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[EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« on: March 17, 2017, 03:08:20 PM »
So this has non-con, underage, incest, bestiality, BDSM, violence, snuff, early impregnation and many more grim concepts in it. So if you don't like that I'd advise not continuing this post.



With that out of the way, let me introduce to you my latest idea for a depraved universe. In this universe, a genetic mutation in the 1600s affected the human race. It caused females to be extra receptive to sexuality. They became hornier and also their senses were amplified. So amplified that even pain became pleasurable for them. Then they began to release fertile eggs earlier. At the age of 6. But they also had already developed wombs that could house a baby.

However, after they had given birth to a third child, all of the above effects left them and they returned to a normal female human being.

For the human race to counteract this, it evolved so that it's men had a stronger sexual attraction to young girls, and became extra fertile.

The extra fertility caused a population imbalance, and now there were four times as many females as males.

Evolution had a very pretty answer to this one:

Some men got sexual pleasure out of hurting or in some cases killing a girl.



Fast forward to the modern day. Our society has been shaped vastly differently by this mutation.

Women who had given birth to two or less children were treated as second-class citizens (or "fuckmeats", "cumdumpsters", "fuckdolls" or any of the other slang terms for them. The legal term was "Pre-Tri" or "P3" for short, meaning "Pre-Third Child") compared to everyone else. This included young children.

Women with three or more children receive a loveheart tattoo under their eye to indicate that they are not Pre-Tri scum.

It became legal to have sex in public, with any Pre-Tri available to you. It was also legal to kill a P3 with their owners permission.

Of course, it became pretty difficult for some girls to get pregnant. If you are carrying a child and a man punches you in the stomach, you're not having that child any more. Some girls went their entire life getting involuntary abortions.

Lastly, all celebrities were made infertile at birth. Unless you were infertile, most agencies don't want to buy you. Yes, P3's can be forced to work for you if you own them. This means that women like Ariana Grande, Katy Perry, Amy Adams and Kaley Cuoco are free to be fucked and beaten senseless at any of their performances, red-carpet events or even at their awards show. Every now and then, a celebrity is killed though.

How does this sound for a setting?

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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2017, 12:26:13 PM »
Sounds great to me. It could be a whole series. You certainly sound like you have the world built in your head, you just need to put it to the page.

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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2017, 08:43:37 PM »
So this has non-con, underage, incest, bestiality, BDSM, violence, snuff, early impregnation and many more grim concepts in it. So if you don't like that I'd advise not continuing this post.



With that out of the way, let me introduce to you my latest idea for a depraved universe. In this universe, a genetic mutation in the 1600s affected the human race. It caused females to be extra receptive to sexuality. They became hornier and also their senses were amplified. So amplified that even pain became pleasurable for them. Then they began to release fertile eggs earlier. At the age of 6. But they also had already developed wombs that could house a baby.

However, after they had given birth to a third child, all of the above effects left them and they returned to a normal female human being.

For the human race to counteract this, it evolved so that it's men had a stronger sexual attraction to young girls, and became extra fertile.

The extra fertility caused a population imbalance, and now there were four times as many females as males.

Evolution had a very pretty answer to this one:

Some men got sexual pleasure out of hurting or in some cases killing a girl.



Fast forward to the modern day. Our society has been shaped vastly differently by this mutation.

Women who had given birth to two or less children were treated as second-class citizens (or "fuckmeats", "cumdumpsters", "fuckdolls" or any of the other slang terms for them. The legal term was "Pre-Tri" or "P3" for short, meaning "Pre-Third Child") compared to everyone else. This included young children.

Women with three or more children receive a loveheart tattoo under their eye to indicate that they are not Pre-Tri scum.

It became legal to have sex in public, with any Pre-Tri available to you. It was also legal to kill a P3 with their owners permission.

Of course, it became pretty difficult for some girls to get pregnant. If you are carrying a child and a man punches you in the stomach, you're not having that child any more. Some girls went their entire life getting involuntary abortions.

Lastly, all celebrities were made infertile at birth. Unless you were infertile, most agencies don't want to buy you. Yes, P3's can be forced to work for you if you own them. This means that women like Ariana Grande, Katy Perry, Amy Adams and Kaley Cuoco are free to be fucked and beaten senseless at any of their performances, red-carpet events or even at their awards show. Every now and then, a celebrity is killed though.

How does this sound for a setting?

Wow I mean theres a lot of depth there to create this world, I'm interested....however msg me if youre interested in helping me put something like this together
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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2017, 07:02:06 PM »
Wow I mean theres a lot of depth there to create this world, I'm interested....however msg me if youre interested in helping me put something like this together


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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #4 on: March 20, 2017, 07:12:01 PM »
Yea Im putting together more stuff to send you about that.
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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2017, 07:46:20 PM »
great, thanks!

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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #6 on: May 20, 2017, 05:46:32 AM »
Lastly, all celebrities were made infertile at birth. Unless you were infertile, most agencies don't want to buy you. Yes, P3's can be forced to work for you if you own them. This means that women like Ariana Grande, Katy Perry, Amy Adams and Kaley Cuoco are free to be fucked and beaten senseless at any of their performances, red-carpet events or even at their awards show.

This part is simple enough: celebrities in our reality are celebrities in this parallel reality; easily enough done for a story.

However, how is this explained within the parallel universe itself? How do people know that Michelle Chapman, just born today, is going to grow up and become porn star celebrity Tori Black, and should therefore be made infertile?
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« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2017, 02:38:42 PM »
I love the setting. A couple of ideas:

Due to the imbalance of males and females, all girls (15 and older) are required by law to give birth to at least two boys by the time they become 25. They are required to prove  on a monthly basis, that they tried to get pregnant by having sex at least 15 times a month. So they need at least 15 CFs (confirmed fucks) in their "fuck book". This means every time they found a guy to have sex with them, they need the guy to confirm that by signing their fuck book. The guys can also rate the girls for their sexual qualities.

Should a girl fail to provide the 15 confirmed fucks for two months in a row she becomes an execution candidate. Meaning she can be legally killed by any guy at any time.

Imagine a world in which each girl between 15 and 25 is desperate to find guys who would fuck them, so just that they would reach their monthly quota....

Girls who fail to give birth to at least two boys are also publicly executed on their 25th birthday.

Those rules really helped keeping the female population over 25 in check. Also it helps the more attractive girls to stay alive, since the uglies never reach their fuck quota. As a result we're living in a world with mostly attractive girls under the age of the 25, which are constantly desperate to find the next cock in their pussy.

It didn't take long, until men figured out what desperate girls would be willing to do, for a "confirmed fuck". So instead of just having sex with them, they took advantage of the girls' desperation by forcing them into really fucked up torture sex. So imagine going into a snuff bar where a bunch of hot 15year-olds in slutty dresses hit on you, because they are already 5 fucks behind this month and desperately need  a couple of confirmed fucks in their fuck book. While you watch the live execution show of a beautiful 14-year-old on the stage, who gets machine fucked by a hydraulic fucking machine that thrusts the spiked dildo deeper and deeper into her tight teen cunt, you let 4 of the 15-year-old take turns riding on your hard cock. While one the girls rides your penis, the other three have to masturbate the muzzle of a revolver, that has 2 bullets in the 6 bullet drum.  If the girls want a chance of your cum inside their pussies they have to masturbate themselves to a genuine orgasm and pull the trigger... The first girl is lucky... as she cums and pulls the trigger with trembling fingers, it only clicks.... She swaps with the girl who just rode your cock.... the lucky girl will get her chance to make you cum inside her, while the other girl will have to play Russian Pussy Roulette, if she wants another chance. Only seconds later one of the other 2 teen girls moans to an intense orgasm and pulls the trigger. BAM! You can see her sexy belly rise from the hot gas that shoots through her womb. The bullet ripps through her body, exits through her back and hits an innocent 16-year-old waitress who was just giving a blow job to a another customer. 1 down, 3 to go. While you enjoy fucking the pretty girl on your lap, the fourth teen girl spontaneously climaxes as she sees her friend dying in front of her. Being in some state of shock she can't manage to pull the trigger within the time. According to the rules she will be executed later on stage to entertain the other guests of the snuff bar. Meanwhile the 14-year-old on stage finally died from the spiked dildo that fucked her as deep as her lungs. She is being replaced by two blond teen girls who enter the stage and will now compete in a masturbation contest with explosive dildos.  While you watch the two beauties desperately thrusting the deadly dildos in their sweet little teen pussies you feel your orgasm coming closer.

"If you want my sperm better finish now", you tell the remaining girl, competing for your cum... Only seconds later she closes her eyes and climaxes extremely hard... her trembling finger reaches for the trigger... you can feel your orgasm building up.... BAM! There goes another pretty teen girl, having herself shot through her teen pussy. As if this wasn't enough to make you cum, one of the pretty blond girls on stages finally manages to reach a genuine orgasm... Now the other girl has only 5 seconds to climax as well, or her dildo will explode. The audience of the snuff bar chants the countdown 5...4...3...2....1... boom! The explosion isn't strong enough to kill her instantly... instead her vagina explodes in a fountain of blood.... The sight of the exploding girl seems to have triggered a gigantic orgasm with the teen girl riding your cock. You can feel her tight pussy spasming around your hard cock... You could easily just cum as well... shooting your load inside her climaxing vagina. But since you're a real sadist you just push her violently off your lap... she falls backwards and slams her head against the table.... what a rude way to interrupt and ruin her orgasm. Then you point your hard cock at her face and shoot your large load all over her cute face. She looks at you in disbelieve...

"Well thanks for making me cum, bitch... but since I didn't iseminate your pussy I can't possibly have made you pregnant. Sorry, no confirmed fuck for you!", you laugh into her cum soaked face.

Then she reacts in the most humiliating way, by grabbing the sperm with her hands and rubbing it inside her teen pussy. Watching her desperately stuffing the cum between her wet pussy lips and begging you for the confirmed fuck signature is the most degrading thing you have ever seen....

Another wonderful evening at the snuff bar is about to end... before you go home you force a 17 year old cute waitress to masturbate with a bottle of champaign and crush the bottle inside her vagina right as she cums... with millions of small glass pieces insider her pussy, you force her to take a larger piece and cut off her swollen clit for you. Even though she complies under tears of pain, you decide to kill her anyway. Than you grab your coat and head home, where a bunch of disposable teen whores are waiting for you...



What do you think? Is that a nice way to make use of this "perfect" world? What would you have done in the snuff bar? I'd love to read your ideas and give me some feed back!




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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #8 on: May 20, 2018, 03:03:20 AM »
I'm not really into snuff, but the idea of a surplus of attractive girls 25 and younger being a bunch of desperate sluts is pretty hot.

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« Reply #9 on: May 21, 2018, 12:18:12 AM »
This story idea reverses how sexual demand works between the genders in our world, making male sperm an almost priceless commodity, which is an interesting twist indeed.    Also, in our world generally only male celebrities are actively sought after by women, while in this parallel world female celebrities seem to be fair game for abuse.   One other thing - you've made me want to do very bad things to Kaley Cuoco!    >:D
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« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2018, 12:32:19 AM »
This story idea reverses how sexual demand works between the genders in our world, making male sperm an almost priceless commodity, which is an interesting twist indeed.    Also, in our world generally only male celebrities are actively sought after by women, while in this parallel world female celebrities seem to be fair game for abuse.   One other thing - you've made me want to do very bad things to Kaley Cuoco!    >:D

I like that idea a lot. It chimes with an idea of mine of an alternative reality where females are born with a genetic defect which will kill them unless they receive a daily dose of fresh male semen. Between birth and puberty they require a daily dose and between puberty and menopause they still need a monthly dose. After menopause they just suck cock for fun if allowed. It means that only the most beautiful and sexually assertive females survive long and to stimulate male libido all sex offences have been abolished and all forms of pornography are actively promoted. Anything is permitted so long as needy girls get their daily dose of semen.  For example a group of men might rape a mother on the street while one of them feeds her little girl his cock to suck. The mother would be grateful for the gift of semen to her daughter.

Here is my opening paragraph:

It was a typical day in the County Maternity hospital. A beautiful blonde woman in her prime had just given birth to an equally beautiful baby girl. The midwife holds the baby while the doctor cuts the umbilical cord. He checks the baby for any defects. Thankfully there are none. He passes the baby to the beaming mother and turns to the father. “She will need an immediate dose of semen. Will you do it? Are you ready?” “Yes Doctor” the proud father replies. He takes off his pants and jocks and stands naked from the waist down at the side of the bed. A nurse cleans his cock with an antiseptic cloth and asks “would you like a VR mask? You can watch rape porn as you do it!” The father shakes his head and smiles. “No, I want to watch my darling daughter take my cock!” He bends over and kisses his wife. She turns in the bed and holds the baby girl ready for him. Two nurses stand either side of the father and guide his cock to the baby’s mouth. Instinctively she places her lips around the head and begins to suck. “She’s a natural!” Says her mother and everyone laughs approvingly. As the baby sucks on his cockhead the two nurses stroke the shaft of his cock to make him hard and whisper about child rape in his ears to turn him on. The mother holds the baby with her arms outstretched while the midwife ensures that the baby has the whole cockhead in her mouth. Nothing must be wasted. In less than two minutes the father climaxes and the baby swallows his gushing cum, sucking for her life on his cockhead. The baby is encouraged to keep sucking for a while longer, to ensure that the reflex is imprinted on her brain. Only then is the baby passed back to the mother to suckle on her breast.
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Re: [EXTREME] An idea for a parallel universe...
« Reply #11 on: August 05, 2018, 01:18:29 AM »
I'd live in this world  >:D

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« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2018, 04:41:45 PM »
Hmmm, I kinda love most of it except the fact that girls get pleasure from it. My idea of rape (or at least the style that I like) is that of forcing someone against their will. If their will is to be forced, it's not forced anymore. Great idea otherwise, though! I love a futuristic society where rape and slavery are somehow mixed into the limits of acceptability.

I think that the most similar thing we have in the real world is the Indian caste system where those of higher hierarchy can (and tend to) rape those of lower hierarchies without much consequence and it's instead considered by some to be a show of power and alignment with the establishment.

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« Reply #13 on: August 18, 2018, 08:22:48 AM »
Hmmm, I kinda love most of it except the fact that girls get pleasure from it. My idea of rape is that of forcing someone against their will. If their will is to be forced, it's not forced anymore.

Despite being raped, people still feel 'pleasure' during the act itself. Our bodies and minds don't just shut down completely. Despite that enjoyment, which is often the cause of so much guilt, humiliation, shame, and confusion after an assault, it's still rape - you're still being forced into a sexual act that you haven't consented too. Feeling pleasure during sex, even if non-consensual, does not mean it's not forced. It's still very much rape.

Unless you just worded that poorly and I'm misunderstanding what you're trying to say.
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« Reply #14 on: August 18, 2018, 08:39:26 AM »
Hmmm, I kinda love most of it except the fact that girls get pleasure from it. My idea of rape is that of forcing someone against their will. If their will is to be forced, it's not forced anymore.

Despite being raped, people still feel 'pleasure' during the act itself. Our bodies and minds don't just shut down completely. Despite that enjoyment, which is often the cause of so much guilt, humiliation, shame, and confusion after an assault, it's still rape - you're still being forced into a sexual act that you haven't consented too. Feeling pleasure during sex, even if non-consensual, does not mean it's not forced. It's still very much rape.

Unless you just worded that poorly and I'm misunderstanding what you're trying to say.

In our fantasy world non-con means that the victims do not experience any type of pleasure during rape etc...I believe you are describing what happen despite the rape IRL during and after a rape experience...
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