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Torturing Tayla
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Topic: Torturing Tayla (Read 28017 times)
Skygazer
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Posts: 341
Merits 19
taraskysong@gmail.com
Re: Torturing Tayla
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Reply #45 on:
January 17, 2017, 08:35:57 PM »
Didn't end the way I expected it to, but it was a good ending.
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Life is love, love is life
archon1980
Undergrad
Posts: 764
Merits 23
Re: Torturing Tayla
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January 17, 2017, 09:16:06 PM »
Thank you for your comment.
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grendel
Graduate
Posts: 1,782
Merits 88
Depraved Sadist
Re: Torturing Tayla
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February 05, 2017, 06:00:31 AM »
archon,
this was very very good ... started it this morning and binged it. I am not usually into scat at all but this worked quite well. The only thing that makes me sad is that Amy got off so lightly. Gut shot and then ass raped as she bled out would have been better in my opinion. Maybe even let Tayla get a couple of licks in.
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Grendel
It's what they're FOR!
Grendel's Tales
archon1980
Undergrad
Posts: 764
Merits 23
Re: Torturing Tayla
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February 05, 2017, 07:38:51 AM »
I think Matt saw Amy as a threat to what he had planned for Tayla. The risk of her killing Tayla prematurely was too high. She had to go. Nevertheless, I'm g;ad you liked it.
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Psiberzerker
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Re: Torturing Tayla
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December 27, 2017, 01:46:26 PM »
LOL, I love the dolcett undertones in the twist ending chapter.
"That's a rather tender subject... Another slice, anyone?"
~Dr. Furter.
At least it wasn't with a pickaxe, in the Freezer.
"I told you I didn't do it."
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archon1980
Undergrad
Posts: 764
Merits 23
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December 27, 2017, 02:23:27 PM »
Glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it.
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LITERATURE: Tales of Ravishment, Fantasy Rape Stories, BDSM and other erotic visions
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Torturing Tayla