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« on: August 09, 2016, 01:24:39 PM »

Eight years ago, Michael Dalton was finally arrested and put in prison.  He was sentenced to 12 years but because of good behavior, and overcrowding, only served eight.  In his absence, most of his group were killed, or also in prison, some are on Death Row.  his girlfriend and her boy were killed in a drive-by shooting.  Michael's lost everything and he holds one person responsible.  Detective Peter Graham.  He breaks in to Graham's house to kill him.  As fate would have it, his beautiful brunette wife Carrie comes home.  Michael changes his plans.  He grabs Carrie and takes her right on her and her husband's bed.  Her daughter comes in from school.  He ties her up and puts her in the closet, before taking Carrie a second time.  He had planned to record his killing of Peter, but instead records his rapes of Carrie.  he uses them as leverage, threatening to make them public unless she meets him whenever and wherever he wants her.  After a year or two, he releases them anyway.  He doesn't kill her because he wants to ruin her families life. 

Obviously, there's rape. 
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Bondage, anal, oral, abuse, torture, humiliation, spanking.   Feel free to be as liberal with her punishment and sadistic as you like.  NO killing her though. 

As for looks.  Michael stands at 6'1", is kinda scruffy hasn't shaved in a couple of days.  Long brown hair pulled into a ponytail, an earning in his left ear, lots of tattoos (served eight years in prison after all)

Carrie stands at 6'5" brown hair with red hi-lights, toned, firm tummy, tight ass and pussy big breasts and clear skin, room - brightening smile. 
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« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2016, 01:05:27 AM »

Hello. If you're interested, I am accepting writing commission: http://ravishu.com/forums/index.php?topic=34587.msg231959#msg231959

Eight years ago, Michael Dalton was finally arrested and put in prison.  He was sentenced to 12 years but because of good behavior, and overcrowding, only served eight.  In his absence, most of his group were killed, or also in prison, some are on Death Row.  his girlfriend and her boy were killed in a drive-by shooting.  Michael's lost everything and he holds one person responsible.  Detective Peter Graham.  He breaks in to Graham's house to kill him.  As fate would have it, his beautiful brunette wife Carrie comes home.  Michael changes his plans.  He grabs Carrie and takes her right on her and her husband's bed.  Her daughter comes in from school.  He ties her up and puts her in the closet, before taking Carrie a second time.  He had planned to record his killing of Peter, but instead records his rapes of Carrie.  he uses them as leverage, threatening to make them public unless she meets him whenever and wherever he wants her.  After a year or two, he releases them anyway.  He doesn't kill her because he wants to ruin her families life. 

Obviously, there's rape. 
Also:
Bondage, anal, oral, abuse, torture, humiliation, spanking.   Feel free to be as liberal with her punishment and sadistic as you like.  NO killing her though. 

As for looks.  Michael stands at 6'1", is kinda scruffy hasn't shaved in a couple of days.  Long brown hair pulled into a ponytail, an earning in his left ear, lots of tattoos (served eight years in prison after all)

Carrie stands at 6'5" brown hair with red hi-lights, toned, firm tummy, tight ass and pussy big breasts and clear skin, room - brightening smile. 


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