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Author Topic: desperately want this story written  (Read 846 times)
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« on: October 16, 2016, 10:11:50 AM »

Hello im looking for a story about a young girl who being unsatisfied with her body prays every night tobe desirable. Until satan answers her plea in rwturn for her servitude. Im looking for this to be dark depraved and putrid. With Snuff, blood, gore,betrayal, cum disgrace,NC, gangrape, intr, and just about every other code you can think of. Also i want the girl to be 13-15 inage
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« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2016, 05:52:37 PM »

That is an incredible idea for a story for sure.  Why don't you give it a shot?
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« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2016, 06:33:30 PM »

Hello im looking for a story about a young girl who being unsatisfied with her body prays every night to be desirable until Satan answers her plea in return for her servitude.

[I LOVE the sound of that...]

Im looking for this to be dark, depraved and putrid. With snuff, blood, gore, betrayal, cum disgrace, nc, gangrape, intr, and just about every other code you can think of.

[You were never really the sunny girl in school, were you? ;-) lol]

Also i want the girl to be 13-15 in age

[Now that part I like too :^) ]
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« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2016, 12:10:18 PM »

Wow! That would be an amazing story. Quite the challenge for even the best writers.
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« Reply #4 on: November 19, 2016, 04:30:35 PM »

   That is a very intriguing idea. I have a couple of questions. First, how does the girl feel about the tasks she is given? Is she grateful and willing or remorseful? Second, does she inherit some supernatural powers to use?
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« Reply #5 on: December 01, 2016, 10:57:09 PM »

  This reminds me of the closing scene of 'The Witch' in many ways.  

  Question: is this a situation where she continually prays and Satan eventually appears to her unprompted?  Or is she finally frustrated enough with the fact that she gets no answer from her prayers to upstairs that she decides to turn to the other side?
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« Reply #6 on: February 07, 2017, 06:52:02 AM »

Wish I had time to start a new story
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« Reply #7 on: February 19, 2017, 12:40:04 PM »

Done. See Amy's Satanic Deal, first three chapters with more to come, in Extreme stories.
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« Reply #8 on: March 13, 2017, 08:17:40 PM »

Well, sunnysara, if you ever check back in, I took your idea and ran with it. 80,000+ words over in the Extreme board. I don't know if it meets your idea of putrid enough; that's not a genre I usually do, but I think there's plenty of nastiness and bad behavior to go around.
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