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LITERATURE: Tales of Ravishment, Fantasy Rape Stories, BDSM and other erotic visions => Literature => Story Guidelines, Codes and Requests => Topic started by: somedude on September 29, 2006, 02:13:44 PM
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This is a thread I'd thought I'd start for anyone who has a question about writing erotica! Ask away aspiring writers!!! ::):
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How does someone still fairly new at writing stories continue to improve. I really feel a little more than inadequate when I see all of the great writers on these sites..Present company included. You guys totally blow me away. I know practice would be a given. Any other advice that could be helpful to my stories or writing styles?? Would certainly be appreciated sd...Thanks!
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Well it may sound cliche wolv, but just keep writing! Also look over your work critically, try to correct any errors you see and try not to make them the next time. Watch your punctuation, tense and point of view. Try to write better each time you write and don't be afraid to rewrite something till you get it right. Hope that helps!:)
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Well it may sound cliche wolv, but just keep writing! Also look over your work critically, try to correct any errors you see and try not to make them the next time. Watch your punctuation, tense and point of view. Try to write better each time you write and don't be afraid to rewrite something till you get it right. Hope that helps!:)
Can always count on you for some advice sd..You are 'da MAN
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You're welcome wolv! And thanks for asking the first writing question. Any other questions folks?
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I've seen your posts, wolverinefan, various places. You have a fine, lecherous imagination. The thing is to take what you fantasize and try to describe it others. Unless you're big into setting up the victim/characters/situation, don't take too much time/words with lead-in. Let's get to the action!
If you start with WORD or something, you can sit on the file for a while, and come back to it and see where you've got too much here, too little there, whatever.
Then run spellcheck, read it over for grammar and continuity* errors, and post it.
And you've got a story posted, you filrthy sonofabitch!
*That means giving her 34C tits in the beginning of the story, but then describing her 36DD tits in the middle of it.
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Is anyone ever going to ask anothe writing question?
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Is there a good way to flesh out a character without writing twelve pages about them? I get turned on by thinking about who two people are to each other, but I find that when I try to describe it, it's tl;dr ("too long, didn't read", in netspeak) -meaning it seems like it's over long; or at least longer than what I intend.
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Tell the reader only what they need to know about the character as it pertains to the story and do it in as few words as possible. In short stories especially you want to be brief and concise!
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I tend to write in quite a strange way...with lots of...instead of using correct puncutation...is that a problem?
They tend to represent pauses or gaps that would otherwise require more wordage that I think make the story/post/whatever harder to absorb, especially in a fast paced scene. Also, has anyone else been told that anything in brackets (parenthesis - such as this) are secondary to the sentence and therefore should either be dumped entirely or added to the sentence in a normal manner? My english teachers used to go gaga if anyone used them!
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Good questions! A lot of creative writing comes down to personal style! Using elipses...isn't a problem when you're using them to add flare and drama to a piece. I'm not a big fan of brackets in fiction myself, though they're very good in technical and other non fiction to add information and such to the work. So my opinion for fiction is that...is fine but (bracketed information and such) distracts from the flow of the story.
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:D Thank you Sir.
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You're welcome Miss Louise! ;D Please ask more questions when they occur to you!
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Ok... right now i am caught in the midst of writers block... its regarding that epic that im trying to pen, i know where i want to be as regards the conclusion of the first chapter...but every time i set out to get to that point im just writing dross that i delete... its like my mind knows where i am and where i want to be but im having trouble getting to that stage... i know that many times it is a personal thing but i was just wondering aloud as to ways that could help clear my mind and get me back on track..
Hope this kind of question is in the right place
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good question HC, I'm in the same boat, asking for the same advice
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WRITERS BLOCK!!!! *makes signs to ward away the evil* ;D Writer's block is a massive pain in the ass and comes in different forms! What you're suffering from HC is a sort writer's block...maybe you could call it head to page syndrome. Meaning you see it so clear in your head but can't get it write on paper, which is something every writer suffers from. There are a few ways to get through it. You can take a break from what you're writing on for a while to let your mind keep working on that part of of the story or you can keep writing away till you get it right or you can combine the two methods. Hope that helps ::):
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What you're suffering from HC is a sort writer's block...maybe you could call it head to page syndrome. Meaning you see it so clear in your head but can't get it write on paper, which is something every writer suffers from.
Yes thats exactly it... have all these thoughts going around but they seemed to get cluttered up as i try and get them down... thanks muchly SD, i shall try and put that into practice
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You're welcome HC! It's amazing I've had more questions in the last couple of days than I had for the rest of the history of this thread I think...
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Walks up to the teachers desk again... wearing a criminally short skirt and chewing on the end of my pencil...
actually i have a question regarding 'Intellectual' copyright... exactly how does it work and what cover does it give you?
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Well it varies a bit from country to country...the U.K. is a signator of the International Copyright Treaty...so it should give you full protection for anything you have written whether it is on paper or on a computer. Once you have actually created something in a tangible medium it is your unless you declare it public domain!
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Thanks SD ... thats pretty useful actually, i was curious where i stood on this HCx
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You're welcome HC! Understanding copyright laws is pretty important to being a writer ::):
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good question HC, I'm in the same boat, asking for the same advice
Need some help with the love scenes?
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actually yes, yes I do
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Walks up to the teachers desk again... wearing a criminally short skirt and chewing on the end of my pencil...
actually i have a question regarding 'Intellectual' copyright... exactly how does it work and what cover does it give you?
*tuts* look at that slut...teasing him like that, just looking for extra credit*
*Tuts even louder* the tutor didnt even try looking up her skirt!
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Maybe I was looking very subtly! ;)
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actually yes, yes I do
Well, Professor Tom, pehaps you can come to the writing lab and we'll see if there are any empty offices. Crosses and uncrosses legs, leaning forward seductively.
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Anyone got a writing question?
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Is there a chance, Sir, to get a critique on one of my stories and an opinion of what I did wrong....or right? :
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Post it here and I'll take a look at it ::):
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Thank you, somedude.
The Party
Following the party, I was very tired. Several of my friends stayed and helped clean up, so I was in good shape there. My feet were tired and I was ready to take my 3 inch heels off and soak in a hot tub. Moving into the bedroom, I stand stretching in front of the mirror, watching how my blouse strains over my firm breasts. I slowly unzip my skirt and wriggle it over my hips, exposing my black lace thong and black thigh highs. Unbuttoning my blouse, I see that my nipples are hard and showing through the black lace. My long light brown hair glows in the light and, although tired, my green eyes sparkle because of my party?s success. My body has always pleased me and I delight in the way men watch me?at parties, at work and on the street. I?ve never been shy about showing off, but men are not allowed to touch. A few of my friends say I?m a tease, but I don?t believe that. I am just saving myself for marriage and tell gentlemen friends that right away.
Going into the bathroom, I start to run the water and add the special body oil for relaxation. Turning my CD player on, the music is soothing and I start to move in time with the beat. I light several candles and turn off the lights. Putting my foot on the edge of the tub, I start to roll down the thigh high when something catches my eye. Startled, I look up into the eyes of a tall man dressed in black wearing a mask over his face. ?Turn the water off, sweetie.? I turn the water off and face you slowly. ?What are you doing here?? Your soft voice answered, ?I heard there was a party.? ?Well, the party?s over now. Please leave?, I say. ?Oh, I think our party?s just starting, sweetie,? I heard you say. You?re standing in the doorway, so I can?t get out. I look around, trying to find something I can use for a weapon, and find none.
?Come here, dear,? you whisper. I look into your brilliant blue eyes and don?t see any mercy or indecision. ?Please go away?..I?ll scream if you don?t go away,? I murmur, ?Please go. I won?t tell anyone you were here.? I hear you laugh as you motion me to you. My shoulders sag as I walk toward you, trying to think of a way out of this. As I get to the door you slowly move and take my arm to lead me into the bedroom. As we enter the bedroom, you pull my hands behind my back and tie them. The door to the hall is closed and locked. You lead me to the bed and sit me down, watching my cleavage, while you lick your lips. Taking a large knife from your back pocket, you trace the blade down my cheek and throat to my breasts, letting me feel the blade, but not cutting me. Placing the tip of the blade under the left strap, you slice through it and then slice through the other strap. Unhooking the single front hook, the bra falls away and my breasts spring free. Looking down I see the nipples are hard and I watch your hands fondle and twist them.
?Please don?t,? I beg, ?I won?t tell. Just go away and leave me alone.? A sharp slap across my face is my answer, as you growl, ?Shut up. I don?t want to hear you.? Grabbing my left leg, you tie it to the footboard. I try to kick and keep my right leg away from you, but it soon follows the left. You untie my hands, but quickly re-tie them to the headboard. Laying there spread-eagled, wearing only panties, thigh highs and heels, I can only imagine what is next. I hear you, but can?t see you, until you come into view with a blindfold in your hand. ?No, please, don?t blindfold me,? I cry as I thrash my head around trying to stop you from putting the blindfold on me. Feeling your hands on my head, all of a sudden, I can?t see. I scream until your hand goes over my mouth and you whisper in my ear, ?Stop screaming?you won?t get hurt if you do what I say.? Shaking, I stop screaming and you remove your hand from my mouth. I feel your hands on my breasts, kneading, rubbing and twisting. Your hands move down my body, and I feel the knife blade slide under the waistband of my thong and feel the material give way. The mattress shifts as you get on the bed and I can tell you are between my legs. Your mouth startles me, as you kiss my shaven mound and your hands start to open my pussy lips. I scream as I feel your tongue on my clit and, at the same time, feel your finger enter my pussy. I feel you move and find my mouth full of material and realize that you have put my panties in my mouth for a gag. Your fingers find my pussy again, while your tongue dances on my clit. One, then two fingers enter my pussy, while you lick and suck my clit. Stretching me gently, you add another finger and start to slowly fuck me. I can feel the juices flowing and you entering me deeper and faster. I feel so full and realize you have four fingers in me now. I hear you mutter, as the bed shifts again, and hear a zipper unzip. You kneel between my legs, bend over and whisper, ?I want to fuck you before I fist you honey?you?re so tight?don?t want to ruin that feel with a fisting.? I start squirming to keep you out of me, but you take hold of my waist and hold me still, thrusting fully into me, slapping your balls on my ass. I scream through my gag, as my virginity is taken.
?Oh, that was nice, sweetie,? I hear you say, ?I haven?t had a virgin in a long time.? You start fucking me faster and deeper, while you alternately suck and lick my breasts. You?re fucking me harder with each stroke and my body starts to shake with the force of your thrusts. I hear you moan a little, as you speed up again. I?m so sore and start to cry as you slam into my poor pussy. With a loud shout, I feel you shake and your cum spurts into my pussy, coating the walls. You collapse on my body, and I feel the fluids run down the crack in my ass. Your breathing slows along with your heartbeat, as I realize you are naked.
Feeling your lips on my cheek, I hear you say, ?Are you ready for round two, sweetie?? I can?t imagine what round two is and shake my head at you. ?You?ll like it, sweetie. I promise.? I feel you between my legs again and suddenly feel your fingers in my pussy. My pussy feels so full, you must have four fingers in me. ?You?re going to love this, honey,? you say, ?Wait until my whole hand is in there.? Your thumb slides in with your fingers and I can feel the rest of your hand slip into me, fingers spreading me. I feel your hand close into a fist, and start to fuck me with your fist. It hurts and I start to squirm and move around and try to get you out of me, but I can?t. You keep fucking me and the pain is so bad, my mind blurs and I loose consciousness.
When I wake up, I can?t hear you or feel you. ?So you?re awake again, sweetie,? I hear you say. ?It?s a good thing?.time for round three.? I hear you walk to the bed and sit down and stroke my thighs just above my stockings. ?Round three is very special, sweetie, you?ll like it. I don?t often have two virgin holes to play with.? Hearing that fills me with terror and I think I know what is coming. I start screaming through my gag, and pulling on my restraints, but it does no good. I hear you laughing as you say, ?It?s okay, sweetie, scream all you want. No one can hear you and you can?t get away. Just relax and enjoy this.? Your hand goes between my legs and I feel your fingers playing on my ass hole. I squirm and wriggle and try to keep you away, but I can?t. Screaming as your finger sinks into my hole, I feel you wiggling and stretching me. You stick the second finger in me and the pain is so intense, I scream again through my gag. Stretching and wiggling your fingers, I feel the third slide in me. ?ARGHHHHHHHH.? It hurts so much. Your hand slaps my ass hard as you insert the fourth finger in me and wiggle them around, stretching me wider. ?That?s not bad, sweetie. You should be ready for me.? I feel you move on the bed until you?re again between my legs. Placing your hands under my ass, you raise me a little and I feel the tip of your hard cock at the entrance to my hole. Slowly, but steadily, you enter me. It burns and I scream again and again, but you keep entering me until you?re fully lodged to the hilt. You stop moving and just stay still for some time. Then I feel you withdraw, only to thrust back in me harder and deeper. You begin to fuck me hard and deep, while I scream and moan into my gag, trying to dislodge it. If I could just plead with you?.you can?t know how bad it hurts me. I hear you laughing and can?t believe it. I struggle to get my hands and legs free, but you hold my body steady, while pounding mercilessly. I am so angry and terrified. Will you leave when you are done with this horrible rape? No family to check on me?.not due to work for 3 days?..no close neighbors. If I get out of this, I?ll have an alarm. I hear you groan as you shoot your hot cum in my ass, coating me. I can feel the cum drip down my crease.
I feel you move on the bed and again you sit beside me. You get up and go into the bathroom?I can hear you moving around. You sit back down and I can smell something, but don?t know what it is until I feel the pain on my nipples. I scream and jump and try to wriggle away, but the wax touches my nipples and I hear you laugh and say, ?It will be better if you don?t move, honey. It will hurt less.? You drip the wax down my belly to my mound and onto my pussy lips and then onto my clit. I?m screaming and writhing, but you don?t stop and the pain is bad. I start chanting to myself?go away, go away, go away, go away. You laugh as you get up again and I hear your zipper zip. Oh, my god, you?re really leaving. I want to laugh myself, but can?t. All of a sudden you take my panties from my mouth and I take a deep breath. I remain quiet, hoping I?ll hear you leaving. ?I just think I?ll take these with me, darling,? you say, as you remove the blindfold and I see you put my panties in your pocket. ?Please, untie me. Don?t leave me like this,? I plead. You look at me and smile and I don?t have a clue what you will do. You lean over and kiss my cheek, while you untie my right arm. Then you turn and leave. As you go out the door, I hear you say, ?It was a good party, sweetie. Glad I could come.?
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My question concerns Dialogue?
I constantly find myself writing what I want my characters to say followed by -- He Said Or She said at the end of each dialogue sequence, Is there a way around having to point out how said what or should I just take it for granted that the reader will know who said it ? ..
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That's a really good question Cole32! All writers can fall into just using said over and over again! Of course if you don't use some phrase to denote who said what your dialogue turns into a confusing mess no one can follow. So what I do is be creative with my dialogue, use different phrases and meld the dialoge and the action parts of the sentence so that they flow. Example:
"What do you want?" Angel demanded in her soft feminine voice. "Why am I here?"
Subgirl pinched the new slave's pink nipples sharply and as the girl gasped she told her, "To make you my slave honey!"
"Tina?!" the redhead gasped in shock as she obviously recognized her friend's voice.
Subgirl giggled and tweaked her victim's hardening nipples more. "The one and only. But here I am the Rape Mistress and from now on you will call me Mistress," she said.
Angel squirmed from the way her new mistress was tormenting her nipples and asked, "Why are you doing this to me?"
"Because I want to make you my bitch sweetie," the Rape Mistress replied and rolled and polled the other girl's tits so that she squealed. "I've wanted to make you scream and beg as my little slave girl since I first laid as on ya," she declared.
"But I'm your friend," Angel whimpered.
"You're my slave," Subgirl corrected and releasing her slave's nipples she slapped her face with one hand, then the other while telling her, "And you will always address me as mistress!"
Angel began to cry then, with tears flowing out from under her blindfold. "Please just let me go Tina," she begged.
"Now I must punish you for not callin me mistress," Subgirl said with a theatrical sigh because she very much wanted to punish her beautiful new plaything.
That's what I like to do, but every write develop their own style eventually!
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Thanks somedude, Will take it under consideration.
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Okay Somedude.....whats is the best point of view to use in any story to make it interesting?? The person the story is about or the other say watcher in the same story!!
Sorry..hope you know what I mean?? :-\
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Thank you, somedude.
The Party
Following the party, I was very tired. Several of my friends stayed and helped clean up, so I was in good shape there. My feet were tired and I was ready to take my 3 inch heels off and soak in a hot tub. Moving into the bedroom, I stand stretching in front of the mirror, watching how my blouse strains over my firm breasts. I slowly unzip my skirt and wriggle it over my hips, exposing my black lace thong and black thigh highs. Unbuttoning my blouse, I see that my nipples are hard and showing through the black lace. My long light brown hair glows in the light and, although tired, my green eyes sparkle because of my party?s success. My body has always pleased me and I delight in the way men watch me?at parties, at work and on the street. I?ve never been shy about showing off, but men are not allowed to touch. A few of my friends say I?m a tease, but I don?t believe that. I am just saving myself for marriage and tell gentlemen friends that right away.
Going into the bathroom, I start to run the water and add the special body oil for relaxation. Turning my CD player on, the music is soothing and I start to move in time with the beat. I light several candles and turn off the lights. Putting my foot on the edge of the tub, I start to roll down the thigh high when something catches my eye. Startled, I look up into the eyes of a tall man dressed in black wearing a mask over his face. ?Turn the water off, sweetie.? I turn the water off and face you slowly. ?What are you doing here?? Your soft voice answered, ?I heard there was a party.? ?Well, the party?s over now. Please leave?, I say. ?Oh, I think our party?s just starting, sweetie,? I heard you say. You?re standing in the doorway, so I can?t get out. I look around, trying to find something I can use for a weapon, and find none.
?Come here, dear,? you whisper. I look into your brilliant blue eyes and don?t see any mercy or indecision. ?Please go away?..I?ll scream if you don?t go away,? I murmur, ?Please go. I won?t tell anyone you were here.? I hear you laugh as you motion me to you. My shoulders sag as I walk toward you, trying to think of a way out of this. As I get to the door you slowly move and take my arm to lead me into the bedroom. As we enter the bedroom, you pull my hands behind my back and tie them. The door to the hall is closed and locked. You lead me to the bed and sit me down, watching my cleavage, while you lick your lips. Taking a large knife from your back pocket, you trace the blade down my cheek and throat to my breasts, letting me feel the blade, but not cutting me. Placing the tip of the blade under the left strap, you slice through it and then slice through the other strap. Unhooking the single front hook, the bra falls away and my breasts spring free. Looking down I see the nipples are hard and I watch your hands fondle and twist them.
?Please don?t,? I beg, ?I won?t tell. Just go away and leave me alone.? A sharp slap across my face is my answer, as you growl, ?Shut up. I don?t want to hear you.? Grabbing my left leg, you tie it to the footboard. I try to kick and keep my right leg away from you, but it soon follows the left. You untie my hands, but quickly re-tie them to the headboard. Laying there spread-eagled, wearing only panties, thigh highs and heels, I can only imagine what is next. I hear you, but can?t see you, until you come into view with a blindfold in your hand. ?No, please, don?t blindfold me,? I cry as I thrash my head around trying to stop you from putting the blindfold on me. Feeling your hands on my head, all of a sudden, I can?t see. I scream until your hand goes over my mouth and you whisper in my ear, ?Stop screaming?you won?t get hurt if you do what I say.? Shaking, I stop screaming and you remove your hand from my mouth. I feel your hands on my breasts, kneading, rubbing and twisting. Your hands move down my body, and I feel the knife blade slide under the waistband of my thong and feel the material give way. The mattress shifts as you get on the bed and I can tell you are between my legs. Your mouth startles me, as you kiss my shaven mound and your hands start to open my pussy lips. I scream as I feel your tongue on my clit and, at the same time, feel your finger enter my pussy. I feel you move and find my mouth full of material and realize that you have put my panties in my mouth for a gag. Your fingers find my pussy again, while your tongue dances on my clit. One, then two fingers enter my pussy, while you lick and suck my clit. Stretching me gently, you add another finger and start to slowly fuck me. I can feel the juices flowing and you entering me deeper and faster. I feel so full and realize you have four fingers in me now. I hear you mutter, as the bed shifts again, and hear a zipper unzip. You kneel between my legs, bend over and whisper, ?I want to fuck you before I fist you honey?you?re so tight?don?t want to ruin that feel with a fisting.? I start squirming to keep you out of me, but you take hold of my waist and hold me still, thrusting fully into me, slapping your balls on my ass. I scream through my gag, as my virginity is taken.
?Oh, that was nice, sweetie,? I hear you say, ?I haven?t had a virgin in a long time.? You start fucking me faster and deeper, while you alternately suck and lick my breasts. You?re fucking me harder with each stroke and my body starts to shake with the force of your thrusts. I hear you moan a little, as you speed up again. I?m so sore and start to cry as you slam into my poor pussy. With a loud shout, I feel you shake and your cum spurts into my pussy, coating the walls. You collapse on my body, and I feel the fluids run down the crack in my ass. Your breathing slows along with your heartbeat, as I realize you are naked.
Feeling your lips on my cheek, I hear you say, ?Are you ready for round two, sweetie?? I can?t imagine what round two is and shake my head at you. ?You?ll like it, sweetie. I promise.? I feel you between my legs again and suddenly feel your fingers in my pussy. My pussy feels so full, you must have four fingers in me. ?You?re going to love this, honey,? you say, ?Wait until my whole hand is in there.? Your thumb slides in with your fingers and I can feel the rest of your hand slip into me, fingers spreading me. I feel your hand close into a fist, and start to fuck me with your fist. It hurts and I start to squirm and move around and try to get you out of me, but I can?t. You keep fucking me and the pain is so bad, my mind blurs and I loose consciousness.
When I wake up, I can?t hear you or feel you. ?So you?re awake again, sweetie,? I hear you say. ?It?s a good thing?.time for round three.? I hear you walk to the bed and sit down and stroke my thighs just above my stockings. ?Round three is very special, sweetie, you?ll like it. I don?t often have two virgin holes to play with.? Hearing that fills me with terror and I think I know what is coming. I start screaming through my gag, and pulling on my restraints, but it does no good. I hear you laughing as you say, ?It?s okay, sweetie, scream all you want. No one can hear you and you can?t get away. Just relax and enjoy this.? Your hand goes between my legs and I feel your fingers playing on my ass hole. I squirm and wriggle and try to keep you away, but I can?t. Screaming as your finger sinks into my hole, I feel you wiggling and stretching me. You stick the second finger in me and the pain is so intense, I scream again through my gag. Stretching and wiggling your fingers, I feel the third slide in me. ?ARGHHHHHHHH.? It hurts so much. Your hand slaps my ass hard as you insert the fourth finger in me and wiggle them around, stretching me wider. ?That?s not bad, sweetie. You should be ready for me.? I feel you move on the bed until you?re again between my legs. Placing your hands under my ass, you raise me a little and I feel the tip of your hard cock at the entrance to my hole. Slowly, but steadily, you enter me. It burns and I scream again and again, but you keep entering me until you?re fully lodged to the hilt. You stop moving and just stay still for some time. Then I feel you withdraw, only to thrust back in me harder and deeper. You begin to fuck me hard and deep, while I scream and moan into my gag, trying to dislodge it. If I could just plead with you?.you can?t know how bad it hurts me. I hear you laughing and can?t believe it. I struggle to get my hands and legs free, but you hold my body steady, while pounding mercilessly. I am so angry and terrified. Will you leave when you are done with this horrible rape? No family to check on me?.not due to work for 3 days?..no close neighbors. If I get out of this, I?ll have an alarm. I hear you groan as you shoot your hot cum in my ass, coating me. I can feel the cum drip down my crease.
I feel you move on the bed and again you sit beside me. You get up and go into the bathroom?I can hear you moving around. You sit back down and I can smell something, but don?t know what it is until I feel the pain on my nipples. I scream and jump and try to wriggle away, but the wax touches my nipples and I hear you laugh and say, ?It will be better if you don?t move, honey. It will hurt less.? You drip the wax down my belly to my mound and onto my pussy lips and then onto my clit. I?m screaming and writhing, but you don?t stop and the pain is bad. I start chanting to myself?go away, go away, go away, go away. You laugh as you get up again and I hear your zipper zip. Oh, my god, you?re really leaving. I want to laugh myself, but can?t. All of a sudden you take my panties from my mouth and I take a deep breath. I remain quiet, hoping I?ll hear you leaving. ?I just think I?ll take these with me, darling,? you say, as you remove the blindfold and I see you put my panties in your pocket. ?Please, untie me. Don?t leave me like this,? I plead. You look at me and smile and I don?t have a clue what you will do. You lean over and kiss my cheek, while you untie my right arm. Then you turn and leave. As you go out the door, I hear you say, ?It was a good party, sweetie. Glad I could come.?
You've got a pretty good story here kissyface! But you need to work on your punctuation, capitalization and paragraph structure. You have a lot of question marks that don't need to be there too! You need to do some editing and rewriting:)
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Nice story..enjoyed it!! ::):
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Okay Somedude.....whats is the best point of view to use in any story to make it interesting?? The person the story is about or the other say watcher in the same story!!
Sorry..hope you know what I mean?? :-\
You mean first or third person! First person is good for a certain depth of character...you know what the character is feeling and thinking in their own words. Third person is more narrative in style and allows for more flexibility in the story, such as switching between characters point of view with each scene and the like. Personally I prefer third person, though I will write in first if the story calls for it!
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You've got a pretty good story here kissyface! But you need to work on your punctuation, capitalization and paragraph structure. You have a lot of question marks that don't need to be there too! You need to do some editing and rewriting:)
Thanks, SD
But I didn't put the question marks there. Don't know how they got there. But I could send you the original and the question marks are not there.
I appreciate the comments.
KF
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You've got a pretty good story here kissyface! But you need to work on your punctuation, capitalization and paragraph structure. You have a lot of question marks that don't need to be there too! You need to do some editing and rewriting:)
Thanks, SD
But I didn't put the question marks there. Don't know how they got there. But I could send you the original and the question marks are not there.
I appreciate the comments.
KF
The Question marks aprear if you copy and paste it from word.
it replaces all the " and ' with ?
hope that helps...
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Thank you, Cole. I HATE Word.
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your welcome kissy gald i could help.
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You've got a pretty good story here kissyface! But you need to work on your punctuation, capitalization and paragraph structure. You have a lot of question marks that don't need to be there too! You need to do some editing and rewriting:)
Thanks, SD
But I didn't put the question marks there. Don't know how they got there. But I could send you the original and the question marks are not there.
I appreciate the comments.
KF
You're welcome kissyface! I hope they helped ::):
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Cool third person huh?? Thanks very helpful Somedude!! :emot_kiss.gif:
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You're welcome Sindy!
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Okay and sooo SORRY!! : But have a Dumb question and need some help please?? Anyone at all! Have just done a story on my new,micro soft word and i dont know how to convert it to text so as to send it here!?
Any advice will be greatfully umm rewarded! ;D >:D :emot_kiss.gif:
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File -> save as; then click 'save as type' and choose 'plain text'.
It will ask you if you want to convert it to windows text, MS-DOS or some other encoding. You can just hit 'enter' to go with the default of windows encoding (if you want to read the file properly on a linux system, though, you'll want to choose 'other encoding' and then either choose UTF-8 or US-ASCII, I don't remember which).
Another way would be to ctrl-a (for 'select all'),ctrl-c (copy to clipboard) and then open notepad and hit ctrl-v (paste from clipboard) and then file->save as.
[edit] To simply post here, you could do the same thing as you would to make a file in notepad; except that instead of pasting your text into notepad, you would start a new thread and then post your text in the message box.
Be careful with that, though, because sometimes pasting from word will mangle the text (certain punctuation marks will show up as ??); one way to get around that would be to save the text in notepad and then close notepad, re-open the file (so that any formatting is lost) and then ctrl-a, ctrl-c again and then post that into a new thread.
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Wow!!! thanks Nathan will give it a try...Thank you for your answer is a lot of things to try. Will give it a go but may just type whole thing here!
THANKS for your help dear! :emot_kiss.gif: :emot_kiss.gif: