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Offline JayneDeviant

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Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« on: June 08, 2021, 02:44:50 PM »


All morning, he whined about not being able to go out into the deep end of the pool. In fact, he whined about everything.... The car ride was too long, the food wasn't good enough, he was too tired.... She'd spent a month's salary to afford this vacation. She just wanted to give her son something fun, a memory for the two of them to share. That wasn't too much to ask, was it?

According to Jimmy, it was. He was only seven years old, but was a terror. She dreamed about what it would be like to be without him, to be able to do whatever she wanted, whenever she wanted, to not be bound by him.

So she gave in. She let him go out into the deep end of the hotel swimming pool, on his raft. It was early in the morning and no one else was out. She lay the raft out, then punctured it with one of her long fingernails. "Okay, Jimmy, it's all yours!"

"Oh boy!" he shouted, and jumped out onto the raft. She kicked it out, so that it was floating out in the middle of the 9 foot deep pool. "Look at me, mommy! I'm a big boy!"

"Yes, you certainly are," she said, her pussy growing wet at the site of the air bubbles trickling out the bottom. "Mommy will be right over here if you need me. I'll be watching you. Oh yes, Ill be watching."
« Last Edit: October 08, 2021, 03:52:40 PM by JayneDeviant »
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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2021, 01:46:07 PM »
bruh

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2021, 04:36:45 PM »
wtf

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2021, 08:15:28 PM »
wtf

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2021, 10:34:08 PM »
I hardly consider it extreme, too. Funny little scene, picturing it in my head. In a pure fantasy sense of course, not actually happening.

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2021, 01:36:26 AM »
my balls are FILLED TO THE BRIM with piss, you cant believe how yellow they are, so yellow they fuckin glow in the dark bro, unbelievable

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2021, 01:48:00 PM »
I'd made the gif above for another site and just wanted to experiment with creating a short story around it, to see if the two would complement each other, as opposed to writing a story and then trying to find images to illustrate it with. Sorry to hear about your balls, I hope you find some relief.
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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #7 on: June 14, 2021, 03:48:08 PM »
 Nice! I like the uncaring mother theme. There’s something hot about a mom who gives up on her kid and doesn’t care anymore about his safety or wellbeing

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #8 on: June 16, 2021, 10:14:01 PM »
Thanks! Glad someone gets it!
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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #9 on: June 23, 2021, 09:33:38 AM »
Nice! I like the uncaring mother theme. There’s something hot about a mom who gives up on her kid and doesn’t care anymore about his safety or wellbeing

I second that!

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #10 on: June 23, 2021, 05:20:13 PM »
The image really sets off the story well.  The mothers is clearly excited by her son drowning and gets off on it.

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #11 on: June 28, 2021, 12:43:24 AM »
short but nice  8)

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #12 on: June 28, 2021, 01:55:46 AM »
I would like to see the image with different words, say with the woman's little daughter being pack raped in front of her.  Can the image be found without the words?
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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #13 on: June 30, 2021, 09:08:30 AM »
Love the evil mom motif. I used to follow a lot of blogs that made so many like this and they were always my favorites. I miss them so much so this really reached out and grabbed me. I hope you decide to do more!

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Re: Mommy Doesn't Care if You Drown
« Reply #14 on: June 30, 2021, 10:32:22 AM »
I would like to see the image with different words, say with the woman's little daughter being pack raped in front of her.  Can the image be found without the words?

Can't help with other text on it, but here's the gif without any.



Edit: her name is Kenna James bzw, if someone's interested in finding the whole vid.