Damn

[90lbsofdynamite]

So Anal_Buster is that a Damn that's fucked up or Damn I like that?

[90lbsofdynamite]

Somewhat reworked and changed the ending only a little. I did a self edit the work but it isn't a lot different.

So glad this popped back up.  Love your writing.  So intense.    The reworks only make it better.

You could edit anything. And write anything. Always have loved reading your stories

[90lbsofdynamite]

Dawn, if ever got to know me you could tell when I blushed, which I did when I read what you wrote!

[andypandy]

Just joining the choir that preys for a continuation. Your writing is so hot! Kristen has rested long enough! Cops will want their share. Then lawyers? Prison guards? Fellow convicts? 

Dawn, if ever got to know me you could tell when I blushed, which I did when I read what you wrote!

Women of color blush too. And it's fairly easy to spot..I'd love to see it too. Myself I blush entirely way too much and hate it

[amandablonde]

Fucking awesome Millie. One of the best rape descriptions I have ever read!

[90lbsofdynamite]

amanda,

Thanks so much for the kind words.

The descriptions of being raped come from deep inside me as long as the woman is hating the experience. If I write about enjoyment from it, it comes from another person experience. I think there is a mixture of the two in this story, if I remember correctly. Though not much enjoyment for for Poor, rich Kristen. I did a back story on this story, (not much of it shows here) which I should have worked into the story but didn't. Anyway, there was a reason she was on the wrong-side of the tracks (as they say in small town's around here).

At any rate, it means so much to me when people enjoy the effort I have put into a story. I still haven't improved the story as much as I had hoped for, I think I may have Pop's look at this one. He wont' like the subject matter though so maybe not!

Millie