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Author Topic: Respectfully yours, Sir  (Read 227 times)
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"Fight for what you believe in"


« on: February 10, 2016, 06:49:10 PM »

Dear Sir, I shiver with an inward cold
more cruel than frost or snow; may I be bold,
approach You with my selfish inner need
and beg of you the gift that I be freed
from all the aching squalls of my desire?
i yearn to be the wood cast on your fire,
burning to ashes that you may be warm,
a bratty schoolgirl, whom you may transform
into a willing slave of every want
that you may have. Baptise me in the font
of servitude! my life is incomplete,
unsatisfied, confused; Sir, i entreat
You to give meaning to my formless days,
and i will sing an endless song of praise
to You, my Lord. In utter gratitude
i'll serve you with the utmost fortitude,
obeying each command that you may utter,
cook, clean, work hard; in a low voice i'll mutter
how lucky i have been to find a Master,
how grateful that, out of the disaster
of former freedom that i once endured,
You changed me to a prisoner, immured
in the joyful cell of durance vile,
a living hell at which I smile.
O Sir, the chains with which You bind
this slave girl show her only that you're kind,
just as the whip scourging my naked skin
is a just punishment for all my sin.

i beg You, Sir, grant me the shining honour
of being Your slave. Respectfully Yours, donna
Author notes
Prompt - personal ad for sub seeking a Master

Kindness is what matters most
After that maybe sincerity
Be true to yourself
A condemnation out of ignorance is always unjust
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« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2016, 04:03:02 PM »

Good stuff!
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