Author Topic: Like Father, Like Son  (Read 8933 times)

Tony V.
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Re: Like Father, Like Son
« Reply #15 on: August 22, 2014, 06:46:44 AM »
I have to agree with suziC. For a first effort, this was extremely well written and exactingly detailed. It will be well worth the wait to read more from you!!


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Re: Like Father, Like Son
« Reply #16 on: August 25, 2014, 04:08:32 PM »
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                                  Sorry,   I don`t  believe this is your first!
                                                 If it is, go make sum money
                                                    good luck and get back to
                                                      the key board !!!!!!
                                                               Peace

Offline BabyDoll

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Re: Like Father, Like Son
« Reply #17 on: August 26, 2014, 12:09:50 AM »
That was a great story Charlie, wonderfully written. You definitely have the natural talent, can't wait for more of your stories! :)

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Re: Like Father, Like Son
« Reply #18 on: August 28, 2014, 07:33:11 PM »
Indeed, very good story with lots of potential, can't wait for the instalment.
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