ears, to listen, or eyes to read it with the voice in our head.  It's maddening, at some point I found myself wanting to respond, as the bound and gagged nameless character would have.  Timed perfectly with the point in the confession where she's talking about begging for it.  To be raped vaginally to spare her anus.

Incredibly powerful.  Exceptional work.
« Last Edit: December 01, 2017, 06:57:03 PM by Psiberzerker »

Offline nolongerinnocent
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Re: Have you ever?
« Reply #17 on: November 14, 2017, 04:34:50 AM »
Wow!

I was gone for a bit and when I come back someone is actually reading my stuff! And so many nice comments!

Thank you, all!

Offline Groucho

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Re: Have you ever?
« Reply #18 on: November 14, 2017, 06:18:57 AM »
Wow!

I was gone for a bit and when I come back someone is actually reading my stuff! And so many nice comments!

Thank you, all!

Well its simply a great Story, still one of my favourite. So no Wonder it is still read

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Re: Have you ever?
« Reply #19 on: November 14, 2017, 09:13:36 AM »
Wow!

I was gone for a bit and when I come back someone is actually reading my stuff! And so many nice comments!

Thank you, all!

Where have you been my little whore?  It seems I need to punish you.  Wait, that just rewards you.  Oh what the Hell, a rewarding punishment it is.