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« on: February 01, 2013, 04:08:40 PM »

Little bit of a filler story. A side story to another story I'm working on.
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He hadn't planned on doing anything that night. Just walking home. Sure, he happened to walk past the clubs as they were getting out, enjoying all the girls standing around in their tight skimpy outfits. There were always a couple of them crying, and a few more who were too drunk to walk. He knew at least a dozen were gonna home with some guy and get date-raped in his couch. The lucky few might not even remember it, but they'd all be back next Saturday night for more.

He actually smelled her before he saw her. That perfume. It got him hard immediately, and his mind went back to his brief encounter with Kim. She'd smiled at his as he held the door open at Starbucks - she was coming out, he was heading in. Beautiful smile, gorgeous eyes, soft, full breasts. They bounced gently with each step, and she was dressed in a way that you definitely notice them. In fact he was pretty sure she was smiling cos she knew he'd be looking at her breasts as she walked towards him. She clearly reveled in the attention.

And that perfume. He could still smell it even as he raced to the bathroom, unable to control himself. He jerked off hard, and came so hard he couldn't suppress a groan. He knew he was going to take her eventually, but he wasn't quite ready yet - still had preparations to make. But he closed his eyes and thought about enjoying that beautful smile and luscious breasts, again and again, taking her body for his pleasure. He was still shivering and trembling from his orgasm, even after he cleaned up and got back outside to his car.

That perfume. She walked past and it took him right back to Kim. She was walking quickly, by herself. Tight, red, dress. Didn't look back, trying to keep to herself, walking with a purpose. John closed his eyes and saw Kim's smile again, felt his cock twitch. His hand curled round the blade in his pocket, and he felt a rush of excitement. When he opened his eyes, she was half a block away. He smiled and started walking.

He was hungry. He didnt realize how much he craved her until he smelled the perfume. She was walking away quickly, wobbling slightly in her heels. The street lights glimmered on the wet pavement. He could walk her walk away all day - her ass rocking from side to side, hair flowing down her back. The sound of her heels on the sidewalk only turned him on more.

She was afraid now. Without looking back, she has picked up her pace slightly. It only made him more excited. The chase, the hunt. Toying with her. This was foreplay to him. He could still smell the perfume, and his cock was already slick with sweat and pre-cum. She was scared now. Every girl's worst nightnare. She was definitely trying to get away from him, but without making it look too obvious. John was enjoying himself now.

He came to a corner, and suddenly turned down a side street. Foreplay. He had to tease her just a little - and himself, too. He had a good idea of where she would be going - cab rank a block ahead. But he knew where he should meet her. A couple of darkened doorways, a small recessed hallway where he could satisfy himself, smell her perfume properly.

She slowed her pace, relieved. That creep had something off about him - she was worried what he would do. Thankfully he didn't look like the type who had the guts to actually say or do anything to her, but you could never be sure. Her feet hurt, she was desperate to get into a cab. Good night though, she had a lot of fun....

The next thing she knew she had been pushed into a corner and knocked to the ground. She was in a small doorway, out of sight of the road. Oh shit, oh shit, she thought. She looked up and saw him standing over her. He reached down and dragged her to her fight. He knocked the wind out of her and slammed her up against the wall, and quickly brought out a jagged blade and pushed it up against her throat. She could feel the points of the blade pressing against her throat, and instinctively went limp, struggling for breath.

'You move, or make a sound, I slash your throat and spend the rest of the night fucking your lifeless body in every hole I can fit my cock into' he hissed, quietly, but menacingly. She felt the bulge in his pants as he ground his hips against her.

'Oh god... no... please.. HELLlllpp....' she started to scream and yell but he pressed the knife harder against her throat and she had to stop - the pain was too much. She was worried that if she struggled too much he might cut her accidentally. The blade glinted in the shadows.

'You smell so pretty' he whispered. 'Just like her... just like her', he sighed. She felt him reach up under her skirt and his fingers close around the waistband of her panties. She stiffened and tried to push him away, but he pressed the knife against her neck and lent in further.

'You're too pretty for me to have to kill, sweety. I'd much rather have fun hurting you, make you beg and plead. Or you could stop struggling and I'd let you go in 2 minutes. 2 minutes or a lifetime of pain and scars on your pretty face... which would you prefer?'

As he said that, John yanked her panties down and heard them tear. The sound of tearing fabric always turned him on. Before he even realized, he spread her legs, and his cock was slidng up the inside of her thigh. She was damp with sweat  - she had been dancing hard - and he could smell sweat, a hint of pussy, fear, and that perfume.

He closed his eyes and thought of Kim. His cock instinctively found its way to her pussy lips, and he pushed forward. Her whole body was tense. She was whimpering now, gasping. Every muscle in her body was tense, including her pussy. She was trying hard to fight him off, but at the same time was too scared too move. Her pussy gripped his cock tight, trying to stop him forcing his way in. She was wet and tight and terrified, and he was so turned on that he knew he was gonna cum within seconds.

With his eyes still closed, he lent in, knife still at her throat, feeling her on his cock. Her perfume filled his nose. He saw Kim's swaying breasts again, saw her flash her smile, imagined himself deep inside her, imagined her on her knees with his cock in her mouth. Fucking her on her couch. On her bed. Tied to her shower rail. Pinching her nipples and watching her wince. Dressing her in that outfit from Starbucks and fucking her mercilessly until his cock wouldn't get hard any more.

She was sobbing now, whimpering. Her breasts pressed up against him. her body shuddering. He felt their hips meet.

'Please.... don't...' she whispered.

'You smell wonderful' he sighed, and had a sudden vision of Kim biting her lower lip as she ground her clit into his hips. He couldn't hold back any longer

His orgasm was so strong he stumbled forward and pushed up against her, landing awkwardly against the wall. Which only drove his cock deeper inside her. They leaned there in silence until his cock  had finished twitching inside her. He was trembling, shivering again. God that was incredible. She was silently crying now.

He had dropped the knife but it didn't matter now. He could still smell the perfume on her. Just like hers.

Quickly he pulled out of her and stepped back. She sank to to the floor, sobbing and gasping for breath. Even in the snatches of light from the street he could see that she was already dripping wads of his cum. He hadn't had cum that hard in a while.

He slipped away in the night... his entire body tingling, his cock singing, waves of release and pleasure still washing over him.

He could still smell her perfume...
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« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2013, 09:02:12 PM »

Smell is arguably the most emotionally evocative of the five senses. I think you made an excellent demonstration of the perpetrator conflating his victim with his stressor.
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"You are about to witness the ravishment of a woman who has been abducted...Although at first her reactions may lead you to believe that she is being tortured, quite the contrary is true, for no harm will come to those being ravished...Remember, you are sworn to observe silence. If you break this rule, you will be dealt with severely. So, with the knowledge that you are powerless to stop the performance, just relax, and enjoy yourself to the fullest extent." - Porn Classic, "Behind the Green Door"
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« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2013, 04:00:45 AM »

Hm....but I just love the smell of pussy...LOL

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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2013, 12:00:35 AM »

I stopped in to read myself a bedtime story before going to sleep, and now I'm wide awake! That story was wonderful. I love how he keeps complimenting her smell. While reading, as I do most stories, I imagined myself as her, and it kept making me feel so pretty and feminine when he complimented her about her smell. Also, the way he warned her nicely about the knife, and he complimented her again, stating that she was too pretty to kill. Lines like that make a woman feel so beautiful, even if they are being attacked. At that point, had this actually happened to me, I would be dripping, squirming, slightly moaning, and just dying inside. I would just melt if a man put his hands on me like that. By the way, the alleyway rape is one of my biggest fantasies, which is one of the contributing factors as to why I enjoyed this story so much, but don't allow that to shadow the other reasons. There is romance in this, -yes I understand how crazy that sounds, but to a woman like me (who digs this sort of thing), this is romantic in a way. He doesn't hurt her. He just wants her so bad. The only thing I didn't like was the line where he said "You smell just like her". It would be ok for him to come on to me thinking about Kim initially, but once he had me in his arms, I would want him to forget about her. However, I understand that he really liked Kim. I haven't read the relating story yet, but I hopefully will soon. Sorry for my reply being so long, I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this one. I love a sweet rapist. God, that's got to be the most awful / weird thing I've ever said! Goodnight.
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« Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 12:15:24 PM »

Glad you liked the story, BeautifulMind! I've been told by person-who-will-remain-unnamed that a lot of my stories involve degradation and rape out of spite or disdain or the sheer love of degrading... and yes, unfortunately I do get off on making women degrade themselves.

However, unnamed-person said that she liked my stories that were lust driven. The kinds where you just can't stop thinking about someone - every day, every night. where you get turned on my seeing glimpses of people who look like her. When you get turned on in the store cos you smell someone else wearing her perfume... where your work starts to suffer cos you can't think straight during the day and can't sleep at night. When you've been turned on for such a  long time that your cock is sore just from being erect for so long...

And suddenly you find yourself outside her window at 2am with a length of rope, not caring if you go to jail, just more turned on that you've ever been in your entire life, and knowing that you need to have her, whether she wants it or not...
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« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2013, 05:25:15 PM »

HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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