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« on: July 18, 2009, 10:21:21 PM »

      It was a pleasant Summer's afternoon, and Mary was taking in the therapeutic surroundings of her favorite stretch of forest as she went for a relaxing walk. A few miles of barely-trodden hiking paths stretched across the terrain behind her home, comfortably situated in a remote plot of land down a quiet country road well away from the crowded urban areas. Nothing but a narrow trail, spotted with patches of wild grass and protruding tree roots, cleaved through a dense wall of trees and overgrowth. The cicadas' incessant rambling and the occasional squirrels rustling through brush were all that could be heard for miles. It was a beautiful, private place; a place to which Mary would often come to let her mind water.
   She had been through these woods so many times, she was unhindered even as the trail became less clearly marked; passing through the weak spots in the dense overgrowth that would have been imperceivable to any casual observer, she cautiously started down a seep, eroded slope that led to her favorite meditation spot.

   Under more fortuitous circumstances, perhaps the seemingly impenetrable thicket would have effectively concealed her path. Such a thing would have been fortunate indeed, but tragically fate had been so unkind as to place an unkempt looking young man, who had been ducking behind a boulder some seven feet off the trail, in such a position as to have spotted her as she walked by. At first, the rustling of dead leaves and the snap of a twig under foot had driven him to duck for concealment in a panic, as he had retreated to this depth of the woods specifically to avoid being spotted by people. Primarily, this for the reason that the activity in which he was covertly taking part in was safely outside the realm of legality.

   Hurriedly stowing his verboten cache, he stepped out from among the trees and cautiously advanced towards the spot where Mary had vanished into the end of the trail. Crouching, he carefully maneuvered his way through the overgrown branches, careful to stifle and noise that might betray his presence.
Once through, and maintaining a low posture, he looked down the hill to just catch a glimpse of the attractive young woman through the foliage of the up-reaching trees as she strolled casually along, lost in thought and wholly oblivious to his stealthy pursuit as he quickly and quietly endeavored to trail her.
   Narrowly maintaining control of himself as he scurried down the steep incline, he quickly took cover behind a thick-trunked tree and peered out to catch his first good look of the girl: her long red hair flowed down to her lower back, leading his gaze to her perky buttocks, the round shape of which were clearly outlined by her tight-fitting jeans. She wore a grey t-shirt which hung loosely around her shoulders, leaving her black bra strap visible.
As he looked on, his attraction turned to sudden thoughts of lust, stoked suddenly by the realization of the immense solitude the forest afforded him, which after all was a factor in his original decision to sequester himself in this place. His idle, leering gaze was refocused with a new dark intent.

   Mary continued to amble along, pleasantly lost in a daydream of some sort, dragging her feet slightly and letting her arms hang loosely as drowsiness began to take hold in the potent summer heat. She remained completely unaware the shadow the followed behind her, keeping a distance so as not to be detected too early but determined to keep her in sight.
Finally she came to an opening; the barely extant trail gave way suddenly to an opening, where the grass gave way to a muddy shoreline which lead into a small river. While nearby could be heard the sound of water as it ran off a short fall, here the water was clam and it's surface resembled glass, with pollen and green leaflets staining it's surface.

   Taking off her sandles to more easily traverse the muddy ground, Mary was brought out of her daydream by a sudden sound of rustling. Thinking after a moment that it was a bit too large to have been a squirrel, she paused briefly and looked behind her just in time to see a large form rushing at her.

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« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2009, 10:22:21 PM »

With only a moment available before she was seized by the shoulders and thrown to the firmer ground on the very edge of the muddy shore, Mary let out a shrill, panicked shriek. Before even being able to process what had happened, she felt a weight on her stomach as the man straddled her, pinning her down. Immediately she felt a pair of rough hands grasping at her shirt, she batted futilely at her assailant, hitting his chest and arms even as she heard the fabric of her shirt begin to tear.
   As he grabbed her shirt and attempted to pull it up over her head, he spared one hand to grab her left arm and hold it so as to more easily slip the sleeve up. She used her free arm to bat at him frantically, but he soon grabbed that arm as well and pinned them both together over her head, and soon her shirt was up around her elbows as the back of it was caught between her back and the ground below. Her black brasier was now fully exposed, the straps beginning to slide down her shoulders amidst the struggle. She yelped and cried out as he forcefully lifted her torso from the ground, freeing her shirt before he began pulling it off, causing her to bend forward at an uncomfortable angle.

   Kicking and writhing beneath her assailant, Mary crossed her arms to block her breasts from the man's grasping hands as he gripped then both, rubbing and pushing them against each other. Still grasping and pawing uselessly at him, she felt a sudden coolness as her breasts were abruptly exposed to the open air; he had pulled it down so it was hanging over her stomach, one strap broken and the other hanging uselessly by her side. Her moaning was cut off as a sharp pain splashed across her face and her vision flashes white for a split second; the man slapped her two more times until her yelling gave way to suppressed whimpering.
As she instinctively used her arms to block her face, the man slid down to her thighs and grabbed greedily for the button on her pants; prying it open he immediately ripped down the zipper as she lay nearly still, only trembling with the effort of choking back her quiet sobs.
Throwing his leg off her, the man backed up and grabbed the ankles of her jeans, tugging and pulling they began to slide off. Suddenly regaining her senses, the girl began thrashing her legs free of her jeans, and even as the man made a move to slide his hand up her thigh to her crotch, she kicked him hard in the chest and he fell back into the mud.
Rolling over and scrambling desperately, Mary picked herself up and managed to narrowly evade the man's grasp as she ran away; his fingers grabbed the strap of her loose-hanging braw, and the force of his pull caused it to snap. She escaped however, and he he was left holding only the ruined bra by the strap.

   Blinded by panic and stripped down to her black panties, Mary's nerves burned with adrenaline and her heart's fervent beating felt like her chest would explode. She tore through the woods with no direction in mind, not heading toward the safety of her home but though the acres of untouched wilderness where not even her trails touched; she was utterly lost in a sylvan maze which until just moments ago had been part of her most private sanctuary, but now seemed more likely by the moment to become the site of the most nightmarish ordeal of her life.
   Mary ran with total disregard for the briars and branches which bit at her naked skin, thinking only of escape. For a moment it seemed this goal was within reach, but the sounds of branches snapping under heavy weight confirmed that her pursuer was still after her, and the sounds were becoming less and less distant.

   After what seemed like hours of indistinguishable green and brown blurring past her scratched face, Mary finally burst out of the edge of the woods and came into an open clearing, bereft of all but tendril-like wild grass. The grass' soft touch on her bare skin might have been more pleasant has she not been choking  with pure terror.
She had barreled about halfway into the clearing, before she realized with sudden horror that keeping to the woods would have provided some cover, and here she was utterly exposed and as visible to her pursuer as possible. Suddenly realizing her only chance lay within the concealment of the forest, she changed path and turned sharply to the left, hoping beyond hope that she reached the safety of the woods before she was spotted. She had no idea whether the man was close by yet.

   Stopping just at the edge of the tree-line she realized that she hadn't heard the sound of snapping branches or any hint that her pursuer was near in some time. Perhaps he had given up, or tripped and sustained injury? She scanned the edge from which she had first emerged, and nowhere did she see any sign of the man. Her heart lifted for a brief moment, she felt genuine hope return to her but for a second- but as she turned her face forward, she let out only the start of a scream before falling backwards at the sight of the man, having emerged from the woods and now mere steps away from her.

   She flipped over and scrambled desperately, but it was in vain as the man was immediately on top of her again. She wailed helplessly as the man used his small razor blade to snap the waist of her panties, immediately after which he flipped her over and held the blade to her face. Too terrified to move, the lay there and breathed heavily, staring into his face, as a smug expression came over him. Holding her head between his hands, he bent down and began kissing her, even as she tried vainly to push up away. Sucking her lips and sticking his tongue in her mouth, she tried to moved her face away as much as she could but his grip was too firm.

   Slowly his head began moving down her neck, and holding her by the neck with one hand, he began sucking her breast as he dropped the razor and with his free hand began ramming his fingers into her vagina. She let out a disgusted moan, pushing her knee up and trying to close herself off as best she could, he merely pulled her legs back open and reinserted his fingers, rubbing her clitoris vigorously. A feeling of disgust and abject shame washed over her; she felt filthy all over. She closed her eyes and gritted her teeth as suddenly the fingers were removed, and she tried not to think about the clicking sound of a belt being undone in haste and the subsequent zipping noise.

   The man quickly pulled his pants down, and finally releasing his grip on her throat. She bent her head back and gazed blankly up at the blue sky as the man pulled open her thighs once more and cracked her open, quickly then sliding his penis into her. Finally relenting, she let her arms rest limp and listless on the ground, as her body was rocked back and forth by his forceful thrusting. She could hear him grunting. She felt his manhood moving around inside her, realizing suddenly that in this time she had become quite wet. She looked down briefly; down between her breasts, nipples now perkily erect and still glistening with the stranger's saliva, she glimpsed her vagina, spread wide open and covered in silky red hair, and the man's erect penis ramming in and out of it.

   She closed her eyes and layed her head back down, not sure why she looked. She never anted to envision this ever again. The side of her face ground against the dusty ground as his thrusts got ever more forceful and quick. The sound of skin slapping on skin picked up in tempo as he began to breath and grunt heavily, thrusting harder and harder, faster and faster. Her hands grasped handfuls of grass as she realized with deepening shame she too was about to come. Suddenly his thrusting and grunting became even more quick, and with a shudder she gritted her teeth and shut her eyes tight as she squirted with an orgasm. At the same time the man pulled out of her and pumped his dick with his hand, spraying cum all over her stomach, a drop even landing directly on her bottom lip.

   The man fell back with a great moan, and his breathing gradually slowed down. Mary, naked and utterly violated, turned on her side into a fetal position, trembling and finally letting out a few short audible sobs. She covered her face with one hand, and fell into quick silent whimpering.
   After a while, the man stood up. Mary didn't bother to look at what he was doing, she just hoped that he would leave. However, the man had decided to take fuller advantage of his unique opportunity, and had no intention of letting Mary's suffering end so soon.
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« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2009, 10:23:15 PM »

At length Mary pulled her hand from her face and looked up. Through her tear-filled eyes, she saw that the stranger was now standing over her, fully nude. Closing her eyes and crying more loudly, she realized that it was far from over. The man's rough hands again grabber her shoulders, and hauled her up into a sitting position. Grabbing her hair with one hand, he stroked the shaft of his penis until it was again fully erect, and poked it into Mary's lips. She kept her mouth closed and turned her tired face away, fatigued and despaired, simply wanting to lie on the ground, simply wanting it all to end.
   But he jerked her hair and with a choked yelp, the poor girl's mouth opened seemingly on it's own. Immediately she felt and tasted the warm, hard shaft in her mouth, and he gripper her head and began rocking her head in a back and forth motion. Her nose running from her continuing sobbing, Mary gagged and choked as his dick rammed into her mouth, managing to gulp air in the brief moments she managed to open her mouth wide, as all but the head of the penis slid out of her mouth. Again she heard him begin grunting at an increased rate, which coincided with an increased speed at which he rammed her throat with his dick. Soon enough, hot fluid oozed down her throat and filler her mouth; it coated her tongue and flowed round her gums.
   Gently stroking her head, he encouraged her to swallow it, which she eventually did most of it. After that the man began putting his clothes back on, and Mary feebly spat out the last of the hot fluid. She had stopped wondering if this was the end. She was totally numb. She no longer cared about anything at all. Not the stranger, not what he might be thinking to do to her next, not what would become of her now that her world was utterly shattered. She just lay there, occasionally emitting a choking sob, and trembled now and again.

   Left alone at last, Mary remained curled and numb for several hours, falling asleep at one point. When she woke, the sun was much lower in the sky then when she had set out. Eventually she stood, shakily, but physically okay, and she figured she was somewhat lucky to still be alive. Or not.
   Gradually she navigated her way back to her trail. Back through the wall-thicket which might have been her protector is only she had out a little sooner, or a little later. But none of that mattered now, she figured. She spotted the torn remnants of her clothes one by one as she staggered tiredly back home, but she didn't bother to reclaim any of them. That had been her favorite brasier.

   Finally, reaching her back yard, Mary walked over to her house, and somberly climbed the back stairs to the door that lead to her kitchen. Climbing the stairs to the second floor, she walked into her bathroom, where in the bathroom mirror she could see her whole naked and ravaged body: her hair, disheveled and still with a few twigs and leaved clinging to it. Several drops of semen were still dripping down her body. Scratches and scuffs, and spots of dirt were all over her. Her eyes looked profoundly tired, with plainly visible lines beneath them that she hadn't noticed before. Silently she turned on the shower and stood, motionless as the water seemed to mockingly wash away the filth on her body, while leaving her feeling thoroughly filthy.

   After a few hours, during which she had sporadically came in and out of fits of wild sobbing and periods of queer, numb silence, she finally changed into some pajamas and went to bed. Normally she preferred to sleep in the nude, but the thought of being so utterly vulnerable was now something she couldn't bear the thought of. At some point she managed to fall asleep at last. But a few hours later, she was jolted out of a dreamless sleep. Hazy and disoriented, she looked around the utterly black room and thoughts of fear briefly flashed across her mind. Soon, however, she decided it was the day's earlier trauma that was making her paranoid.
No sooner had she set her head back down than she felt a rough, strong and cover her mouth, as another landed on her stomach and effortlessly slipped down her pants, where two fingers pushed their way into her vagina. She screamed, or would have, if the hand hadn't so effectively sealed her mouth. She felt a face right next to hers, heavy breathing on her cheek as a sadistic voice said:
"I didn't introduce myself earlier. My name's Jack. Hope you don't mind if I brought a few of the boys along?"
With that, she felt two sets of hands grab her ankles and wrists. Mary only stared helplessly at the featureless silhouette above her as the sound of snickering mingled with that of ripping fabric.

Suddenly she felt cool air cover her body.

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« Reply #3 on: July 20, 2009, 12:24:00 AM »

I like the way you write hundred. Good story.
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« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2009, 11:42:52 PM »

This was a really good well planed out story. I loved it!
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She knows just how to hold me
And when her edges soften
Her body is my coffin
I know she drains me slowly
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« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2009, 12:32:37 AM »

I agree with the other two replies! Wink
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« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2009, 01:01:42 PM »

I just LOVE rape in the forest. Home invasion following the forest rape is just icing on the cake.

Please write more.
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« Reply #7 on: March 05, 2010, 11:49:25 PM »

this story is awesome,... wish you'd stalk me in the woods for sure...
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« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2010, 03:30:54 PM »

Hundred,

I love your skill and ease of the English language.  Your vocabulary turns me on as much as your story.  You paint a fantastic picture and I easily slipped myself into your character and let myself live through your words.  I could feel every branch that broke beneath her feet as she ran, the pain of the earth as it dug into her flesh as you took her on the forest floor and the fear that overcrowded her mind while looking for escape.  Finally I became physically exhausted by the warmth of the orgasmic glow that disgusted her as much as it swelled and burned within me.  I feel a bit drowsy with desire still and want to read more of what makes me feel so alive and illuminated.

You can write for me anytime,

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