Can't wait for more!!!! This story is really making me FUCKING HARD!!!!

yes... loving the story as well, can't wait for the next snippet given out ..

Will they or won't they ?

Are you serious ??? 

Thats an interesting attitude. Learning by watching the play .... Theatrical paedagogic ....
Okay, I am taking my seat and dutifully watch the show to begin ... 

[KellyJJ]

So far, very Hot! I'm wet for more

It could be interesting - if you would speed up a little bit... one can write a whole book in 3 months!!

Of course it is a very fine story !
Told you that already. So please just go on writing .... we are waiting !!

write more.. heheh .. we reading

Enjoying it so far.  be sure to use a little duct tape, don't want anyone to escape.

This is fantastic, It does a fairly nice job of helping me visualize the scenes.

Good

[ImAnnie]

I am, but with a real sense of disappointment.  When you started it appeared that the story would be about a sicko getting his  twisted revenge on a teacher by gang raping her in her home.  I especially wanted to see the playout of the part about blackmailing her with an illegal  website on her computer (not to mention the threat of downloading her forced sexual acts for her contacts).  I know you were encouraged to have the two daughter at home, but for me  that has  detracted from the story..  Not only am I not into underage rape, but so far you haven't focused on the blackmail that was promised.  The story had so much potential.  Maybe if you will agree, I could write an alternate universe version,  get the girls on the plane and and get on with revenge! 

I am, but with a real sense of disappointment.  When you started it appeared that the story would be about a sicko getting his  twisted revenge on a teacher by gang raping her in her home.  I especially wanted to see the playout of the part about blackmailing her with an illegal  website on her computer (not to mention the threat of downloading her forced sexual acts for her contacts).  I know you were encouraged to have the two daughter at home, but for me  that has  detracted from the story..  Not only am I not into underage rape, but so far you haven't focused on the blackmail that was promised.  The story had so much potential.  Maybe if you will agree, I could write an alternate universe version,  get the girls on the plane and and get on with revenge! 

Annie, I absolutely agree with you !

[andypandy]

Likewise. If the rapists are going for the kids instead of the mom, I'm no longer interested.